Notice Board by claudia becerra montoux

Hello, I'm Claudia.

luzurrutigoity — 2024-06-01 15:17:47 UTC

I have been helping in an animal shelter in Luj[an de Cuyo for 5 years. I have been to Chile once to collaborate in a charity event organised by UNICEF.

Caritas has been raising money for food and clothes to people in a difficult situation

2024-06-01 15:20:22 UTC

Great! The sentence is perfect! I wish you could have written more sentences.

Claudia.

2024-06-01 15:23:00 UTC

We have helped people to give food and clothes.

We have voluteered in three events of charity at church.

I have been to Chile twice to help people in a hospital.

(Charity events). Good job!!!

She has been helping in an animal shelter since 2017.

I have been collaborating in a church for 2 years.

We have been volunteering in a hospital to help nurses for one week.

Great work! Thank you for taking the time to participate. It seems you truly understand the use of tenses.

Claudia.

Mercedes y Walter

2024-06-01 15:27:29 UTC

Hello! Thank you for particpating! you made some mistakes, but the overall text is good.

Dogest is (no in)
organisation that helpS (simple present)
dogs from the street not of the street (you also can say stray dogs)
it is a student not an (remember we use an when the following word begins with a vowel)
The studentS have organised to help..
that approach to their university

Great job!

Claudia

Lucca Paez

2024-06-01 21:16:15 UTC

I have been helping in a "Catedral" church, singing in the choirs, arranging the microphones, speakers, assembling the stages and sets.
I did that for 6 years

Hello Lucca! Thank you for participating. Your first sentence is great! In the second one, you used the simple past. Remember that you had to write sentences using present perfect and present perfect continuous. 
Good job!
Claudia

Fernando Moyano

2024-06-02 18:20:29 UTC

Hello! You did a great job! Your dog must be really happy with you.

You made some mistakes:

It is rainy night not rainning night.

In this sentence: but since then, its life has changed. "its" shouldn't be in capital letters because it is after a comma, it is not a new sentence. The same in this one: Now, it has been...

Thank you again for participating, and keep on taking care of your dog.

Claudia.

Enzo

2024-06-03 14:40:53 UTC

My mum and I have been donating my old clothes to the church since I was a child.

Also, when I was about 16 years old, we decided to donate my toys to a child in our neighbourhood.

Hi Enzo! Thank you for sharing! The first sentence is perfect, but in the second one you used the simple past. Remember you were supposed to use present perfect and present perfect continuos.

Claudia

Pablo, the most charitable person

nelsonscariot96 — 2024-06-07 20:35:50 UTC

Pablo is my friend and He´s the most charitable person I´ve ever met.

("he" shouldn't be in capital letters because it is not at the beginning of the sentence)

We´ve been friendS for 5 years. In (During) this time (I)learned a lot form him. (Don't forget the subject in the sentence)

He helps to differentes persons. He helps in churches, soup kitchens, (to) friends and family. (different people) (Remember that you were supposed to write sentences using Present Perfect and Present Perfect Continuous)

In the last time (omit), He´s been helping in a popular library. He´s been carrying books, clothes and food. Also, He´s been reading books to the children. (You shouldn't use capital letters in this case bcause "he" is not at the beginning of the sentence) GREAT JOB!!

I admire Pablo. He´s a grat person! (great: spelling mistake)

Nelson.

Hi Nelson! Thank you for sharing! Your friend Pablo seems to be a great man indeed!.

You've made some mistakes. Please let me know if I haven't been clear with my corrections.

Claudia

Greenpeace NGO

2024-06-07 22:14:16 UTC

The NGO protect the environment and have volunteers. I have had in Greenpeace for 2 years, and I have been doing conferenced for environmental problems like plastics in the oceans.

María Natalia Muñoz.

2024-06-07 22:38:07 UTC

I have helped once in an church event, (in) a christmas dinner for homeless (the homeless or homeless people).
I also have been participating in cyber activism for greenpeace for more than 10 years. (Greenpeace is a name so it is written with capital letters)
My children have been colaborating in (with) donations for a charity organized by their school, for many years.
My classmate has been colaborating with a priest in a church for more than four years.

Great job María Natalia! I've corrected the few mistakes you made. You did great! Thank you for participating.

Claudia.