Remake of (Model) Narrative Writing Project: My Unjust Society by Makayla Bell https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07 This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC 2026-02-03 00:35:30 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png What are Human Rights? 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019484 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019484 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019485 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019485 30 Basic Human Rights 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019486 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019486 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019487 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019487 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019488 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019488 Rough Draft 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019489 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019489 Final Draft 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019490 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019490 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019491 This story is going to be in third person with a narrator telling the story.]]> 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019491 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019492 My story takes place in the present. The place is called Montgomery. It is a misterious place where people have many people have come up missing. People always seem to be happy maybe a little too happy... It isunjust because nobody has freedom and there are camreas everywhere and if you don't smile the government secretly finds a way to make you smile by stiching clothing pins to their faces. When the president finds out they are doing this he misteriously winds up dead to.]]> 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019492 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019493 Jalen (jay) - a 13 year old girl. She is an outgoing person and instantly get everything. Her dad and mom lived at Montgomery before they came up missing. Now she lives with her cousins.
Blake- Jay's 13 year old twin brother. He is troubled and gets involved with too many police investigations to be a normal kid. ]]> 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019493 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019494 They realize everyone is acting abnormally happy and they find out that the government wants everyone to be happy because it will make their god, Aaron happy. The government are really creepy clowns who DEEPLY believe that if you don't smile you are dishonoring Aaron.]]> 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019494 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019495 Blake is really part of a secret society called "Chester-fry". And they make the government normal people and vote for a new government. Jaylen and Blake find out that the government is the reason their parents are "missing".`]]> 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019495 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019496 Blake goes from acting like a troubled kid to showing his sister how he can change the world. Jaylen starts to realize her brother is not the dump she thought he was and she starts to actually get along with him. ]]> 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019496 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019497 The government is about to kill Blak when...]]> 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019497 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019498  Think outside the box and look at the bigger picture. What is in front of you is not always the whole thing. Evidence from the Narritive: The kids saw people smiling. However, all the thought of it was that they were happy people. When everyone was really dying inside.]]> 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019498 Due Dates 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019499 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

]]> 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019499 Prompt 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019500 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019500 Theo's Song 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019501 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019501 Rubric 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019502 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019502 Point of View: 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019503 The point of view is a narrator in 3rd person and you can tell because it call the characters by their names it's not from their point of view.]]> 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019503 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019504 There are many things making this an unjust society such as no freedom and things like that but the the most basic human right that they denied was happiness.]]> 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019504 Characters: 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019505
  • Athuorities/government
  • The Decider: someone who decides where the apprentcies go
  • Theo: 13 year old boy who wanted to be a song writter but ended up a blacksmith
  • Neema: a fellow apprentice blacksmith to Theo 
  • Nanny: irrelevant lady who was supposedly taking care of Theo before he was taken

    • ]]>     2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019505     Conflict: 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019506 The government takes everyone's happiness because they want to control everyone and they take his happiness by making him a blacksmith when they know he wanted to a song writter]]> 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019506 Plot: Sequential 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019507 Event 1#: The narrator sets the scene with a a flashback about Theo being a Balcksmith
    Event 2#: Theo leaves the pod with the government when he is 13
    Event 3#: The decider interveiwed Theo and he tells her about his dreams to be a songwritter and sharing his music with the world. Then she wishes him luck
    Event 4#: Neema tells Theo about the governments plan to make them unhappy blacksmiths and when Theo asks why they want them to be unhappy she tells him thats it's the governments only way of controling the people
    Event 5# (Climax): Theo rebels against the government and starts singing to the sound of the hammers and all the other blacksmiths sang with him
    Event 6#:The government talks to Theo and tell him what he did was "unexeptable" but Theo dissagrees and stands by his choice so they took his voice with a black thread
    Event 7#: Word got around about what had happened and they saw it as "injustice" so they also stood by Theo's choice and sing super loud
    Event 8#(Resolution): The government try to take everyones voice but they finally give up and tell everyone they can do whatever they want:)]]>     2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019507     Theme: 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019508 I think that the theme is that one little voice can make a big difference. That one little voice or one little 13 year old can change an whole government and society.]]> 2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019508 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019509 What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write. 

    My narritive is going to be about a girl named taylen and her brother justin and they move to a place called Montgomery where their parents misteriously died and they find that everyone is acting abnormally happy. They find out it's because the goverment will kill them if they don't. They put this theory to the test. Just as the government is about to kill Justin his secret society comes out and turns the government to stone.]]>     2017-12-14 00:55:03 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/216019509     Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 201000334 https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/217055940 Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 18:28:12 UTC https://padlet.com/201000334/dbz9t8c68b07/wish/217055940