THE RABBITS DRAMA by Ms. German [HKPRI] https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4 Peer assess - ✅🔨 en-us 2025-06-11 05:04:24 UTC 2025-06-11 06:02:26 UTC hello@padlet.com Feedback lorrainegerman https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486210432 ✅ -


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]]> 2025-06-11 05:07:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486210432 Connie,Stephanie,Elena and Miranda https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486239790 Tick-emotion very captivating and very funny

Work-don’t laugh whilst acting

]]> 2025-06-11 05:30:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486239790 Maisie , Glory , Georgia Hkstudent https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486240135 ✅- they where funny . they didn’t laugh.

🔨 - to short

]]> 2025-06-11 05:30:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486240135 Jayden, gabby, hei hei https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486240301 ✅-Clear words, funny story


🔨-more exaggeration

]]> 2025-06-11 05:31:05 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486240301 Sean, Finn, Shahzain 130386573 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486240306 Tick- good creativity


Hammer- more serious and better sound effects

]]> 2025-06-11 05:31:05 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486240306 Jerry, Willkie and Coco 200101356 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486240483 ✅：It is funny.

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]]> 2025-06-11 05:31:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486240483 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486240898 Super funny

]]> 2025-06-11 05:31:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486240898 Anna & Ashley 130438503 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486241078 ✅-it had humour to capture the audience attention


🔨-make more exaggeration

]]> 2025-06-11 05:31:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486241078 Jayden, gabby, hei hei https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486244447 ✅-funny, good English!



🔨-please don’t laugh when you do the act 😂

]]> 2025-06-11 05:34:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486244447 Connie,Stephanie,Elena,Miranda https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486244717 Tick-Very real acting and trying to act out what the future will hold

Hammer-Please don’t laugh during the act

]]> 2025-06-11 05:34:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486244717 Samuel,Elliot,Harry https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486244962 ✅So much lore, I Love it!


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]]> 2025-06-11 05:35:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486244962 Maisie , Glory , Georgia Hkstudent https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486245047 ✅- funny. they were trying hard. good English


🔨 - dont laugh 😹 !!!!!!! ha ha ha

]]> 2025-06-11 05:35:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486245047 Yusuf , Jackie,Zak ,Kobi https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486246327 ✅ They had confidence

🔨 They could be louder.

]]> 2025-06-11 05:36:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486246327 Anna and Ashley 130438503 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486246357 Positive - it was funny and they made it bilingual

Negative -they kept laughing in the middle of their performance

]]> 2025-06-11 05:36:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486246357 Connie,Elena,Stephanie,Miranda https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486250657 tick-Very funny and gives us a good moral lesson

Hammer-Please don’t laugh I couldn’t understand that part at all

]]> 2025-06-11 05:39:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486250657 Jayden, Gabby, hei hei https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486250898 ✅-Long, good acting, good script!


🔨-projection of voice.

]]> 2025-06-11 05:40:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486250898 Zack, Kobi, Yusuf and Jackie 130409829 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486250949 ✅ : good acting and good vocabulary for the narrator


🔨 : Don’t laugh too much when acting

]]> 2025-06-11 05:40:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486250949 Samuel,Elliott,Harry https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486251227 ✅This was one of the best ones, I love the part where they both fight.



🔨The narrator needs to speak louder

]]> 2025-06-11 05:40:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486251227 Feedback Shahzain Sean and Finn 200109411 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486251640 Tick - Creative, Smart


Hammer - laugh and giggles

]]> 2025-06-11 05:40:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486251640 Ms. G lorrainegerman https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486251691 Excellent sharing of morals about selfishness. Your use of narrator really added to the performance. Well done for using all the space as well!

]]> 2025-06-11 05:40:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486251691 Ashley and Anna 130438503 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486251714 Positive - it was entertaining and positive and they taught us about selfishness


Negative- we couldn’t really hear them speaking

]]> 2025-06-11 05:40:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486251714 Jerry, Willkie and Coco 200101356 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486252347 ✅：Story is long, teach us a lesson.

🔨：Sound can be louder.

]]> 2025-06-11 05:41:13 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486252347 Ms. G lorrainegerman https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486258178 Wow! Might is Right was a great addition and showed that you paid attention to the details in the book. You all spoke your lines with excellent emotion. Well done.

]]> 2025-06-11 05:45:05 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486258178 Connie,Elena,Stephanie,Miranda https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486258605 Tick-Very funny and has a lot of details and emotion,Relates back to the book

Hammer-a bit of too much laughing and Gabby didn’t memorise the script

]]> 2025-06-11 05:45:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486258605 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486258841 Very funny and neat


]]> 2025-06-11 05:45:35 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486258841 Kobi, Zack, Yusuf, Jackie https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486259234 ✅ : linking to the story “ might is right” good acting


]]> 2025-06-11 05:45:48 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486259234 Anna and Ashley 130438503 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486259555 positive - Their acting is funny and amazing they thought of everything including texts in the book


Negative - no negatives

]]> 2025-06-11 05:46:05 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486259555 Jerry, Willkie and Coco 200101356 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486259671 ✅:Full of feelings. Let people feel they are in the real place!

