Secondary ECR Rater's Rubric by Jerard https://padlet.com/esc17_2/djg8csjw17aiuc57 Post your response to the discussion topic by clicking the plus button below. en-us 2025-10-19 23:41:41 UTC 2026-05-05 20:00:24 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/8.0/png/1f4dd.png https://padlet.com/esc17_2/djg8csjw17aiuc57/wish/3660678630 Introduction and theses

Does not lead to organizational

Strategy alone


Grade 8 In conclusion...


Clear theses


Introduction: Very purposeful organizational structure that includes both an intro and conclusion. These are the basis needed for the beginning and ending of and essay.


A successful introduction will restate the prompt/question, will answer the question and will give a preview of what you will be writing about.

Have a purpose for writing.


This is because...

7th #4

Intro.


Introductions included context/background of the text.


Introduction EOCII/POINTS

Fabulous A6 with great use of parrellism

Complex sentences as our 1st sentence grabs attention.


rhetorical questions are okay to use in introduction


A successful introduction

evident

expresses thesis

effective





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"Overall"

"In finality"


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At the end, the writer provides a partially developed thesis.



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Answer directly specific from the prompt

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Along with that...

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To add on to this...

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The writer uses transitions to logically connect ideas. "For example" "now" "overall"

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WE can conclude based on these facts...

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"on the other hand" - good transition to 2nd idea

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development and Organization of ideas

(3) Eng I

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Organization of ideas

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Organization & structure

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"From drinking hot tea or doing origami, Emis grandmother was a great influence on the author's life by teaching her good habits and strengthening their bond."

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Conclusion reflects thesis

Have one!

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  • clear thesis

  • restate question

  • effectively answer all parts


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-clearly stated opinion.

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Provides a clear thesis in the conclusion of the response.

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Evidence

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Having CLEAR text based evidence will always ensure a clear essay from start to finish

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Evidence

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Along with that...

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If you accept this request...

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"Based on this sentence we can infer..."

Helps students command evidence to their answer.

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This shows that...

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7th Grad

Evidence 5


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"based on this sentence we can infer..."

Helps students connect evidence to their answer

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Evidence

Summarized

The writer briefly explains using "This shows that"

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-Clear -cites P -"this evidence shows"

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-support thesis -specific -text based

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-specific - well chosen -relevant -supports the thesis


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One of the ideas proposed...

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Grade 6


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Explanation (3) Eng 1

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If you accept this request

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This shows that ...

This reveals that...

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This shows that..

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One reason is...


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If you accept this request...

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...combats...its modern day counterpart

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word choice was general and repetitious


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...all this new stuff

...improve a lot of things

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Specific word choice

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Personal commentary helps transition into explanation.


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-Good expression with purposeful word choice.

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Contribute to the overall clarity of the message

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Flooded with knowledge

on par

modern day counterpart

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