7th Grade Writing by Delaney Harmer https://padlet.com/27dharmer/dpoe7l83hixnmg10 Leave me some feedback on my writing pieces! en-us 2022-01-31 14:13:25 UTC 2025-12-24 01:45:00 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f48d.png One star that i have for your writing is that i really love your topic i think its a very cool topic and as a dog lover i love the topic of adopting a dog. Another star i have is your hook because i thought it was very detailed and it made me want to read more and more about your essay. One wish i do have is your writing is kinda clumped it just goes from one way to another so I think if you put some more transition words it would make the writing more sense. -julia 27jdifiore https://padlet.com/27dharmer/dpoe7l83hixnmg10/wish/2023513844 2022-02-01 15:02:47 UTC https://padlet.com/27dharmer/dpoe7l83hixnmg10/wish/2023513844 Jolsne 27jmfurgiuele https://padlet.com/27dharmer/dpoe7l83hixnmg10/wish/2139155492 One star i have is that i really liked your listing of the mental disorders. It was very imformitave and taught me info that I would have never known. One wish is that the images had captions underneath them because it could have added something to the images. ]]> 2022-04-11 13:27:23 UTC https://padlet.com/27dharmer/dpoe7l83hixnmg10/wish/2139155492 Informative Article 27mhuber https://padlet.com/27dharmer/dpoe7l83hixnmg10/wish/2139180559 Hey Delaney! I really loved your article, because it was about a topic I am not familiar with, and I could still understand! One star I have for you is that I liked the fun fact you added. One wish is that some paragraphs were a little wordy. Great job! ]]> 2022-04-11 13:42:14 UTC https://padlet.com/27dharmer/dpoe7l83hixnmg10/wish/2139180559