IELTS 4.1 - opinion essay 'better' by Nguyễn Bích Ngọc(ADAS – THPT) https://padlet.com/ngocnb2/dr5tf4d2g35zz746 Made with charisma en-us 2021-08-25 10:16:28 UTC 2021-10-10 14:52:39 UTC hello@padlet.com Question ngocnb2 https://padlet.com/ngocnb2/dr5tf4d2g35zz746/wish/1695786941 'Prevention is better than cure'. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. 
Agree or disagree?]]> 2021-08-25 10:18:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ngocnb2/dr5tf4d2g35zz746/wish/1695786941 Vĩnh Bảo 011111627 https://padlet.com/ngocnb2/dr5tf4d2g35zz746/wish/1695807050 It is believed by the majority that preventive measures can be a better solution than curing. In my opinion, preventions are much better since many diseases are not cureable and by preventing these diseases, one can ensure a safe and healthy life.

First, many diseases nowaday causes by virus or bacteria can make people unable to aware that they are sick. It may too late for us to have noticed that our body is hurt from inside. Moreover, a countless number of fatal diseases like cancer, HIV, covid 19, etc do not have an effective treatment yet so people had no choice accept to bear it. For instance, we chose not to go out and protect ourselves from the covid 19 in order to prevent a wide spread rather than go out side freely and face the possibility of death. 

Secondly, treatments required not a small amount of money. It is even imposible for some to get a proper treatment so they wanted to stay healthy and keep themselves from sickness.

In conclusion, preventing is a better option but researching and find out treatments is also very important as well.]]> 2021-08-25 10:42:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ngocnb2/dr5tf4d2g35zz746/wish/1695807050 nguyễn gia hân https://padlet.com/ngocnb2/dr5tf4d2g35zz746/wish/1695814176 many people believe that prevention is better than curing. personally, i think its true and people should know that in order to have a better and happier life. 
firstly,i think that prevention is better than cure because along with curing the disease, we also have to feel that pain that the disease brings. if we preventing the disease from happening, we won't have to find a way to cure it, to make it less painful and many thing else. for examples COVID-19 is a very dangerous virus, and also one of the  topic which people talk about it everyday. the delta, which doesn't show the symptoms right away, so we don't know is it time to "cure" and take care yet. moreover, if we ignore it, the virus can cause many pain, or even worse - death. there are also many disease like cancer, aids, which doesn't have the "vaccine" to prevent this from happening. 
secondly, prevention cost less money and energy than curing does. for example, being careful about what we eat or drink can be less "expensive" than doing surgeries. many dangerous disease can not be cured, which will lead to death. 
to conclude, i think that prevention is always better that curing, but we should still studies to find a way to cure incurable disease. ]]> 2021-08-25 10:51:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ngocnb2/dr5tf4d2g35zz746/wish/1695814176 Pogba 0111361121 https://padlet.com/ngocnb2/dr5tf4d2g35zz746/wish/1695819952 Being proactive is always safer than dealing with the fallout of any particular issue. In my opinion, I agree that learning about and the subsequent treatment of illnesses is expensive, therefore investing in precautionary procedures would be more valuable. However, there is still a need for research and invention of cures, vaccines and methods.

Public enlightenment on proper hygiene adherence and safety is a necessity because it serves as our first line of defence in the prevention, tackling and containment of disease outbreaks. An Illustration is the precaution to always wash hands, use nose masks and ensure social distancing to curtail the spread of Coronavirus. Therefore, increased investment in public health orientation is required to ensure its sustenance and efficiency. In addition, preventive procedures like isolation of infected persons also reduce the risk of disease contamination, thus diminishing the need to treat a large number of sick people.

Meanwhile, Preventive measures cannot guarantee the total annihilation of infections and illnesses. Even with every precautionary procedure in place, some infectious diseases still find its way into the populace and by then raise the need for a cure or treatment. As a result, research is still important and needed to cure diseases. For example, curing isolated patients already infected with any particular disease will require the expertise of researchers who are at the forefront of formulating procedures and treatments of such diseases.

In conclusion, investments into preventive procedures, in addition to research are evidently necessary. However, more focus should be given to preventive procedures as such measures have shown to greatly reduce the prevalence of diseases.


]]> 2021-08-25 10:58:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ngocnb2/dr5tf4d2g35zz746/wish/1695819952 đinh bảo châu https://padlet.com/ngocnb2/dr5tf4d2g35zz746/wish/1695840622 Due to the increase in the number of people with health problem, a great amount of cash has been allocated to medication. There is a school of thought that prevention is more superior because of the expensive cost of researches and remedies. From my perspective, I agree that prevention is cheaper, however, it is also essential to enlighten our knowledge about disease and find the best remedy to cure it.

It is indisputable that avoidance is beneficial to human as it can economically minimize people from getting sick, while researching and curing illness requires a huge amount of money. There are numerous of techniques that can improve people's health as well as prevent diseases, for example follow a balance diet, do yoga or meditate. These healthy activities can reduce the probability of getting illness and at the same time does not required costly efforts.

However, studying about diseases and obtain suitable curing method are absolutely needed regardless of its expensive cost. By researching  diseases, scientists can come up with optimal remedy and prevention to avoid it. More importantly, when new diseases appear and no prevention is available, studying about them is by far the only way to deter them. Investing in treatment is indispensable as it can cure the people who can not bear the effect of diseases which is the potential factor that prevention lacks as it can only reduce the possibility of becoming sick. Therefore, it is necessary to allocate money on researching and treating diseases as prevention is not always plausible.  

In conclusion, with the aforementioned benefits, it is apparent that both views are strong in their respective strength, I believed that government should invest in all aspects of medical from researching to treating and preventing ]]> 2021-08-25 11:23:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ngocnb2/dr5tf4d2g35zz746/wish/1695840622 thu ngân https://padlet.com/ngocnb2/dr5tf4d2g35zz746/wish/1698274302 It is common that more and more diseases are spread today across the world than in the past. A school of though hold that investment in protection method is superior to either spending huge sum on the research activities include ailment and treating due to the cost of that purchase is quite affordable. Personally, I disagree with this argument due to the fact each investment will bring a certain beneficial.

There is undoubted that preventing is easier than cure. Preventive measure can help minimize people from get sick, consequently, they will not waste time and cost of going to the hospital or buying drug. Spending money on health campaign can raise people's awareness so they can have the healthy lifestyle such as having healthy diet or doing exercise gradually. Those activities can help people avoid a number of health problem like obesity or diabetes, which is difficult to find a treatment to solve this problem. In addition, using functional foods and tonics also helps people to increase our resistance and fight some diseases. Moreover, spending money on invention vaccine is significantly vital. For example, numerous diseased can avoid by vaccine such as the flu, tetanus, mumps and encephalitis that have impact on their health, especially their life.

However, there is no guarantee that prevention measure is 100% effective so the investment in researching and treating diseases is absolutely necessary. When a person is infected on the contrary there is no cure or antibiotics consequently, patients are not had opportunities to recover and this can lead to well-being decline and even lead death. For instant, in Coronavirus pandemic, although a huge citizen use masks and sanitizer to avoid infection, the virus has manage to infect a plethora of them. In that case, the financing in treating is extremely essential to do thorough research even if it needs excessive resources for the benefit of protecting humans from going extinct.

In conclusion, it is justifiable that people should invest in all aspects ranging from prevention to treatment in order to respond promptly in all cases. ]]> 2021-08-26 11:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/ngocnb2/dr5tf4d2g35zz746/wish/1698274302