Unit 1, Session 3 - Learning From Mentor Text by Matthew Bradley

Mr. Bradley

matthewbradley11 — 2026-01-07 19:43:05 UTC

The strategy I will most likely try to use in my own writing is incorporating dialogue (what a person is saying) to show how the person is feeling, rather then just telling.

Mr. Bradley

matthewbradley11 — 2026-01-07 19:43:08 UTC

The strategy I will most likely try to use in my own writing is incorporating dialogue (what a person is saying) to show how the person is feeling, rather then just telling.

Mr. Bradley

matthewbradley11 — 2026-01-07 19:43:13 UTC

The strategy I will most likely try to use in my own writing is incorporating dialogue (what a person is saying) to show how the person is feeling, rather then just telling.

Mr. Bradley

matthewbradley11 — 2026-01-07 19:43:19 UTC

The strategy I will most likely try to use in my own writing is incorporating dialogue (what a person is saying) to show how the person is feeling, rather then just telling.

carter h

2026-01-08 15:31:48 UTC

i will ad detalis

Ayla

2026-01-08 15:32:38 UTC

I will most likely try out giving more detail in my writing. Like how the writer gave details like " her curly brown hair" and " I swan in big wide strokes".

carsen nelson

2026-01-08 15:34:00 UTC

I will give more diloge to my writing so they see want I am trying to sayin my writing

Elizabeth

2026-01-08 15:34:12 UTC

I will try to give more detail like how she said her eyes were big as oranges

Kevin

2026-01-08 15:35:26 UTC

I will use more detalis

Bella

2026-01-08 15:35:36 UTC

I will use my own words.

Evan

2026-01-08 15:37:49 UTC

I will try to be more discriptive when writing to give the reader a picture in there head

Gracelynn

2026-01-08 15:39:55 UTC

I will most likely put words that are interesting

Easton

2026-01-08 15:40:09 UTC

i will give more details and describing words

Ollie

2026-01-08 15:40:49 UTC

paying more attention

Devyn Irish

2026-01-08 15:41:40 UTC

I will add more details just like how she was talking about the " thin water" and how the " snake slithered" near them!

AUBRI AUSTIN

2026-01-08 15:42:13 UTC

I will most likely add more exsperssion and emotion

Johns strat

2026-01-08 15:45:09 UTC

i would ad BOLD letters

yeahhhhh

savannah

2026-01-08 15:45:40 UTC

I will ad detalis

Maeleigh

2026-01-08 17:08:49 UTC

I will most likely try to detail and use my own words instead. i will also try to use my best grammar instead of leaving the red lines at the bottom of the word.

Andrew

2026-01-08 17:21:34 UTC

I will use my own writing and spell the best I can

McKinley

2026-01-08 17:24:24 UTC

Add more details and ajectives so they can know what they are doing.

Kennedy Lester

2026-01-08 17:24:42 UTC

I thought that using very descriptive words would be very nice to make my writing better and more detailed!

John cavender

2026-01-08 17:27:30 UTC

I will use descriptive words to show how I feel

Brooks

2026-01-08 17:29:07 UTC

i used descriptive words to show how they feel.

Melanie Dean

2026-01-08 17:33:36 UTC

I will use descriptive words + sayings to let the reader have a better image on what's going on in the story.

Serenitiy

2026-01-08 17:34:34 UTC

I will try to spell and be more descriptive in my texts. :)

Kenzie

2026-01-08 17:35:31 UTC

Using more unique words than basic words like jumped or cold and stuff like that

Braylen

2026-01-08 17:39:17 UTC

i used descriptive words to show how they feel or do

chloe

2026-01-08 17:40:55 UTC

I will do my best to give detail to my writing and make my writing more exciting.

Grayson Cremeans

2026-01-08 17:41:07 UTC

I will end up adding details to get people into my book and sharing it because of how good it is. I will also be adding things like ¨She held the poster up as strong as she could, as the wind got stronger.¨

Zavier Blakeman

2026-01-08 17:43:47 UTC

I will most likely add more feeling to my writing

Lilly.D

2026-01-08 17:43:58 UTC

I will use my best grammer and detail

Caroline K

2026-01-08 17:49:08 UTC

I will most likely try and give more details and be more descriptive in my writing like using emotions and punctuations.

Skyla Starman

2026-01-08 17:49:44 UTC

I will try and show more detail to my text when I'm writing and use more descriptive words and use more emotion while I'm working and show more events and make my text more eventful I will also add more of my punctuation. :)

aliyah Oliver

2026-01-08 17:50:33 UTC

I will add detales and punctuation

Thomas

2026-01-08 17:55:05 UTC

I will add details and use my own words

robert mcarthur

2026-01-08 18:06:02 UTC

i will do good

conner

2026-01-12 15:00:15 UTC

I will use more detail in my writing and make to where they know what I am try to say in my writing

JO IS BETTER THEN YOU

BYE MR. BRADLEY

Cadence

2026-01-12 15:33:39 UTC

using a lot more parentheys and using discribive words

Asher May

2026-01-12 15:41:16 UTC

I will use more detail and better punctuation in my writing so people actually know what im talking about.

