https://padlet.com/hannah_cracknell7/dhliywhclrdp If you could leave some feedback on my animation that would be cracking! en-us 2019-05-13 10:07:51 UTC 2019-05-15 15:40:05 UTC hello@padlet.com https://imgglb.padletcdn.com/v13/image?t=g_auto&url=https%3A%2F%2Fpadlet.net%2Ficons%2Fpng%2F1f3ac.png hannah_cracknell7 https://padlet.com/hannah_cracknell7/dhliywhclrdp/wish/359393983 https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NZ2CgUmJi4OgJ2I8bF9U3rfN3klmLQ1y/view?usp=sharing]]> 2019-05-13 10:12:33 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_cracknell7/dhliywhclrdp/wish/359393983 RubenCheese https://padlet.com/hannah_cracknell7/dhliywhclrdp/wish/359397619 I loved the sound design as it added to the atmosphere and made the animation more dramatic. The style is nice too as it's textured. The thing I would change is maybe dialling down the sound of "congratulations ready player one' as it's a bit loud. Other than that it looks great! ]]> 2019-05-13 10:27:22 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_cracknell7/dhliywhclrdp/wish/359397619 jlineker10 https://padlet.com/hannah_cracknell7/dhliywhclrdp/wish/359397888 I loved the visuals along with the very dramatic music that was playing in the background. There aren't many things that can be improved but you can change the last sentence and remove congratulations from the sentence as it gives a very happy tone for a scene with someone almost dying.]]> 2019-05-13 10:28:30 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_cracknell7/dhliywhclrdp/wish/359397888 tamzinbobyeah https://padlet.com/hannah_cracknell7/dhliywhclrdp/wish/359398259 I really like the transitions in your animation. i also like how dramatic it is but that all works well done. ]]> 2019-05-13 10:30:17 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_cracknell7/dhliywhclrdp/wish/359398259 https://padlet.com/hannah_cracknell7/dhliywhclrdp/wish/359401744 Love the muted colours with the dash of bold red - the haunting music draws you in - sad, eerie and enchanting ..... no need for any spoken words ]]> 2019-05-13 10:44:56 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_cracknell7/dhliywhclrdp/wish/359401744 https://padlet.com/hannah_cracknell7/dhliywhclrdp/wish/359423048 Loved it. The music complimented the animation perfectly. I agree with the comment about the volume of the words at the end as the music is so moving I think a softer and lower voice tone would be a better fit for the animation and music.]]> 2019-05-13 12:04:45 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_cracknell7/dhliywhclrdp/wish/359423048 https://padlet.com/hannah_cracknell7/dhliywhclrdp/wish/359590076 Love the gentle subtlety of the colours and the music is perfect. Opening progression is superb, and a totally magical sequence. Also liked the way the viewer is drawn in, from the opening wide sweep,  to the linear viewpoint running the length of the boy's body, and finally, to the tiny globe in his hand - an excellent technique to draw in the viewer. The only discordant note, as others have said, is the very loud voiceover, which is jarring, and seems out of place. But otherwise, this is excellent! ]]> 2019-05-13 17:28:17 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_cracknell7/dhliywhclrdp/wish/359590076