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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Based on your experience, answer the following questions:<br></strong><br></div><ul><li>1- What were your strengths in the essay?</li></ul><div>My strengths in the essay were organization, content, coherence and format.</div><ul><li>2- What aspects were you able to gain awareness of through the process activities on Padlet?</li></ul><div>I was able to learn how to use Padlet because it was my first time using it. I was able to organize in a better way the proccess of the essay, which helped me to develop the essay more correctly.</div><ul><li>3- What were your weaknesses in the essay?</li></ul><div>&nbsp;My weaknesses in the essay were the punctuation rules (comma splices and run-on sentences), spelling, verbs agreement and varied vocabulary.&nbsp;</div><ul><li>4- What do you need to overcome those weaknesses?</li></ul><div>I need to review the punctuation rules to avoid comma splices and run-on sentences. I also have to pay more attention to the subject that I use to have a correct verb agreement, and I need to learn more vocabulary.</div><ul><li>5- How did your classmate's feedback contribute to improving your work?</li></ul><div>My classmate's feedback was a very helpful in seeing what aspects were correct on the outline before I started writing the essay.</div><ul><li>6- What was meaningful about this experience? Why?</li></ul><div>Something meaningful about this experience was that I was able to notice my weaknesses to work on it. I also liked to interact with my classmates through Padlet.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2022-05-23 02:01:33 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Personal insights after the essay</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Based on your experience, answer the following questions:<br>&nbsp;</strong></div><ul><li>1- What were your strengths in the essay?</li></ul><div>My strengths in the essay were organization because I included an introduction, three body paragraphs and a conclusion. Coherence because the ideas were linked to the thesis statement, and format because I followed the general APA 7 guidelines.</div><ul><li>2- What aspects were you able to gain awareness of through the process activities on Padlet?</li></ul><div>I learned how to organize my Padlet in a better way using different colors for each essay.</div><ul><li>3- What were your weaknesses in the essay?</li></ul><div>&nbsp;My weaknesses in the essay were the verb tenses, agreement and word form.</div><ul><li>4- What do you need to overcome those weaknesses?</li></ul><div>I need to practice and pay more attention to the subject that I use to have a correct verb agreement. I also need to learn more vocabulary and practice the word form.</div><ul><li>5- How did your classmate's feedback contribute to improving your work?</li></ul><div>My classmate's feedback helped me to correct some comma splices and run-on sentences before I started writing the essay. Her opinion also helped me to see what aspects were correct on the outline.</div><ul><li>6- What was meaningful about this experience? Why?</li></ul><div>In this experience I could notice an improvement in my writing, which makes me happy, and I could notice some weakness that I need to work on.</div><div>&nbsp;<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><strong>Based on your experience, answer the following questions:<br></strong><br></div><ul><li>1- What were your strengths in the essay?</li></ul><div>In this essay my strengths were the organization because it contains an introduction (with a hook, background information and thesis statement), three body paragraphs and conclusion (with a restatement of the point of view, thesis statement, summary of the main points and a closing device). Other strengths were the content, coherence, mechanics and format.</div><ul><li>2- What aspects were you able to gain awareness of through the process activities on Padlet?</li></ul><div>Through the process activities on Padlet I learned to give feedback to my classmates in their Padlets. Also, organizing the essay on the Padlet made the writing process more enjoyable.</div><ul><li>3- What were your weaknesses in the essay?</li></ul><div>&nbsp;My weaknesses in the essay were the use of transition devices and the format of the references.</div><ul><li>4- What do you need to overcome those weaknesses?</li></ul><div>I need to review the APA 7 guidelines to be able to do the references in a correct way. I also need to study and practice the transition devices to allow a smooth flow of ideas.</div><ul><li>5- How did your classmate's feedback contribute to improving your work?</li></ul><div>My classmate's feedback was amazing because she reviewed everything point by point which helped me to identify some errors. She also gave me recommendations to reduce some sentences, so I am grateful for her help.</div><ul><li>6- What was meaningful about this experience? Why?</li></ul><div>In this experience something meaningful was the interaction with my classmate’s through the feedback because I could work with someone that I like to work with, and the kind comments of my classmates helped me to improve my writing.</div>]]></description>
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