https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w Be creative and use poetic devices effectively! en-us 2017-11-08 05:07:54 UTC 2017-11-17 14:09:49 UTC hello@padlet.com CCLcandylai https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/204718732 (Group 10) (Miss Lai)
We are like ordinary teenage girls. We have questions about growing up, our relationships with family, friends or maybe boyfriends. We have doubts about our studies and future. God knows what will we become or do in ten years' time? What if I was someone else? ]]> 2017-11-08 09:20:08 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/204718732 CCLcandylai https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/204719245 (Group 10) (Miss Lai)
We live on the Earth like how animals inhibit ecosystems. We certainly take from the Earth, but what do we give it? Unfortunately mostly destruction and wars...?]]> 2017-11-08 09:22:33 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/204719245 CCLcandylai https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/204719568 (Group 10) (Miss Lai)
Have you ever thought that we are living on the Earth as experiment subjects while aliens from the outer space are studying our behavior? It's like how we study... bacteria on a watch glass. A crazy idea, won't you say? :p]]> 2017-11-08 09:23:53 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/204719568 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205587136   We are normal teenagers who are typically full of energy and spiteful. Although our future is unpredictable, we have dreams like being teachers and lawyers. Are we  helpful and hardworking enough to fulfill our little dreams?]]> 2017-11-10 07:26:38 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205587136 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205599888  We live on the Earth like how animals inhibit ecosystems. We certainly take from the Earth , but actually we also give lives to the Earth. Unfortunately, the air pollutants from the industrial areas destroyed the Earth‘s health.]]> 2017-11-10 08:28:03 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205599888 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205604981 I have thought that we are living on the Earth as experiment subjects while aliens from the outer space are studying our behavior. It's like how astronauts studied other planets to discover new places to live on.]]> 2017-11-10 08:46:38 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205604981 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205859426 We think that "me" could be a famous singer.She/He is very popular in Hong Kong and have won lots of award.Everyone in Hong Kong knows her/him.

(Miss Lai)
--> Language:
-sparks off feelings of romantic love
-took the audience into an atmosphere of romance 
-a soulful voice = a balm to the soul? an emotion booster?]]> 2017-11-11 07:02:27 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205859426 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205861915 we think 'me' could be a little girl who was born in a village .Her family is not rich.Therefore,they can't send the girl to school.Although she is like a mote of dust suspended in the sunbeam,she dreams big.She wishes to be a doctor when she grows up in order to help the people in need.However,she knows that under this condition,it is impossible for her to study medical,so she feels frustrated and forlorn now.
Will her life have a favourable turn？

(Miss Lai)
--> Language: Lovely descriptions!
Good use of simile to show her helplessness.]]> 2017-11-11 07:52:12 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205861915 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205863031 We think that the"Earth" represents Hong Kong in our"story".]]> 2017-11-11 08:17:43 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205863031 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205863133 We think that the"universe"could represent the other counties.The singer is not well known in other countries.Only a few people know her/him.She/He is surprised that many people don't know her.

(Miss Lai)
So it is a self-discovery journey! Good connection between the main ideas!]]> 2017-11-11 08:19:48 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205863133 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205883020 We think that 'me' is an individual person , he or she could be a teenage girl like us. She has a lot of friends and has a lot of dreams to achieve, like what to be when she grows up and also she wants to get good grades in her secondary school life. She also has a lot of questions about boys or even maybe she feels puzzled because she wants to have peer recognisation but she also wants to be different at the same time.]]> 2017-11-11 13:16:37 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205883020 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205938927 The Earth is a paradise for creature to survive and enjoy every grace god gives us.The Earth is our lovely home. We should protect and love it. We live on the earth like animals inhibit ecosystem, we certainly take from the earth. But what did we give to the Earth? Varieties of pollution ?These have destroyed the earth ecology, pollution should be brought to an end. Otherwise, if we keep destroying our home day by day, the Earth will die very soon.
Then it is too late to regret.

]]> 2017-11-12 03:42:26 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205938927 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205945942 The Earth in our poem represents our own country. We live on the Earth like how animals inhabit ecosystems. We certainly take from the Earth, but we only give pollution so to destroy our world. Unfortunately, there are some wars that makes the Earth unpeaceful.]]> 2017-11-12 06:40:40 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205945942 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205947699 Yes we have thought that we are living on the Earth as experiment subjects.It is like we study animals and at the same time they are studying us ,such as Dolphins ,monkeys and etc.]]> 2017-11-12 07:14:11 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205947699 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205948270 We think that 'me' is a girl who was ill-treated by her terrifying mother.However,she didn't stop hoping and she persist to chase her dream. The big dream of her was to find love in her family.After a few years,she successfully achieve her goal because she receives the love from her foster family.]]> 2017-11-12 07:24:20 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205948270 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205949032 we think "me" is a little girl who is curious about everything. she is interested in the earth and the universe but she don't have time to study what she like because of she need to join different interest class. her dream is to become a scientists specialized at the universe and change people's thinking but she think she will never succeed since she think she is so little and normal and too weak to change the world.]]> 2017-11-12 07:37:01 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205949032 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205953135 Yes, we have thought we are living things on the Earth as experiments subjects while aliens from outer space are studying our behavior. As aliens are studying us, they may all have a smart brain and acquire many human knowledge or actions. They may be even invisible or act like a human in order to join the society and live together. That's horrible! Oppositely, they may study our actions and limited knowledge and find a perfect time to start a war between human and aliens. Intelligent aliens may win with special powers and destroy the Earth to be the King on the Universe.

