https://padlet.com/23jmayer/dmgtd6wbafj3 Welcome! Thank you for coming! Please enjoy the show and leave your thoughts here! en-us 2018-02-01 15:42:38 UTC 2018-03-02 15:08:26 UTC hello@padlet.com 23mho1 https://padlet.com/23jmayer/dmgtd6wbafj3/wish/236982815 I like how you hooked me into your writing.  I wanted to read more. I also like  your use of transitions. One wish I have is to elaborate more on your warrant. It needs more detail.
-Max Ho]]> 2018-03-01 15:53:31 UTC https://padlet.com/23jmayer/dmgtd6wbafj3/wish/236982815 23inunziata https://padlet.com/23jmayer/dmgtd6wbafj3/wish/237380946 To begin my first star, I really thought your suspense narrative was very interesting. I really liked how your hook grabbed me into your writing and the end still left me wondering what was going to happen next. I really liked that and I was able to picture what was going on in my mind. For my second star, I really liked your vocabulary. I thought you had very good word choice and you used words that were better than easier words to describe what was happening. For my wish, in the future, try to give more detail on whats happening like the setting and etc. Overall, I really like your writing piece! 
-Isabella N]]> 2018-03-02 13:39:25 UTC https://padlet.com/23jmayer/dmgtd6wbafj3/wish/237380946 23ebianco https://padlet.com/23jmayer/dmgtd6wbafj3/wish/237424684 To begin, I really enjoyed reading your piece it was intriguing and even made me nervous as well as reflect on competitions. I am really impressed how you kept the most intriguing and exciting parts of the memory in and left out a lot of the in between things. I commend you for making the vignette short and sweet. Truly it was perfect the setting was clear and there seemed to be a very clear understanding of the memory I feel as if I was there! My only wish is I would encourage you to make your writing flow more, it was a bit choppy and all over and it was memory after memory just strive for that in the future as well as add some more transitions to make it flow. Really great job! - Elisa B]]> 2018-03-02 15:03:48 UTC https://padlet.com/23jmayer/dmgtd6wbafj3/wish/237424684