Hour 4 by TClay https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd What did you notice about the stories you read? What did you like? What did the author do well? en-us 2017-10-19 11:55:15 UTC 2026-03-19 18:06:39 UTC hello@padlet.com The Great Escape tclay https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198724201 I loved the title of the story because it made me want to read more (it hooked me). I also felt a connection with the moment the author was describing.]]> 2017-10-19 15:28:53 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198724201 The Delightful Musee D’ Orsay - Audri F. https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198724318 I like this story, because I liked the part where there was a metaphor, "I am a queen walking up to her throne." ]]> 2017-10-19 15:29:04 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198724318 The Great Escape Addie https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198724357 I liked the story The Great Escape because it kept you hooked. I also liked all the writers tricks. ]]> 2017-10-19 15:29:08 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198724357 Play With Pain - Max F. https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198724528 There was lots of good dialogue and transitions]]> 2017-10-19 15:29:24 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198724528 Brendan Tyrer. I liked the Musee D'Orsay. I have been to the Musee D'Orsay so I could make connections. I liked the good word choice like My eyes lit up, or I marveled, And there is a really good metaphor. https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198724739 2017-10-19 15:29:45 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198724739 Kayak Tip-Over - Aidan V. 4th hour Mrs. Clay. https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198724802 I like this story because it had lots of good thought shots and snap shots. I also like how the author used lots of similes and metaphors. I also like how the author used lots of detail. ]]> 2017-10-19 15:29:50 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198724802 Costa Rican adventure houlluc https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198724911 I liked all of the dialogue because it made the story more interesting at the beginning to fish hook your readers

]]> 2017-10-19 15:30:00 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198724911 The Great Escape S.M.A https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725191 This story has lots of good righter tricks. Which makes it a good story.]]> 2017-10-19 15:30:25 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725191 The great escape Viola https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725278 I really like how he used a lot of similes and zesty words.]]> 2017-10-19 15:30:34 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725278 My amazing basketball game-Quinn https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725290  I have a connection with this story because I have been in this situation when Its down to the line and someone scores to win it! ]]> 2017-10-19 15:30:35 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725290 Kayak Tip-Over-By Tobenna Egwuatu https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725306 They really showed what happened, and I could picture it.

]]> 2017-10-19 15:30:37 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725306 The Great Escape. Peter Heintz https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725378 I liked it because the author used so many writers tricks.]]> 2017-10-19 15:30:44 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725378 The Great Escape - Janae https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725403 I liked how the story gave us excitement and makes me think about how Mrs.Clays cat went missing.]]> 2017-10-19 15:30:47 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725403 The Great Escape gradnat https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725584 I like how the author did a great job with great dialogue and writers tricks especially hyphenated modifier even though it is easy to do!
Clickaty-Clackity]]> 2017-10-19 15:31:09 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725584 Kayak Tip Over https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725632 Ava I like this story because it has a lot of good snap shots and similes .]]> 2017-10-19 15:31:14 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725632 i loved the grat askap because i thout it would be about a missing dog but it was about a liserd and writers trick vandhen1 https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725641 2017-10-19 15:31:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725641 The Great Escape https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725707 I liked that story, because it has some good similes and metaphors. I also like good hyphenated modifiers and parallel structures. ]]> 2017-10-19 15:31:24 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725707 Dana- Kayak Tip-Over https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725718 The writer used an amazing beginning hook.]]> 2017-10-19 15:31:24 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725718 Kennedy Kayak Tip-over https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725735 I like this story because  tricks  ]]> 2017-10-19 15:31:26 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725735 Eva Clay https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725761 2017-10-19 15:31:28 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725761 Eva Clay https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725964 I liked how the story The Great Escape had a alot of Writers Tricks and really showed what happend. (Show don´t tell)]]> 2017-10-19 15:31:53 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198725964 Wonder - Nya Fields https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198726023 I like how the author described the character's feelings. ]]> 2017-10-19 15:32:00 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198726023 Kayak Tip-Over greesam1 https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198726957 I liked the writers tricks in the story. Samuel Greer
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The story was realy good because it showed her thoughts. I notice the onomonopia.]]> 2017-10-19 15:34:04 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198727333 Ava https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198727473 I liked the kayak Tip Over because it had a lot of good snap shots . It also has a lot of good similes.]]> 2017-10-19 15:34:17 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198727473 The great escape https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198727970 I Like the book alot beause of all the alliteration]]> 2017-10-19 15:35:07 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198727970 Zev https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198728427 I liked A Day At Ke'e because it said, "I was as excited as a child getting a puppy." ]]> 2017-10-19 15:35:55 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198728427 Kayak tip-over- Dana https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198730439 The writer used a TON of writers tricks. Here is one:  
“Help!” I cry, small-voiced.
]]> 2017-10-19 15:39:09 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198730439 Swimming Distance- Dana https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198733883 Sun-drenched day.]]> 2017-10-19 15:44:58 UTC https://padlet.com/tclay/dkc7whyt6urd/wish/198733883