My Little Land in LANG1003 by Ni YuShang https://padlet.com/yniafusthk/dfxvntgz1m0f en-us 2020-02-26 04:29:17 UTC 2024-05-31 19:09:48 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f423.png First thought of BEAUTY yniafusthk https://padlet.com/yniafusthk/dfxvntgz1m0f/wish/450560622 Beauty needs to be seen clearly and be admired sincerely in nowadays society, whether of the external attractiveness or inner appeal. 
There have been arguments that beauty in appearance is not so potent compared to inner beauty. However, for oneself, enjoying this charm not only bring confidence but also show a sense of ritual in life. In addition, the visual feast which brought by beautiful things or people particularly improve others’ comfort. As there are tons of eye-catching sophistication with fickle trends; thus, inner beauty also acts as a joyful cradle where offers people a short interval during the exhausting schedules.
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https://voca.ro/oH4cCcJKPlf]]> 2020-02-26 04:32:13 UTC https://padlet.com/yniafusthk/dfxvntgz1m0f/wish/450560819 the Definition of BEAUTY yniafusthk https://padlet.com/yniafusthk/dfxvntgz1m0f/wish/454117678 beauty is a unique desire, it may be imperfect but you will still admire :)]]> 2020-03-04 04:17:11 UTC https://padlet.com/yniafusthk/dfxvntgz1m0f/wish/454117678 changing to an ACADEMIC intro yniafusthk https://padlet.com/yniafusthk/dfxvntgz1m0f/wish/454124768 Pursuing beauty is a born feature for humans. The absence of beauty may lead to loss of aesthetic and make life more humdrum. Based on this, the beauty industry has been developed quickly in the past decades, in which areas include cosmetics, plastic surgery, as well as weight management… To build up a more fitness and healthy self, people put attention to one of these aspects -- weight management. Take Hongkong as an example, the amount of slimming products advertisements keeps rising steadily, not only do they limit the meaning of ideal beauty by creating a typical model, but also bring the inequality among industries. The article will start with the phenomenon of excessive beauty advertising, then move to the discussion on how advertisements shift people’s perceptions towards beauty in a negative way.]]> 2020-03-04 04:44:32 UTC https://padlet.com/yniafusthk/dfxvntgz1m0f/wish/454124768 INTRODUCTION of my essay yniafusthk https://padlet.com/yniafusthk/dfxvntgz1m0f/wish/466242004 Literature is the sum of pieces of writing that` are valued as works of art, especially novels, plays, and poems, which is the foundation of civilization. Also, it is known as one of the most critical elements of aesthetics. Now it is an era in which thousands of new literary works publish daily, and authors are gradually changing from a group of professional scholars to amateurs. Engaging in literature is not only a means of earning a living but also a form of leisure and entertainment, which plays a vital role in the lives of people. The essay argues that to expose the public to the beauty of literature, the Chinese government should simplify the procedures for individual publishing and layout more funds on the new media platform. It will begin with the analysis of the multiple benefits brought by literature, then move on to the comparison between traditional publications and new media literature; finally, some practical suggestions will be provided for citizens as well as officials.]]> 2020-03-19 13:18:35 UTC https://padlet.com/yniafusthk/dfxvntgz1m0f/wish/466242004 First body paragraph of my essay yniafusthk https://padlet.com/yniafusthk/dfxvntgz1m0f/wish/466247364 Since ancient times, literature has the educational function, especially the social cognitive function, which includes the value of knowledge, sociality, and oneself. Gossman (1982) points out that literary education may play the role of diminishing the social division of rich and poor, of the educated bourgeoisie and the property, fewer toilers working in the field or factory. For instance, "Li Sao" from the great poets Qu yuan in the Warring State Period depicts plants such as magnolia, vanilla, and lily, as well as animals, include horses and foxes. This suggests that literary works provide information to the public for obtaining knowledge. Besides, the well-known writer Stendhal's "Red and Black," by describing individual tragedies and revealing the real public life, deeply reveals the dark social situation after the failure of the French bourgeois revolution. More than that, works such as "Brothers Karamazov" uses insinuations to alert readers and encourage the public to make use of self-criticism. It can be seen that compared to the past, the education role of literature lies mainly in the level of individual spiritual consciousness, and therefore, more critical in modern society.]]> 2020-03-19 13:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/yniafusthk/dfxvntgz1m0f/wish/466247364 A delightful scholarly space with a background that complements your content well. Re: first body paragraph, instead of 'This shows': consider changing to a hedged version: This suggests; this may suggest. Why? Because it shows that you as a writer are allowing more than one interpretation, which also shows that you are open to different perceptions. https://padlet.com/yniafusthk/dfxvntgz1m0f/wish/466333183 Rosie]]> 2020-03-19 14:10:06 UTC https://padlet.com/yniafusthk/dfxvntgz1m0f/wish/466333183 houdongliang84 https://padlet.com/yniafusthk/dfxvntgz1m0f/wish/468718453 Hi Yolanda, I think you have a really strong thesis statement and a clear essay outline. Your first body paragragh is very logic,as many connections are used to improve the cohesion and coherence.
However, in my opinion, your fisrt two body paragragh seem more expository than argumentative. So I wonder how you make elaborations combined with some more debatable topics. I am facing such problem now becasuse I think our essay structures have some similarities. 

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