Conclusions by https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq Made with charm en-us 2020-11-16 14:53:54 UTC 2025-12-19 12:10:51 UTC hello@padlet.com Do Now: Have you ever watched a movie or TV show season/series finale that left you disappointed at the end? What was that like? What about it was disappointing? alevine141 https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/927417159 2020-11-16 14:55:00 UTC https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/927417159 How has each version of the conclusion changed? What makes each version better? What strategies does the author use for a strong conclusion? alevine141 https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/927420496 2020-11-16 14:55:35 UTC https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/927420496 alevine141 https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/927421743 What was it like to rewrite a whole new conclusion?]]> 2020-11-16 14:55:49 UTC https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/927421743 alevine141 https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/927423805 Did your partner's feedback help? Which conclusion did your partner like better? Do you agree with him/her?]]> 2020-11-16 14:56:12 UTC https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/927423805 Joseph Lee josephl5272 https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/932963045 One time I was watching a movie called fast and furious and I knew it was going to end in a race. I wasn't surprised at all.]]> 2020-11-17 17:39:04 UTC https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/932963045 Igli Kaci https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/932965211 I have, but it was a video game, that was Max Payne 3, it was dissaptioning because all progress was lost at the end.
 
]]> 2020-11-17 17:39:23 UTC https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/932965211 Mona Tasnim tasnimm9621 https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/932966233 I don't think I have watched a movie or TV show that disappointed me at the end . I think so far the movies or series I watched always surprised me at the end . Or it just that maybe one movie or tv show did disappoint me but I just can't remember . ]]> 2020-11-17 17:39:32 UTC https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/932966233 Tristan Le tristanl1545 https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/932969002 It has happened to me when reading a book ]]> 2020-11-17 17:39:58 UTC https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/932969002 https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/932971446 I was watching Persona 5 the animation, at the end "Joker" one of the protagonist dies, after that the group disperses ]]> 2020-11-17 17:40:21 UTC https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/932971446 Brianna Gantier BobaTea_Bri https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/932988153 I once watched a movie when I was little on the TV that I forgot the name of, I expected some dramatic ending but the only thing that happened was some side character getting the flu and recovering. It was very disappointing because I was so prepared for some plot twist and I get a person getting sick for 2 days.]]> 2020-11-17 17:43:06 UTC https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/932988153 Tristan Le tristanl1545 https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/933046474 The author wrote the conclusion with detail and specification. They also used higher level vocabulary. ]]> 2020-11-17 17:53:19 UTC https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/933046474 Joseph Lee josephl5272 https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/933050982 In the first one it was very repetitive and boring. In the second one she used better vocabulary. In the third one she kept the same idea but explained it and rapped up the essay better.]]> 2020-11-17 17:54:07 UTC https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/933050982 Igli https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/933055993 I noticed every time its making it more personal 

]]> 2020-11-17 17:55:01 UTC https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/933055993 https://padlet.com/alevine141/de8ok9lj5e8scppq/wish/933058919 Joseph Lee
Joseph Lee
In the first one it was very repetitive and boring. In the second one she used better vocabulary. In the third one she kept the same idea but explained it and rapped up the essay better.
Tristan Le
Tristan Le 
The author wrote the conclusion with detail and specification.  They also used higher level vocabulary.  
Brianna Gantier
Brianna Gantier
I once watched a movie when I was little on the TV that I forgot the name of, I expected some dramatic ending but the only thing that happened was some side character getting the flu and recovering. It was very disappointing because I was so prepared for some plot twist and I get a person getting sick for 2 days.
I was watching Perso
I was watching Persona 5 the animation, at the end "Joker" one of the protagonist dies, after that the group disperses 
Tristan Le
Tristan Le
It has happened to me when reading a book 
Igli Kaci
I have, but it was a video game, that was Max Payne 3, it was dissaptioning because all progress was lost at the end.
 
Mona Tasnim
Mona Tasnim
I don't think I have watched a movie or TV show that disappointed me at the end . I think so far the movies or series I watched always surprised me at the end . Or it just that maybe one movie or tv show did disappoint me but I just can't remember . 
Joseph Lee
Joseph Lee
One time I was watching a movie called fast and furious and I knew it was going to end in a race. I wasn't surprised at all.
Do Now: Have you ever watched a movie or TV show season/series finale that left you disappointed at the end? What was that like? What about it was disappointing?
Do Now: Have you ever watched a movie or TV show season/series finale that left you disappointed at the end? What was that like? What about it was disappointing? 
How has each version of the conclusion changed? What makes each version better? What strategies does the author use for a strong conclusion?
How has each version of the conclusion changed? What makes each version better? What strategies does the author use for a strong conclusion? 
What was it
What was it like to rewrite a whole new conclusion?
Did your par
Did your partner's feedback help? Which conclusion did your partner like better? Do you agree with him/her?
Igli: I see its making it more personal ever time 


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