Comments on TV News of UN police officers by jun zhang

James

jameszhangexpo — 2018-01-26 00:46:36 UTC

Please share with us your thoughts on my Police Story.

1) We didn't "see" Ebola or Dengue fever.

2) I didn't write to the pictures in the ending

Tiff

2018-01-26 00:47:10 UTC

Words used in the TV news script are simple and easy to pronounce so that the reporter does not make mistakes when reading.

Danielle

2018-01-26 00:47:21 UTC

The language used for the Police Story is formal and the information provided to the audience is clear and concise. However, improvement can be made in regards to writing the story to match the pictures in the ending.

KJ

2018-01-26 00:47:23 UTC

Good choices of soundbites for interviews.

Ally

2018-01-26 00:48:11 UTC

Formal language is used for the script and the choice of words are succinct.

The news story flows from the reporter to the interviewees.

Serene

2018-01-26 00:48:11 UTC

Script is well organised. Narration and sound bites were organised well.

Sentences in the news script are short and can be easily grasped by audiences, compared to other writing forms.

Lydia

2018-01-26 00:48:14 UTC

Good choice of interviewees. The last few shots could be more interesting.

Elvin

2018-01-26 00:48:16 UTC

the use of formal language in the story conveys professionalism. Subtitles could be in sync with the video

mcharyono

2018-01-26 00:48:24 UTC

In this video, I learn that s
soundbites are to support or to introduce an idea of the topic. Interviewee are to respond/clarify to that idea/topic.

bubye guys <3

Korin

2018-01-26 00:48:28 UTC

TV News writing uses simple and common language, which is easy for the audience to hear and understand, compared to other writing forms.

Fam

2018-01-26 00:48:30 UTC

Subtitles not in sync with the soundbites and video.

Words are spoken clearly.

h

2018-01-26 00:48:52 UTC

2018-01-26 02:46:37 UTC