Add your post according to the language use strategy you would like to improve on.

Indicate the examples of what you would like to use.

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Indicate which part of the writing you would like to use your new strategies in.

Create a short sentence to show how it can be used.

Stormed - moved angrily or forcefully in a specified direction.

Pursuit - the action of chasing or pursuing someone or something

(Describing a problem)

Tom was at a lost on what to do. However, without hesitation, he stormed off in pursuit of the thief.

Wrenched - to snatch away forcefully

Building the climax

I wrenched the ball away from him

lack of tidiness.

"Clothes were strewn across the floor, and empty snack wrappers lay crumpled on the desk."

bolt: To run away suddenly and quickly.

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Excitement: Instead of "I was excited," try, "My heart raced, and I could hardly sit still, bouncing on my toes as I awaited the big news."

Showing: My heart raced, and my palms felt clammy as I peered into the dark hallway.

Notice how the second sentence uses sensory details to convey fear. How might you apply this technique to your own writing?

Luminous: Giving off light

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Luminous: Giving off light

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meaning: announce something officially

Declared

Blared - Loud and harsh sound

Describing a character action

John bolted out of the classroom, heart racing, as the fire alarm blared and smoke filled the air

Dash - to indicate a break in thought

Building the climax

She took a dash of hope as she opened the letter, heart racing, unsure of what the words would reveal.

Her heart raced as she clutched the letter, her hands shaking and her breath coming in shallow gasps.

meaning

This sentence shows that the character is anxious or nervous without stating it directly. The physical reactions—racing heart, shaking hands, and shallow breathing—convey her emotional state vividly.

ascend 一 to rise; to go up; to climb up

Run

sprint 一 ​to run or swim a short distance very fast

Drink

quench 一 to drink so that you no longer feel thirsty

" My heart raced, and I could feel the sweat trickling down my back.

Nervousness: My palms were slick with sweat as I glanced at the clock, each tick echoing in my ears.

Fear: A cold shiver ran down my spine as shadows danced ominously on the walls.

• Sight: Vibrant colors of the movie poster.

• Sound: Crunch of the popcorn.

• Smell: Warm, buttery scent.

• Taste: Smooth, sweet flavor of the popcorn.

• Touch: Implied through the warmth of the popcorn

A dove often symbolizes peace.

My heart raced, and heat surged through my body as I clenched my jaw tight, glaring at him with fury in my eyes.

Circumambulate=to walk around something ritually or deliberately.

He promenaded at the mall, like an ordinary but friendly person.

She circumambulated around her home, as she has mysophobia.

Happy : She/he jumped up and down , clapping her/his hands as he/she received a gift from her mother , unable to control his excitement

Anger

Show, not tell

She stood there, fuming, her breath coming in short gasps as she glared at the mess he had left behind.

that mean it is very beautiful.

Example: The distant sound of laughter echoed through the park, mixing with the cheerful chirping of birds and the soft rustle of leaves.

that means it is very peaceful.

As she stumbled, gravity pulled her down, her heart raced, and she felt the rush of air against her face as the ground rushed up to meet her.

lt was a beautiful day

The sun beamed down,casting a golden glow on the blooming flowers,while a gentle breeze whispered through the trees

Crashed-heightens the dramatic effect of the storm.

Building climax

The thunder crashed overhead, shaking the ground beneath my feet.

Time is a thief that steals our moments.

"As the sweet fragrance and vibrant colours of the flowers enveloped her,memories surged her mind like arrows,pulling back to her carefree days,even the weight of danger crept closer,reminding her she couldn't linger"

Glancing - looking around

Heart racing - heart beating quickly

Example of a sentence:

She wiped her sweaty palms on her jeans, glancing around at her classmates who seemed so calm, making her heart race even faster.

Touch

5 Senses

The cold metal of the doorknob sent a shiver through her fingertips as she hesitated, feeling the weight of what lay beyond the threshold.

sound : the drumbeat resonated like a thunder , echoing through the air and sending vibrations through the crowd , burst into flames in their heart

simile: the boy rushed toward his school alike startled rabbit darting for cover.''

The garden exploded with a riot of colours--crimson roses unfurled their petals like dancers greeting the sun, while golden sunflowers stood tall, their faces turning eagerly towards the warm rays. A soft breeze whispered through the leaves, carrying the sweet scent of blossoms, as the sun dipped low, casting a golden glow that made the flowers shimmer like jewels in a treasure chest

suspense: suspense is a feeling of excitement or anxiety about what might happen next in a story. It keeps readers on the edge of their seats, wanting to know more.

Terror: An intense, overwhelming fear. Often used in life-threatening situations.

As she thinks that unicorns are real, a mean adult said that her assertion is inaccurate; as the facts clearly demonstrate a different reality.

1.smell what scents are in the air?

2.taste what flavour can you describe

The candy melted in my mouth, its vibrant colors offering no sweetness, leaving only a hollow sensation and the scent of disappointment.

Meaning: Very hungry

Sight: The sun dipped below the horizon, painting the sky in hues of orange and purple, a final farewell to the day.

Taste: The rich flavour of hot cocoa lingered on my tongue, warming me from the inside as memories flooded back.

Precise Adjectives

• Frantic: Instead of “worried,” you could use “frantic” to describe a character's state.

• Desperate: This word conveys urgency and intensity effectively.

• Chaotic: Use this to describe a disorderly situation, like “The chaotic scene left everyone in shock.”

Weak Legs: Instead of just saying "my legs were weak," you could describe the physical sensations or actions, like: "Each step felt like wading through mud, as my knees threatened to buckle beneath me."

but then someone promenaded in, not knowing there was impending doom.

a dragon broke the wall, with a treasure chest within in possession.

the chest gleamed and shined, but the dragon was danger, showed by its expression.

the dining room fell leaving no one behind.

but when there is death, there is always life.

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what you have learnt:dont make dumb decisions.

• Use strong dialogue: Instead of “He said angrily,” try “He snapped, his voice sharp as glass.”

1. Sensory Descriptions:

   • Use smells or sounds: “The acrid smell of smoke stung her nose as she ran, the distant sound of sirens wailing in her ears.”

How can you apply these techniques to a scene in your writing? Let’s brainstorm together!

Speak

And then he won the should he risk using his man to get the treasure or he turn back, letting his Men live?

if you have extreme luck it is a gift.

As the sleepy knight got his map from the toilet-rainbow-toilet island-waterfall, he found himself in a maze. A garden maze, in for that manner. this surreal dream kept on getting crazier, as out of nowhere, the fountain in the middle of the maze transformed into ice cream. The knight accepted his fate, believing this is real, even though he clearly knew his Assertion was wrong.