Irish Lit: by https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb Translations Movies Backchannel en-us 2018-10-09 18:37:56 UTC 2018-10-11 17:52:45 UTC hello@padlet.com 1. Identify 2 aspects of the movie that worked well. micdsrams https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290949129 2018-10-09 18:43:16 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290949129 2. Make one suggestion on how the movie could be improved. micdsrams https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290949284 2018-10-09 18:43:29 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290949284 Who was walking into school in the beginning shot? https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290952973 Someone has really good handwriting too]]> 2018-10-09 18:49:53 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290952973 Two aspects that worked well: https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290955365 The combination of text, music and scenes

Make a suggestion on how the movies could be improved?
One way that the movie could be better is if the sound of wind is taken out.

]]> 2018-10-09 18:54:00 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290955365 good use of music https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290956046 good editing

]]> 2018-10-09 18:55:10 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290956046 Great use of text and landscape shots https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290956368 Fix the wind ]]> 2018-10-09 18:55:49 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290956368 The flowing of the music greatly adds to the dramatic effect of the play, including the words during intermissions. https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290956393 2018-10-09 18:55:51 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290956393 ahoward44 https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290956435 I liked the black screens]]> 2018-10-09 18:55:56 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290956435 https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290956521 1. The movie consisted of very good blocking and camera angles. 

2. The movie could be better with the wind]]> 2018-10-09 18:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290956521 two aspects that worked well are the fading in and out when presenting messages and blocking. https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290956706
I would have taken out the scene with the wind.

]]> 2018-10-09 18:56:26 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290956706 https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290956814 music does a good job of making everything intense 

]]> 2018-10-09 18:56:41 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290956814 good use of dramatics https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290956821 2018-10-09 18:56:42 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290956821 Good use of props wjones7 https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290956846 2018-10-09 18:56:44 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290956846 Tone of the color is good https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290957000 2018-10-09 18:57:02 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290957000 Music matched well with the action wjones7 https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290957014 2018-10-09 18:57:03 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290957014 sound/editing wise maybe spend more time making voices louder or music a little quieter https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290957028 2018-10-09 18:57:04 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290957028 skastor https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290957081 Probably should've taken out the windy sound in the background]]> 2018-10-09 18:57:10 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290957081 skastor https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290957229 Intensity in some of the scenes was used very effectively
Communication between certain characters was implemented very well]]> 2018-10-09 18:57:27 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290957229 https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290957314 Good acting, really gives the audience a sense of the play

]]> 2018-10-09 18:57:37 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290957314 good choice of quotes to emphasize https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290957342 2018-10-09 18:57:40 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290957342 little more content and lines https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290957350 2018-10-09 18:57:41 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290957350 Good change in music sbuchanan10 https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290957580 2018-10-09 18:58:06 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290957580 I like the music in the background music, though the sunniness makes it weird. https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958269 2018-10-09 18:59:32 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958269 little windy, hard to hear https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958304 2018-10-09 18:59:35 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958304 https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958317 good scenery and use of quotes.

Increase volume on characters speaking]]> 2018-10-09 18:59:36 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958317 camera shot it very good https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958377 2018-10-09 18:59:43 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958377 skastor https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958396 1. Great shot of Ahmid at the beginning
2. Impeccable usage of the environment

Suggestion: Shorter quotes are needed, and there isn't much variation with tone]]> 2018-10-09 18:59:45 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958396 good lighting https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958432 2018-10-09 18:59:49 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958432 good camera work https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958445 2018-10-09 18:59:51 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958445 shots are too long https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958456 2018-10-09 18:59:52 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958456 https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958482 1. The movie does a good job with blocking and quote choice

