P2 PSA Critique by Amanda Umberger https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA Photo 1 Period 2 - Final Project Critique en-us 2020-11-04 18:39:42 UTC 2025-12-02 06:38:43 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4f8.png Make sure you are Logged In! amandaumberger https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/891387631 First thing you need to do is log in to your g.highlineschools.org account so that you can leave critique for your classmates and receive credit for this portion of the project!]]> 2020-11-04 18:59:06 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/891387631 Give the Photographer Feedback on their Project! amandaumberger https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/891388574 Try to give feedback that points out something they did well and something they could do differently to make their work stronger next time!

Use sentence stems like: 
"I really like how you used..."
"Your images really make me feel..."
"I can easily see the story in your images because..."

and

"I wonder if..."
"What if you tried..."
"I think it would be stronger if you..."]]> 2020-11-04 18:59:18 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/891388574 Leave Critique for at least 5 classmates! amandaumberger https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/891389423 Every student should receive no less than 3 comments on their work from different students. Try to go to as many student's websites as possible and give feedback to everyone!]]> 2020-11-04 18:59:30 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/891389423 i like how you used white light to clear you picture and moodboard really match with what are you trying to do 50020521 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895220911 2020-11-05 18:14:41 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895220911 4008914 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895222747 I like how you had your subject inside a store. I think it would be stronger if you used more of the photo techniques (rule of thirds, negative space, etc..)]]> 2020-11-05 18:15:05 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895222747 4030054 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895228003 I like how clear your message is in each of your images

]]> 2020-11-05 18:16:15 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895228003 4008914 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895239102 I like how you turned down the exposure on your pictures to get a "dark" feeling. I think it would be stronger if you tried out more techniques and added a few more images. ]]> 2020-11-05 18:18:41 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895239102 4005953 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895240311 i like how you used a topic that most people won't talk about and is very creative plus nice pictures]]> 2020-11-05 18:18:58 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895240311 i like you used different places for photography 50020521 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895244206 2020-11-05 18:19:50 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895244206 BuniBoi https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895247746 I like how your messages are really present in your pictures, but a couple of the photos look more like snapshots that composed photos.]]> 2020-11-05 18:20:37 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895247746 4005953 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895249222 i like how you used a topic or issue that is relatable to
 ]]> 2020-11-05 18:20:57 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895249222 4030054 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895250478 I think your topic is great. Some of the images would be better if you could have a less distracting background.]]> 2020-11-05 18:21:13 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895250478 4004586 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895251933 I like how focused the main subjects are and how the background is blurry.]]> 2020-11-05 18:21:32 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895251933 I like how your artist statement is very thorough and explanatory. Maybe trying different photo techniques like rule of thirds or capturing motion would make your images stronger! overall though your final project is great!! 4010120 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895255916 2020-11-05 18:22:26 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895255916 4008914 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895256116 I like how you placed your subject in different areas and how there were quotes added onto the images as well. I think you can improve by having your subject smile in one of the images to make these words "They could be at their all time low disguised in this facade, and you would have never known." more prominent. ]]> 2020-11-05 18:22:29 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895256116 it is important to always remember people 4033396 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895259139 2020-11-05 18:22:57 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895259139 I can easily see the story in your images because there are is a strong meaning with how they are posing as well as the words. 4025077 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895262186 2020-11-05 18:23:24 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895262186 i like how your images stick with black and white and you used really good facial expressions in your photos 4040038 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895263614 2020-11-05 18:23:42 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895263614 BuniBoi https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895267513 I think you did a really good job at showing the part of domestic violence that most people don't think of and I think you have a really strong message.]]> 2020-11-05 18:24:31 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895267513 i like how you used a mixture of 2 picture 50020521 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895268737 2020-11-05 18:24:47 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895268737 really love the way you explained your images by putting the paragraphs separately after each photo. very good quality pictures as well! 2515548 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895269221 2020-11-05 18:24:54 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895269221 5002314 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895272577 i like how your images tell a story and are easy to understand]]> 2020-11-05 18:25:38 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895272577 4030054 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895273522 I love your topic and what you've decided to done with it. I think your images are in great focus and are very powerful. It would be better if you've used rule of thirds.]]> 2020-11-05 18:25:50 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895273522 4004586 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895273919 I like the lighting in your images and how none are too underexposed or overexposed.]]> 2020-11-05 18:25:56 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895273919 4008914 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895275967 The message is very clear in your images. I like how you took two separate images and merged them together. I think taking more images would help with the images being overused. Overall you did a really nice job.
 ]]> 2020-11-05 18:26:25 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895275967 BuniBoi https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895282142 I think you did a really good job taking your photos and I like how in the last one you made it look darker/ less saturated, which helped add to the image.]]> 2020-11-05 18:27:47 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895282142 Mikah i loved everything about this! Your artist statement was so strong ! and you did such a good job of executing your ideas into these beautiful images!! the only critique i have would be to frame your images better as in make the subject fit the fame in a clean fashion. 4010120 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895284080 2020-11-05 18:28:14 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895284080 very good way of showing your topic in your images! i personally think for the last picture you should zoom into the hands with hand sanitizer, but totally up to you! very good 2515548 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895288239 2020-11-05 18:29:08 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895288239 4030054 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895291354 I like the lighting of your images. I think your project would be a tiny bit better if you had used images that doesn't look so similar]]> 2020-11-05 18:29:49 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895291354 i like you used picnic theme 50020521 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895292172 2020-11-05 18:30:00 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895292172 i like how you explain each of your images 5002314 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895295277 2020-11-05 18:30:40 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895295277 i love you used black and white theme i can clearly see you massage what are you trying to do 50020521 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895299735 2020-11-05 18:31:40 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895299735 BuniBoi https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895303648 I like how you took picture inside a store and I think you could make some of you images stronger by using more photo techniques.]]> 2020-11-05 18:32:31 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895303648 Your images are so strong, you did a great job at executing them. i think it would've been even stronger if you showed a variety in experimentation to try and portray domestic violence in different ways. But what you have now is already done so well!! 4010120 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895304380 2020-11-05 18:32:41 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895304380 you can really tell the story behind your photos, and they all look in focus. 4040038 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895304503 2020-11-05 18:32:43 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895304503 Beautiful Artist Statement! amandaumberger https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895306435 I wish we could have seen your images for this project but I think your statement is very well written and is definitely of great importance!

