Period 6 by Carrie Raiyawa https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl Please write two different notes about what parts of your speech with which you need the most help en-us 2017-01-29 17:43:11 UTC 2017-02-01 19:15:39 UTC hello@padlet.com I need help making my speech more emotional and less bland https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150691339 2017-01-31 21:03:45 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150691339 I need help with structure of my paragraphs https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150691464 2017-01-31 21:04:16 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150691464 I need supporting my details and opinions https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150691538 2017-01-31 21:04:38 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150691538 I need help adding strong words to my speech. https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150691539 2017-01-31 21:04:38 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150691539 I need help making my speech more emotional and less bland https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150691848 2017-01-31 21:05:57 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150691848 I need help extending my speech https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150692004 2017-01-31 21:06:45 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150692004 I need help making my speech seem more of a positional speech and less of an expository text https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150701083 2017-01-31 21:50:00 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150701083 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150706975 i need help extending my speech and adding more details ]]> 2017-01-31 22:28:59 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150706975 I need help making my speech explain my position and i need help making it have more emotion and less bland https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150713186 2017-01-31 23:24:22 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150713186 I need help lengthening my speech https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150714099 2017-01-31 23:34:53 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150714099 I need help adding more opinion and emotion and less fact https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150714145 2017-01-31 23:35:24 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150714145 i need help stating my position on the topic a little better https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150716598 2017-02-01 00:03:28 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150716598 I need help showing how my topic is important https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150716676 2017-02-01 00:04:22 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150716676 I need help making my speech more interesting when I have kind of a boring topic hros7760 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150717430 2017-02-01 00:16:18 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150717430 I need help catching the reader's attention in the first paragraph hros7760 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150717510 2017-02-01 00:17:40 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150717510 I need help with removing mundanity from my speech https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150717625

]]> 2017-02-01 00:19:23 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150717625 I need help with lengthening my speech https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150717747 2017-02-01 00:21:09 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150717747 I need help with removing/replacing "be" verbs https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150719832 2017-02-01 00:47:17 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150719832 cjia0060 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150721721 I need help replacing my "be" verbs]]> 2017-02-01 01:05:42 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150721721 cjia0060 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150721772 I need help making my speech more interesting]]> 2017-02-01 01:06:15 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150721772 I need help on closing https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150721826 2017-02-01 01:06:51 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150721826 Be verbs need fixin https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150721873 2017-02-01 01:07:19 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150721873 I need help on fixing my be verbs https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150729120 2017-02-01 02:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150729120 I need help with changing my sentence beginnings https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150729169 2017-02-01 02:22:28 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150729169 Speech https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150732160 I need help with eliminating some of my be verbs.
I also need help with changing some of my sentence beginnings]]> 2017-02-01 03:05:12 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150732160 I need help with citations https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150732199 2017-02-01 03:05:44 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150732199 I can help with putting in strong verbs https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150732282 2017-02-01 03:06:55 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150732282 I need help with replacing be verbs https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150732310 2017-02-01 03:07:14 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150732310 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150733745 I need help with making my speech longer.]]> 2017-02-01 03:25:50 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150733745 I need help adding more opinion. https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150733812 2017-02-01 03:26:29 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150733812 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150734401 I can help with changing sentence beginnings.]]> 2017-02-01 03:33:12 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150734401 https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150734680 I need help with changing some of my "be" verbs.

]]> 2017-02-01 03:36:53 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150734680 I need help with making my conclusion better https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150735305 2017-02-01 03:44:15 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150735305 I need help with getting rid of "be" verbs https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150735337 2017-02-01 03:44:40 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150735337 I need help making my speech longer https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150956529 2017-02-01 19:11:11 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150956529 I need help choosing strong words https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150956729 2017-02-01 19:11:38 UTC https://padlet.com/craiyawa1/dbbgaw1vdnwl/wish/150956729