Spectra

2026-01-12 15:44:40 UTC

The strategy I will try to use is to use more descriptive words to show how the person is feeling or doing

brycen fox

2026-01-12 17:46:03 UTC

use descriptive words so they know what i'm talking about and better spelling. have a good day :)

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Haley

2026-01-12 17:47:58 UTC

the strategy i will most likely try to use in my own writing the right punctuation. i think it helps tell the story better.

Atreyu

2026-01-12 17:48:54 UTC

The strategy I would most like to use is Capital letters because if i do all capital letters, it would be like the person that is talking is yelling.

Ally

2026-01-12 17:48:54 UTC

The strategy I will try to use in my writing is more exclamations and adjectives to make it more informative.

Alexis Slack

2026-01-12 17:52:10 UTC

the strategy I will most likely try to use in my own writing is incorperating idioms to show I am I good writer.

WRITING

2026-01-12 17:54:04 UTC

I will be using methphores in my writing more because it added more like tension to the writing.

bryce chambers

2026-01-12 17:54:43 UTC

the strategy I will use is to use my own writing to see if i get good at writing .

Rhett Henrich

2026-01-12 17:55:03 UTC

I will use adjectives to describe things

kiara gillum

2026-01-12 17:56:16 UTC

I will try to be more descriptive so the listener knows what im talking about.also ill work on my spelling and punctuation.

Thank You!!

Dominic denman

2026-01-12 17:56:33 UTC

I will use strategies such as describing certain feelings and emotions as well as certain actions

Kash stewart

2026-01-12 17:57:25 UTC

Start using good puncuation, and write for a while.

emitt brown

2026-01-12 18:00:46 UTC

I will describe my writing so the person reading can understand what I'm saying

Skylar <33

2026-01-12 19:14:00 UTC

I will add details to my writing and text in informations <3

Pippa

2026-01-12 19:29:50 UTC

I will use more descriptive words and use dialogue whenever I can or it is needed. I will try to make my feelings easier for the readers, and I will work on correct punctuation.

bye :]

amiyah johnson

2026-01-13 14:33:30 UTC

She chose a fun and interesting topic with a lot of details and punctuation.

Alexis snell

2026-01-13 17:08:32 UTC

I will use capitals and spell words properly

Liam

2026-01-13 17:09:48 UTC

I would use descriptive words in my writed

Grayson Clark

2026-01-13 17:16:48 UTC

The author uses strong verbs like “cringe” to help the reader understand how the person is feeling and to help the reader visualize what is happening.

toby

2026-01-13 17:22:54 UTC

it gives us perspective

Sammy

2026-01-13 19:33:52 UTC

I will most likely try using more disciptive words in my writing like the text.

JULIAN

garjul0820a — 2026-01-14 14:01:18 UTC

I will look through the story find what I like most comment or put a Sticky note (Digital) and put a reason why I picked that word

Ethan

2026-01-14 14:04:56 UTC

I will add more detalis

Carter S

2026-01-14 15:21:33 UTC

I will write better with neater and better words

Myah

2026-01-16 15:24:40 UTC

the strategy I will most likely use is descriptive words so it helps reader know what I'm talking about

Ethan

2026-01-16 17:55:34 UTC

The writer used all capital letters and an exclamation point to show that the character was yelling.

Addi Allen

2026-01-16 19:38:03 UTC

i will try to use more detail and explian things better.

Angela

2026-01-16 20:12:03 UTC

The writer used all capital letters to show that someone was yelling.

Mr bradley

2026-01-20 15:09:26 UTC

The strategy I will most likely try to use in my own writing is incorporating dialogue (what a person is saying) to show how the person is feeling, rather then just telling.

Sara

2026-01-20 22:04:30 UTC

the strategy i would most like to use is capital letters and punctuations so it can guide me through.

VASHTI

2026-01-21 14:00:24 UTC

i will use big letters to show screaming

unit 1 season 3

2026-01-22 13:35:38 UTC

i will use more details to make the person know what im writing.

dustin

2026-01-22 19:41:51 UTC

The strategy I will most likely try to use in my own writing is incorporating dialogue (what a person is saying) to show how the person is feeling, rather then just telling.

ciro

2026-01-26 20:10:15 UTC

I will use more detail.

Matthew made this

2026-01-27 15:06:59 UTC

I will most likley use more detailed wording for better understanding

angela gillman

2026-01-29 15:33:03 UTC

you are the best teacher ever and everyday when I walk into this school I am whiting to see you bye mr. Bradley

shayla barnett

2026-02-03 00:29:50 UTC

i can add deatails and let the reader know the emotions that i fell when i mtell the storie

Thomas Secord

2026-02-06 17:20:50 UTC

i will add more feeling more deltiles

Riley S.

2026-02-10 14:24:28 UTC

I found detail in the mentor text and that is something I want to try out, it helps paint the picture in your mind.

Zoe F.

2026-02-10 14:33:52 UTC

A strategy I found and would use is adding specific details to paint a mental image.

Jamie Dingee

2026-02-11 00:23:17 UTC

add descriptive word so the reader can understand what is going on in the story.

malachi

godmal0429a — 2026-02-17 17:03:07 UTC

i will try to spell more and be more dicriive

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2026-02-17 17:08:04 UTC

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2026-02-17 17:09:16 UTC

conner wwasdwasdw

2026-02-17 17:11:03 UTC