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From my perspective, I think I just put the multiculturalism of foreign country and my country as my reflection at first. Then I searched lots of the information about my country and other countries in the world,especially UK, and summarized detailed the different part of them, such as culture,religion,education from then till now. But the feedback of my tutor was that I was writing too much history of multiculturalism about China and UK, and was lacked of my own opinion. I felt a little bit confused.

Then I started to review my reflection and read all the references again. Fortunately, I have some new result from that way and burst more ideas for my essay. After this process, I feel that my understanding of multiculturalism has become more deeply, and I have learned more about the impact of multiculturalism on each country and period . This also make my essay more specific and accuracy which let my example and evidence more powerful. There are lots of grammatical errors in my essay ,my tutor pick all the fault and correct it to me, which will help me in writing my future essays easily.

According to the study during class, I first thought that I should write down the outline and then expand it, so that my article can be more organized. After re-reading my article, I feel that I should write more bullet point and make the article more concise and clear.

Last time , I forget to go to the tutorial class , so I think I still lack some guidance. After the next tutorial, I think I will have a better improvement on my article.

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