]]> 2020-11-05 18:33:10 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895306435 4004586 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895307513 I liked your images but maybe you could've used a different message for each image.]]> 2020-11-05 18:33:24 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895307513 4005953 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895308819 i like how you made it realistic and shows how serious the topic is, nice job

]]> 2020-11-05 18:33:41 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895308819 BuniBoi https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895315146 I think you did a good job at capturing what depression can look like and I like how you included a hotline in your photos.]]> 2020-11-05 18:35:04 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895315146 l really love the expression 50020521 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895315688 2020-11-05 18:35:11 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895315688 4030054 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895317702 I love your artist statement and how great you did at explaining your topic. I just think that it would've been better if you had more focus in your subject and not zoom out so much. Other than that, you did amazing.]]> 2020-11-05 18:35:34 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895317702 2515548 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895320912 this is my favorite. you show exactly what you represent, and took them showing the reality of it. i think you should of added how embarrassing it could be to, but its up to you! i love it though.]]> 2020-11-05 18:36:11 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895320912 2515548 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895334698 i love it! i agree with you, people should love who they want, although there's hateful people in the world who don't agree even if its not there life! id say you should of taken more images that actually match the story, i didn't see them get hurt like it said in the text. although you did an amazing job.]]> 2020-11-05 18:39:03 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895334698 4033396 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895335856
It looks like it is realistic I like it and it looks good]]> 2020-11-05 18:39:18 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895335856 i think your images definitely portray your topic. the background is a little distracting in some pictures, but overall i think you did a great job of displaying your ideas 4010120 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895338476 2020-11-05 18:39:50 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895338476 4030054 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895344230 I like your artist statement and how in focus your images are. I think it would be better to have more than 1 subject in an image to show how BIG littering is. Great job!]]> 2020-11-05 18:41:01 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895344230 your images are very crisp and clear, and they most definitely show your topic. I think if you got more in depth about your topic in your artist statement, it would really pull the images and their meaning together. 4010120 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895347168 2020-11-05 18:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895347168 Abbie Z https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895350864 I really like how you showed both sides (cover up & reality) it expressed a-lot of emotion , the lighting was perfect and I like how you used negative space on the other half of the image.]]> 2020-11-05 18:42:25 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895350864 2515548 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895358133 you represented very well! as someone who has it, your not alone. i love how you show the pics as a way of showing how we all hide the hurt person we actually are deep down.]]> 2020-11-05 18:43:59 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895358133 4030054 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895359507 I like your message in each image. I think it would be better if you use the techniques like, rule of third or just trying out different angles.]]> 2020-11-05 18:44:16 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895359507 Abbie Z https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895360977 Very strong topic also strong statement you made. It was easy to pick up emotion through your images. ]]> 2020-11-05 18:44:36 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895360977 4005953 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895362530 i like how you used the black and white images, very organized and nice over all

]]> 2020-11-05 18:44:56 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895362530 very creative way of showing your images! you used a theme color to match the deepness of it. you matched your images the way you were talking about, but in a uniquer way. 2515548 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895368698 2020-11-05 18:46:10 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895368698 4005953 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895370899 i like your message and how you used facts on the mask , good job

]]> 2020-11-05 18:46:38 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895370899 4030054 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895375816 You've done a great job at showing how harmful abuse can be by making your images black and white. It's like how the victims may view the world. Amazing job!!]]> 2020-11-05 18:47:37 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895375816 I love your concept! amandaumberger https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895379799 Deforestation is a really important topic, I just wish the header image was a bit more in focus, it seems a little blurry.]]> 2020-11-05 18:48:21 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895379799 2515548 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895391634 i like the filter used in the images! you represented exactly how it feels like to be alone.]]> 2020-11-05 18:50:45 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895391634 5001574 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895507525 Nice topic. I like how you included clear images that not only show what is happening, but it makes people reflect on it.]]> 2020-11-05 19:15:42 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895507525 5001574 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895526709 I like how you made the images more dramatic and more realistic by using black and white theme]]> 2020-11-05 19:20:00 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895526709 5001574 https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895543657 I like how the the images show clear body language and show clear emotion in each picture]]> 2020-11-05 19:23:52 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/895543657 I really like the concept of your project and your words were very well written. It would have been a treat to see some of your own images and what you would have created to fit this topic. https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/898363343 2020-11-06 17:13:35 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/898363343 I like the concept of your topic, and it is very interesting how people do spend most of their life doing the same things over and over. Maybe try to include a wider range of activities that, while happen often, are a bit more creative. https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/898378341 2020-11-06 17:17:05 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/898378341 I like your idea and the importance behind it. Maybe try and take some photos that can represent this topic that are not just chopped down trees; look for things that you can use and ways that you can take photos that would fit into your category. https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/898395722 2020-11-06 17:21:14 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/898395722 I appreciate the concept of your images, as it is something that isn't talked about much. https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/898418184 2020-11-06 17:26:40 UTC https://padlet.com/amandaumberger/P2PSA/wish/898418184