https://padlet.com/24fqamar/do6ioroy5w8d Made for my feedback. No, wait, your feedback... Just go ahead, I'm too lazy. en-us 2018-12-05 17:13:17 UTC 2018-12-07 17:28:49 UTC hello@padlet.com 24spantham https://padlet.com/24fqamar/do6ioroy5w8d/wish/312328705 Hi, Fatima! I love how you used incredible vocabulary words in your story. Great usage of the words "ludicrous" and "meticulous"! Also, I love how you described the character in a way that the readers could infer that she is depressed and that her parents completely ignore her. For future stories, you should really add some more dialogue. I really only saw one spot where there was an actual conversation. Overall, great story! Great job adding suspense! ]]> 2018-12-07 17:25:04 UTC https://padlet.com/24fqamar/do6ioroy5w8d/wish/312328705