2. the movie could improve on the lighting]]> 2018-10-09 18:59:54 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958482 good dramatics/script/use of quotes https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958492 2018-10-09 18:59:55 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958492 good use of Mr. George https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958581 wind is loud yeah ]]> 2018-10-09 19:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958581 too long of quote, not enough time to read https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958598 2018-10-09 19:00:10 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958598 Little Jimmy Jack https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958617 2018-10-09 19:00:12 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958617 talking to fast https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958657 2018-10-09 19:00:16 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958657 https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958921 Good quote choice and voice overs. Maybe you could fix the angle of the cameras at times because you couldn't see everyone in the shot.]]> 2018-10-09 19:00:45 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290958921 not looking at each other when talking https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959053 2018-10-09 19:01:00 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959053 music is a little loud https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959081 2018-10-09 19:01:03 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959081 Ollie! https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959140 2018-10-09 19:01:11 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959140 good music for dramatic purposes but a little overpowering https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959171 2018-10-09 19:01:14 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959171 music too loud, can't hear talking https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959239 2018-10-09 19:01:20 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959239 https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959291 needs more flowing quotes in the transition]]> 2018-10-09 19:01:27 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959291 Did they have denim jackets at the time that this book was taking place? https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959372 2018-10-09 19:01:39 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959372 Reading is a bit fast. https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959663 2018-10-09 19:02:04 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959663 Dean George has an amazing voiceover voice. https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959715 2018-10-09 19:02:10 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959715 Good blocking wjones7 https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959856 2018-10-09 19:02:25 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290959856 S O F T https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290960320 2018-10-09 19:03:23 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290960320 cool rain beginning https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290960970 2018-10-09 19:04:41 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290960970 Stutter https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961008 2018-10-09 19:04:44 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961008 Good blocking wjones7 https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961045 2018-10-09 19:04:48 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961045 I really enjoyed the scenery and how it relates to the words being spoken. https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961073 2018-10-09 19:04:53 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961073 wow great scenery https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961110 and music (scary) love some CG ]]> 2018-10-09 19:04:58 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961110 Good narration https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961125 and tracking shots. Music sometimes overwhelms the dialogue. ]]> 2018-10-09 19:04:59 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961125 fantastic rain usage https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961145 2018-10-09 19:05:02 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961145 The music is overly used in gaming videos. https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961169 2018-10-09 19:05:05 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961169 WOW! https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961188 2018-10-09 19:05:07 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961188 The use of dark clouds is excellent. https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961190 2018-10-09 19:05:07 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961190 good landscape shots https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961225 2018-10-09 19:05:12 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961225 https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961226 Good scenery and music

]]> 2018-10-09 19:05:12 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961226 Nice narration, Ross! ahoward44 https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961250 2018-10-09 19:05:15 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961250 thats a powerful man https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961317 2018-10-09 19:05:25 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961317 holy block quote https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961402 2018-10-09 19:05:34 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961402 skastor https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961418 Very nice use of weather
Great variety of shots, especially with the scenery

It feels more like the opening paragraph of an essay being spoken aloud rather than a film trailer]]> 2018-10-09 19:05:36 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961418 too many shots of the fields https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961492 2018-10-09 19:05:45 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961492 feels a bit like a documentary more so than a trailer https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961539 2018-10-09 19:05:51 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961539 great music https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961678 2018-10-09 19:06:05 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961678 music is a little loud, but good music https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961794 2018-10-09 19:06:21 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290961794 EXCELLENT actin wjones7 https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290962020 2018-10-09 19:06:52 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290962020 jump shot is distracting skastor https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290962034 2018-10-09 19:06:53 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290962034 cutting from walking away to him talking was a bit strange https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290962035 2018-10-09 19:06:53 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290962035 love the reactions finn https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290962103 2018-10-09 19:07:01 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290962103 mediocre camera work https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290962412 2018-10-09 19:07:38 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290962412 sheesh chill guys https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290962559 this is very solid]]> 2018-10-09 19:07:58 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/290962559 Pretty intense throughout. Plus the last scene was really cool https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/291878406 Suggestions. Better Chosen quotes?]]> 2018-10-11 17:51:46 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/291878406 SOFFFTTTTTT https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/291879040 2018-10-11 17:52:45 UTC https://padlet.com/micdsrams/dtddqvwe1onb/wish/291879040