]]> 2017-11-12 08:56:41 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205953135 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205953393 We believe 'me' is someone who was born with a silver spoon so she always mistreats others and thinks she is the king of the world. Unfortunately, her parents went into bankruptcy and they had to restart their lives. She has to face a huge change in her life. Do you think she can survive without money and friends?]]> 2017-11-12 09:00:26 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205953393 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205955966 we think that earth is a planet that living creatures live and we also live there.Our ideal earth is a peaceful,friendly earth. However, people keep destroying it. We give a lot of pollution and harmful problems to our earth. We didn't protect it. Also,there are many fighting and argument between people and people.That disrupts the peace on earth.]]> 2017-11-12 09:34:12 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205955966 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205964451 The universe is large and uncountable.Many things of it are unknown. Therefore, there may have aliens. Or else,the world was built by the aliens. we are their experiment subject. they want to discover how clever  their invention can be. If the experiment fails  or can't reach their expectation,they will destroy our universe.the experiment can be the time that we find the true,the time we find another place for living will we destroy our world by ourselves or the information of the outside world that we discover. Global warming maybe a sign of warning .It tells us that the experiment is going to fail.then ,it is the end of our world.]]> 2017-11-12 11:05:13 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205964451 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205964692 we think that earth is a place which provide places  for people to live .However people were too selfish that they did a lot of things that will destroy the earth,such as throwing rubbish into the sea and so on.]]> 2017-11-12 11:07:29 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205964692 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205973482 The Universe is the home of different galaxy and planets. Human keep exploring and discover new things about the universe. Though we haven't found any living creature on other planets, there may already by aliens out there studying our behavior.]]> 2017-11-12 13:03:09 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205973482 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205973645 The whole Universe is a living system that we are all part of. The source energy is everywhere, including yourself.This affirmation: “I am the Universe, the Universe is me” is to remind us that we are part of the divine creation. We are pure potential, and I this helps us realize that and help us create a better world for ourselves and everyone else because we really are all in it together.]]> 2017-11-12 13:05:15 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205973645 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205975373 We think that “me” could be someone that follows her/his dreams. She/he deeply believes that if we follow our dreams and work hard, we will pursue it. 
She/he will work hard and never give up and think that perseverance is the key to success
She/he wants to inspire and motivate everyone to fight for their dreams as well. ]]> 2017-11-12 13:25:30 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205975373 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205975832 We think that “me” is someone who believes in their dreams and they will never give up easily. She/he believes that perseverance is the key to success . She/he also wants to inspire and motivate people to fight for their hopes and stay strong, work hard.]]> 2017-11-12 13:30:18 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205975832 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205976224 We believe that “the Earth” is a home for us. A place where we feel like we belong. A place where it’s familiar and a place you love and miss. However, nowadays people are treating Earth very badly in many ways. The Earth is now facing loads of problems such as pollution, global warming and wars etc... what could we do to save our Earth? ]]> 2017-11-12 13:33:42 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/205976224 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/206157143 Universe is really big right? I think the universe represents the whole world and the planets represent us, the tiny number naive people. We sometimes think we are smart and understand everything around us but we only know a bit about them. We seldom think that we are important and the world can't continue to work without us. We are only the small potatoes and we are only a small part of the whole world.

(Miss Lai)
Good connection between the ideas on 'the EARTH' and 'the UNIVERSE'. To connect them with 'ME', why don't you write a stanza about how the arrogant humans speak as they take pride in the advancement in science and technology and exploit natural resources, bringing harm to our earth. Then let the EARTH speak in another stanza, reprimanding the humans for the destruction done? Then let the UNIVERSE speak, saying a balance should be struck?]]> 2017-11-13 10:23:32 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/206157143 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/206201345 The earth is the home of every creatures include humans and animals. She has provided us lots of things like the sky, the nature, the lands ect. It is the responsibility for us to protect our home but humans don't seem to care about this. They don't take care of their home but even damage it and destroy the environment by cutting more and more trees, making more pollution such as air and water pollution. So these are the reciprocation of what the earth has given to us ? The earth is getting sick now, how can we help her?]]> 2017-11-13 13:04:39 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/206201345 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/206240776 We are young girls who are curious about things happening around us. During this period of time, we are still exploring different kinds of new things. Sometimes, we may be impulsive and make some wrong decisions. We have to learn from these experiences. Also, we may encounter problems and questions of relationships between friends and family, we should handle them calmly. ]]> 2017-11-13 14:20:30 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/206240776 https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/206260960 We think the universe represent infinity of knowledge, where we only explored and known is very little. We may need those knowledge for protecting our planet or even ourselves when the environment of living get worse. We will need inspiration and scientific knowledge from our universe, to make the world a better place to live]]> 2017-11-13 14:49:56 UTC https://padlet.com/CCLcandylai/dg79t61gzz7w/wish/206260960