Innovate the sentence by Jo Pearce

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jomarypearce — 2023-11-23 10:33:01 UTC

Inside, they saw dark shadows, old machinery and piles of dusty boxes.

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Pie

TalkforWriting — 2023-11-27 16:53:29 UTC

Outside, Sam saw an ancient motorbike, cobbled streets and a tiny street goblin.

Georgie and Emma

2023-11-27 16:53:32 UTC

Inside, they saw bright sunlight, empty walls and uneven floorboards.

Inside, he spotted dusty cobwebs, a worn banister and the sunlight bursting through.

mushrif — 2023-11-27 16:54:03 UTC

2023-11-27 16:54:06 UTC

Inside, he saw an endless tunnel, crumbling walls and falling rocks.

2023-11-27 16:54:07 UTC

Outside, she saw familiar cobbled streets, his bike but not him.

Rosie

2023-11-27 16:54:10 UTC

Inside, they saw worn banisters, rotten woodwork and smoke-ridden wallpaper.

2023-11-27 16:54:34 UTC

Inside, they saw elongated shadows, knotted cobwebs and dusty artwork.

Lucy

lfoster7305 — 2023-11-27 16:54:49 UTC

Inside, they saw rusted railings, rotten floorboards and endless shadows.

Georgie and Emma

2023-11-27 16:54:49 UTC

Outside, he saw cobbled streets, rows of buildings and an abandoned motorbike.

Jo S

2023-11-27 16:54:57 UTC

Inside, they saw peeling paint, crumbling walls and rotting sills.

2023-11-27 16:55:02 UTC

Inside, sun blazed through the grimey window, stairs crumbled and dust hung in the air.

Staircase - Matt Cambridge-Harrison

2023-11-27 16:55:06 UTC

Underneath, the mice devoured the corpses of their siblings, spiders danced around the dilapidated floorboards and dust settled on the faded paintings.

2023-11-27 16:55:08 UTC

Inside, the boy saw small rocks on the dirty ground, tiny ants running along the sides and bats hanging upside down above.

Michelle

2023-11-27 16:55:30 UTC

At the mouth of the cave, he peered in to see an uneven path, crumbling walls and darkness that seemed to swallow it all.

Cave

2023-11-27 16:55:41 UTC

Inside, they saw a twisting pathway, crumbling walls and an endless darkness.

On the staircase, he brushed past curtains of moss, silvery spider webs and decades of dust and rot.

2023-11-27 16:55:48 UTC

Inside, they saw a rusty handrail, a dilapidated staircase and creaking floorboards.

2023-11-27 16:55:50 UTC

Jo.J

joevans41 — 2023-11-27 16:55:59 UTC

In the distance, they noticed streaks of light, peeling wallpaper and woodworm ridden floorboards.

2023-11-27 16:56:02 UTC

Inside, they saw a crooked staircase, broken bannisters and bright sunlight on the cracked plaster.

Inside, they heard cobwebs whispering, a mote of dust tumbling and the great staircase releasing one last sigh.

Sandgate — 2023-11-27 16:56:02 UTC

Yvonne

ydaubney — 2023-11-27 16:56:04 UTC

Inside, they saw a crumpled staircase, derelict walls and an arched vacant window.

2023-11-27 16:56:06 UTC

Inside, they saw endless shadows, rickety stairs and thin glass windows.

2023-11-27 16:56:22 UTC

Inside, Mia could see dark shadows, a dusty path leading to damp corners and spider webs hanging above.

Tiyana

2023-11-27 16:58:42 UTC

Inside, they discovered a once-grand staircase, tangled cobwebs and thick layers of dust.