]]> 2025-06-11 05:46:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486259671 Maisie , Glory , Georgia Hkstudent https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486259771 ✅- very creative script I love the phrase « might is right ! »

🔨 -HEI HEI could make more emotion also Jayden

]]> 2025-06-11 05:46:14 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486259771 Jayden, Gabby, Hei hei https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486263788 ✅- GOOD ROASTING VERY FUNNY


🔨-We can’t hear Sean……

]]> 2025-06-11 05:48:44 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486263788 Connie,Elena,Miranda,Stephanie https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486264270 tick-Good expression and calm manner

Hammer-Too much laughing in it Finn also didn’t remember his lines

]]> 2025-06-11 05:49:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486264270 Ms. G lorrainegerman https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486264898 Loved the impression of The Rabbits - cool, calm, collected but powerful. Your depiction of the numbats was also great: less power but showed resistance in keeping their home! Sean's intro. as narrator was well written and set context well: would have liked to hear more of the narrator throughout.

]]> 2025-06-11 05:49:29 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486264898 Jerry, Willkie and Coco 200101356 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486265152 Let the people can feel the emotion, and the numbat also do the thing that he think is correct.

]]> 2025-06-11 05:49:45 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486265152 Feedback Shahzain Sean Finn 200109411 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486265206 Tick - Amazing, 3 Lamdas


Hammer - none

]]> 2025-06-11 05:49:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486265206 Zack, Kobi, Yusuf and Jackie 130409829 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486266758 ✅ : “Numbats” has very good “talk back” skills which left Finn speechless


🔨 : Try to memorise all the parts

]]> 2025-06-11 05:50:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486266758 Jayden, Gabby, Hei hei https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486271033 ✅-VERY FUNNY< WELL THOUGHT SCRIPT


🔨-LAUGHING PROBLEM!

]]> 2025-06-11 05:54:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486271033 Finn, Sean, Shahzain 130386573 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486271592 Tick- The Rabbit was speaking in a condescending tone, gave a sense of power and dominance


Hammer- Too much laughing and Connie forgot her line

]]> 2025-06-11 05:54:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486271592 Ms. G lorrainegerman https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486272083 Well done! Your unique take on playing with the timeline was great. Your narrator also did a great job in adding further details to show us your understanding.

NS - a lot of giggly numbats! Can numbats giggle when they're dead?!

]]> 2025-06-11 05:55:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486272083 Jerry, Willkie and Coco 200101356 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486272389 It is very funny and it has time, but next time don’t laugh.

]]> 2025-06-11 05:55:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486272389 Georgia , Glory ,Maisie Hkstudent https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486272550 ✅- roast


🔨- roast

]]> 2025-06-11 05:55:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486272550 Jackie 200073969 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486272684 good-it funny and good action

Negative-please don’t laugh

]]> 2025-06-11 05:55:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486272684 Georgia , Maisie , glory Hkstudent https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486273742 ✅-roast


🔨- roast

]]> 2025-06-11 05:56:29 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486273742 Ms. G lorrainegerman https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486275839 Well done for including the details: pollution, ruining the environment, no homes.

NS: Try to keep to your very well-written scripts and include original ad libs :)

]]> 2025-06-11 05:58:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486275839 Connie,Stephanie,Elena,Miranda https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486275890 Tick-laughing,roasting

Hammer-stole our line and Eliott did not remember his lines

]]> 2025-06-11 05:58:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486275890 Georgia , glory , Maisie Hkstudent https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486276660 ✅- creative .


🔨- language . laughing

]]> 2025-06-11 05:58:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486276660 Jerry, Willkie and Coco 200101356 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486276805 It full with feeling. However start is Chinese

]]> 2025-06-11 05:58:46 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486276805 Jayden, Gabby, Hei hei https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486276936 ✅-Good job with the acting!


🔨-Elliot didn’t take it seriously

]]> 2025-06-11 05:58:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486276936 Feedback Shahzain Sean Finn 200109411 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486277006 ✅ - Amazing, shows you guys have been practicing alot.


🔨 - Laughter and giggles

]]> 2025-06-11 05:58:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486277006 Jayden, Gabby, Hei hei https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486280793 ✅-GOOD JOB WITH MULTITASKING DEATH


🔨-DEATH

]]> 2025-06-11 06:01:00 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486280793 Feedback Shahzain Sean Finn 200109411 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486280966 ✅ - Narrator = also a character, great teamwork like the others


🔨 - Laughters and giggles

]]> 2025-06-11 06:01:10 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486280966 Connie,Elena,Stephanie,Miranda https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486281100 Tick-even though two people still can pull it off

Hammer-a bit less context

]]> 2025-06-11 06:01:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486281100 Kobi, Jackie, Zack and Yusuf 130409829 https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486282331 ✅ : Even though only two people they still cooperated really well


🔨 : Can work on confidents/ louder voice


]]> 2025-06-11 06:02:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ycishk1/dgeg8o60xnm16to4/wish/3486282331