Analysis by Andrew Timothy Gunawan https://padlet.com/5708andrew/drpsmwhtdf1ix4aa Made with charisma en-us 2021-09-01 03:16:20 UTC 2021-09-10 02:37:23 UTC hello@padlet.com Reviewer: 2/Andrew Timothy Gunawan | Writer : 1/Alexandra Kenenza Agusta 5708andrew https://padlet.com/5708andrew/drpsmwhtdf1ix4aa/wish/1708846669 1. The text doesn't provide :
a. conclusion, the text does not have a conclusion from all the arguments. So it can make it easier for the reader to know what conclusions can be drawn from the text.
b. actual facts, so that it can be more convincing the reader to agree with the opinion.

Some points need to be revised/improved :
a. need a more detail explanation about the arguments. The argument should be further clarified so that the reader can better understand it.

2. Some good points of the text :
a. an opinion or idea about the topic is strong and good. 
b. the opinion and the words are easy to understand. 
c. the text has a good explanation about the argument


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