Thúy An - L5 by IELTS A&M

PROCESS

boostyourvocabaandmielts — 2024-07-05 08:55:41 UTC

Intro: Paraphrase

Overview: How many steps/ beginning and finishing steps.

Body 1 + 2: Describe the process step by step

linear

cyclical

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Note:

Mention every steps
Use sequencing language: first/ at the beginning of the process, second, then/ following/ final stage of the process, next
Grammar: Present simple --- Passive voice
Vocab: use words mentioned in the diagram

TABLE

boostyourvocabaandmielts — 2024-07-05 08:56:50 UTC

Intro: paraphrase

Overview: trend, Luxembourg >< Australia

Body 1 & 2

Advantages and Disadvantages

boostyourvocabaandmielts — 2024-07-05 08:57:20 UTC

INTRO: It is argued that.... In my opinion, advantages > disadvantages

Body 1: Disadvantages

Inconvenience: disruptive, inconvenient --> frustration
Overwhelmed Public transportation: crowded -> provide opportunities for crime such as pickpocketing, sexual harassment.

Body 2: Advantages

Environment: less vehicles --> Less fumes --> protect the environment
Less traffic -> more space for walking, cycling, outdoor activities --> sense of community

Conclusion: Advantages > Disadvantages

HOMEWORK

boostyourvocabaandmielts — 2024-07-05 09:09:07 UTC

thuyanhcmussh — 2024-07-05 09:34:55 UTC

The given table illustrates the payment/ salary progression for secondary and high school teachers in 5 countries namely Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Japan and Korea in 2009.

Overall, the amount of salary paid for secondary and high school teachers witnessed an upward trend in accordance to period of time. In addition/ It can also be seen from the table that the teachers' salary in Luxembourg was the highest among 5 countries ~~showed the much faster to get maximum than in other countries.~~

thuyanhcmussh — 2024-07-05 09:59:40 UTC

The DIAGRAM shows the steps in manufacturing bricks which are used in construction.

Overall, BRICK MANUFACTURE IS A LINEAR process WHICH includes seven steps, starting with digging clay from THE ground and finishing with delivering bricks to customers.

thuyanhcmussh — 2024-07-05 10:31:54 UTC

It is argued that some cities should have vehicle-free days ~~when private vehicles are banned from the city center,~~ and encourage residents to ~~people are encouraged to~~ use public transportation during these days. In my opinion, the advantages of this policy far outweigh the disadvantages.

Admittedly, there are several disadvantages associated with having private vehicle-free days.

However, I believe that that the benefits of having vehicle-free days are more significant than the aforementioned drawbacks.

While there might be some inconveniences during vehicle-free days for those who heavily rely on their car, these drawbacks are far outweighed by the long-term benefits.

In conclusion, it is my belief that

boostyourvocabaandmielts — 2024-07-05 10:45:09 UTC

FANBOYS

For
And --> additionally/ moreover/ furthermore
But --> However
Or --> otherwise
Yet
So --> Therefore

Không viết tắt

Topic sentence --> Supporting sentence --> Examples

Task compare

thuyanhcmussh — 2024-07-05 15:49:33 UTC

It is argued that some cities should have vehicle-free days and encourage residents to use public transportation during these days. In my opinion, the advantages of this policy far outweigh the disadvantages.

Admittedly, there are several disadvantages associated with having private vehicle-free days. Firstly, by using public transportation such as buses, taxis, or the metro, it would be more inconvenient. Passengers totally rely on the working hours of these means of transport, which might cause frustration and less independence in travelling. Secondly, public transportation is also overwhelming these days. As the result, the crowded can provide opportunities for crime such as pickpocketing or even sexual harassment.

However, I believe that the benefits of having vehicle-free days are more significant than the aforementioned drawbacks. In terms of the environment, having vehicle-free days could reduce fumes which help save the pure atmosphere. Residents who live in the city center would be provided with more public spaces for walking, cycling, or other outdoor activities. Therefore, people can have a sense of community today.

In conclusion, it is my belief that vehicle-free days with its numerous benefits should be encouraged in future.