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      <title>Style exercise Writing a Dissertation by Martijn Wackers</title>
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      <pubDate>2022-06-02 09:34:34 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Sofia</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>The temporal relationship between neuronal activity and the observed signal cannot generally be described by a universal model, as the neurovascular system, which remains an active area of research, is complex, and may vary across brain areas and behavioral states. </p><p>-&gt; </p><p>This temporal relationship between neuronal activity and the observed vascular signal cannot be described by a universal model. The neurovascular system is complex, and may vary across subjects, brain areas and behavioral states, therefore its characterization remains an active area of research.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2026-05-29 10:05:54 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Vidhya</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>For spacecraft tracking, phase-referencing should be no less accurate than ΔDOR in principle; it is more permissive about the spacecraft signal type; and operationally it can call on the much larger global pool of VLBI-capable telescopes, rather than just the deep-space tracking stations.</p><p><br></p><p>From an operational perspective, it can also make use of the much larger global pool of VLBI-capable telescopes, rather than being limited to specialized deep-space tracking stations.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2026-05-29 10:07:23 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Christof</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Before: In particular, ship operators must continuously make decisions regarding vessel speed, heading, routing, and operational limits under uncertain and dynamic wave conditions. For example, ships encountering severe weather may reduce speed or alter heading...</p><p><br/></p><p>After: In particular, ship operators must continuously make decisions regarding the operation of the vessel under uncertain and dynamic wave conditions. For example, ships encountering severe weather may reduce speed or alter heading...</p><p><br/></p><p>Reason: Removed "vessel speed, heading, ..." and replaced with "operation of the vessel" because the next sentence gives examples. Avoids repetition.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2026-05-29 10:07:34 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Haonan</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Original:</p><p>Many airlines still rely on relatively static maintenance planning policies. In the case study considered in this dissertation, repetitive maintenance is organised through a block-based structure in which routine work is grouped into recurring maintenance opportunities.</p><p><br/></p><p>Revised:</p><p>The common practice of airline maintenance policies are still relatively static in the industry. For example, the case study considered in this dissertation organises repetitive maintenance through a block-based structure in which routine work is grouped into recurring maintenance opportunities.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2026-05-29 10:09:37 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Leila</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Before:</p><p>It first investigates how HDEV charging demand can be estimated and how charging infrastructure can be planned and designed to meet this demand.</p><p>After:</p><p>It first investigates how charging demand for HDEVs can be estimated from freight transport operations and mobility patterns. Based on this demand, it then investigates how charging infrastructure can be planned at the network level to support the transition toward electric freight transport. Afterward, the focus shifts from system level planning to station level design, where the sizing and configuration of charging stations are studied to ensure that the identified demand can be reliably served at selected locations.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2026-05-29 10:09:40 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Karin</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/martijnwackers/db6gm9zrre6i9mry/wish/3934446035</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<p>Before:</p><p><br/></p><p>Working towards set objectives, DP’s advocates turned to the digital footprint produced by smartphones and wearables, claiming that it can reveal behaviour indicative of the symptomatics of mental distress or such psychiatric conditions as generalised anxiety disorder, major depressive disorder, social anxiety disorder, bipolar disorder, schizophrenia, and suicidal ideation.</p><p><br/></p><p>After: </p><p><br/></p><p>Working towards set objectives, DP’s advocates turned to the digital footprint produced by smartphones and wearables as a source for revealing behaviour indicative of mental distress or variety of mental health conditions, including generalised anxiety disorder, suicidal ideation and schizophrenia.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2026-05-29 10:12:26 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Wenyu</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>Before:</p><p>This thesis therefore takes IC design as its primary technical approach, investigating how dedicated interface and power management circuits can improve the efficiency and stability of energy conversion from raw triboelectric output to a regulated supply suitable for IoT loads.</p><p><br/></p><p>After:</p><p>Therefore, this thesis takes IC design as its primary technical approach. With this approach, our work investigates how dedicated circuits can improve the efficiency and stability of triboelectric energy harvesting, particularly focusing on bridging the raw triboelectric output to a regulated supply suitable for IoT loads.</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2026-05-29 10:15:35 UTC</pubDate>
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