Constructive Feedback? by GemmaRatcliffe

Nostalgia

2025-03-19 09:12:48 UTC

You effectively link to artist research however I feel the analysis is quite simple and could use more sophisticated language.

Symmetry

2025-03-19 09:13:02 UTC

Could try a layered lino where the front is a mirror image and the back is a solid colour like Hick's style

Feedback

2025-03-19 09:13:15 UTC

I think you could potentially have looked at more artists to vary your inspirations as the artwork style stays very consistent and repetitive

2025-03-19 09:13:19 UTC

there has been a good amount of primary sources as well as they have shown a large variety of skills via workshops

Development 1a I think she could have looks at more artist who created the drawing/painting in colour and she could have created the painting in colour or maybe develop it further in different mediums.

2025-03-19 09:13:33 UTC

Nostalgia

2025-03-19 09:15:06 UTC

I don’t see how Diego Fabio has influenced they art work and the initial sketches are all ready in this style so I would of picked a different artist who creates portraits and I would of chose one who did them in colour to show variety

2025-03-19 09:15:11 UTC

I think she could look at actual events that give her nostalgia like a period of time she cherished the most. For the Thomas train she could’ve made that into 3D model.

Nostalgia

2025-03-19 09:15:32 UTC

The research response is good and there’s a decent amount of primary research however analysis is lacking in terminology

2025-03-19 09:15:55 UTC

Have to analyze how your chosen photographs link to your theme and how you could use the building images to create you own work.