My great story! by Van Anh Pham

2024-07-13 04:11:56 UTC

When I was tidying the basement, a paper fell into my face. “OMG, it’s a treasure map !” I said. I asked everyone but no one knew about this treasure map. My dad said he would help me find the treasure. So we went on a ship to the ocean. It was so peaceful until a storm came. When I woke up, I was on an island and this island was the island in the map. I walked and walked and walked, a few minutes later, I saw a village. In the village, I saw dad ! We are all very happy to saw each other again. We looked at the map, we are more closer to the treasure. We walked until we saw a river. I saw many crocodiles are slept. There was a bridge crossed over the river. We walked slowly on the bridge. Just then, the bird sang and all the crocodiles woke. We ran as fast as we can. Finally, the crocodiles din’t run anymore so we were safe. We walked for a long time, suddenly, some strange creature tried to catch us and we needed to run again. The creatures stopped and ran to another side and disappeared. We walked in to a forest. It was dark now so we camped in the forest. The sun rose and we woke up. We walked a few hours in the forest and suddenly a wall stopped us . I looked at the map and I walked to the corner of the wall. On the wall, I saw some letters on the wall. They are T,E,A,H,S,T,E,U,R,E. “HURAY. The message is THE TREASURE ” I said. I pushed on one of the letters and a door suddenly opened from the wall. Inside, I could see the treasure, the money inside was up to 9999 billion dollars

. I went home and told all my adventure to everyone. I would be rich and became a billionaire. (Ngô Vĩnh Phong)

saucute35 — 2024-07-13 16:28:57 UTC

The detective uses his magical eyes to see through the sky, but nothing is there. He uses his nose to sniff the ground, but he smells nothing. The detective said seriously:

I think that the thief has taken the moon to a faraway land. I can see some sparkling things down the road in Pine Street.

He pointed behind him. Just then, he used his magical eye again to trace the sparkling thing on the road.

This way! he shouted

Everyone follows him down Pine Street, through the hills, into the forest, and stops. They are in a field with a few trees and a lot of grass. There, the moon is with a man, ready to get cut. The police shouted:

You are arrested!

The man was caught, and the detective set free the moon. The moon said:

Thanks a lot, detective. I was drinking orange juice when he came and took me away. He said he was going to make me into some jewelry.
No problem, said the detective

They say goodbye to each other. This is an event that the moon can't ever forget.

trangtrinh691 — 2024-07-14 07:29:54 UTC

When my friend and I are playing at the playground, we play football when I step on a treasure map! I ask my friend about the treasure map but no one knows. I ran home and told my dad and he wanted to help me find the treasure. We got on a ship and go the ocean. Everything was fine when a big storm came. But we have survived in that storm. One week later our boat ran out of food but lucky we saw an island and it was the island on the map we walked and walked when we stopped at a village and begged for food. After we finished eating we walked where the map was pointing at and came to a forest we walked some more when we met a large group of lions sleeping! We quietly walk over the lions when I step on a branch and wake up all the lions but I have a smart idea which is to climb on a tree and we like monkeys climbing to branch and branch. The lions can not catch us so they go away and we climb down and continue on our journey but some pirates stop us and say: give me your money! But my dad is a karate teacher and fights all the pirates down and walks some more when we stop and look at the map the x is down our feet we dig and dig when we touch something hard it's the treasure box we open it and inside was 999 billion dollars! We went home and told about all of my adventures and became a billionaire. (Trần Anh Vũ)