자신의 쓴 글을 고쳐쓰고 공유하여 봅시다.(11/30) by 김규탁 https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi 자신의 글을 공유하고 친구들의 의견을 듣고 수정한 내용을 글을 다시 올려 봅시다. en-us 2021-11-29 07:48:20 UTC 2024-11-09 10:40:06 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f60d.png kkttcf1 https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919380935 2021-11-30 02:18:05 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919380935 https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919393736 2021-11-30 02:25:25 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919393736 https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919396939 2021-11-30 02:27:34 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919396939 국어 글 쓰기(고치기 전) https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919397122 2021-11-30 02:27:42 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919397122 https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919397911 2021-11-30 02:28:13 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919397911 https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919398526 2021-11-30 02:28:35 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919398526 https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919398683 2021-11-30 02:28:41 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919398683 글이 짧다는건 나도 아니까 나한테 도움이 되는걸 적어줄래? https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919399513 아 진짜 글 짧다고만 적어 놓으면 내가 바꿀개 앖잖아 근거를 너 추가하라든지 그러라고 나도 글짧은거 모를줄 알아? 그렇게만 적으면 아무 도움이 안되잖아그렇개 적을거면 적지룰 말던가 적을개 그것밖에 없어?]]> 2021-11-30 02:29:13 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919399513 kkttcf1 https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919399649 2021-11-30 02:29:17 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919399649 kkttcf1 https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919402850 2021-11-30 02:31:22 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919402850 https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919403699 2021-11-30 02:31:53 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919403699 https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919405295 2021-11-30 02:32:51 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919405295 nh09kim https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919405680 2021-11-30 02:33:05 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919405680 고치기 전 https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919406005 2021-11-30 02:33:17 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919406005 이이이이이이잉 https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919406190 글씨좀 날려썻다 얘들아]]> 2021-11-30 02:33:24 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919406190 고치고 난 후 https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919406552 2021-11-30 02:33:35 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919406552 https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919409029 2021-11-30 02:35:09 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919409029 . https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919412100 .]]> 2021-11-30 02:36:59 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919412100 https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919414829 2021-11-30 02:38:43 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919414829 kkttcf1 https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919436309 2021-11-30 02:51:20 UTC https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919436309 고친후 https://padlet.com/kkttcf1/dh2vwvxjtrdjtgxi/wish/1919447803 썻던 종이가 없어서 이렇게 쓸게
                          동물실험 반대
1.동물과 일치하는 질병의 수가 너무적다
1.16 때문에 그렇게 많은 동물을 희생하는건
너무 비효율 적인것 같다
예시를 들자면
투구게가 백신의 개발로 인해 개채수가 
엄청나게 줄고있다
2.사람이였으면 하지못할 가혹한 실험을
동물에겐 하고있다 새끼를 유산시킨후
자궁을 해부하다니....
너무 가혹한것 같다
사람이였으면 햇겠는가?
이렇듯 동물에게 너무 가혹한 실험을
하고있으니
나는 동물실험을 반대한다

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