https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu Made with a wink and a smile en-us 2016-11-29 15:15:48 UTC 2016-12-03 13:06:13 UTC hello@padlet.com monica_maragh https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/140525692 2016-11-29 15:16:59 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/140525692 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/140527060 2016-11-29 15:19:51 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/140527060 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/140536569 The article achieve the goal4]]> 2016-11-29 15:38:08 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/140536569 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/140539098 The author did indeed keep the tone of the article "Say What", friendly and light hearted. It was entertaining and kept the reader engaged. The article provides valuable information while also including play on words. According to the newspaper article, the theme was kept funny thanks to the cartoon of the speaking animals in the top left corner. In other words, even though the article is funny, it also provides keen information about animals and how they communicate. The article illustrates that, " dolphins use different sounds in different situations...these sounds are called phonations." This statement proves that not all animals have the same language which makes them all unique and interesting. All in all, in this selection the author achieved the goal.]]> 2016-11-29 15:43:43 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/140539098 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/140540512 The article achieved the goal to convey a friendly and light-hearted tone. For example, the picture of talking animals gives the article a friendly tone. The boldface title, "Say What", is a question giving the article a light-hearted tone. The title of the article uses a question to grabs the readers attention. Overall, the article has a friendly and light-hearted tone.]]> 2016-11-29 15:46:49 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/140540512 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/140541360 The article did achieve its goal because it shows bold face words,sidebars,and headings. ]]> 2016-11-29 15:48:42 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/140541360 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/140845922 The author of the article "Say What" achieved his goal of making the article friendly and light hearted. This is because the article uses informal words and phrases such as, "Say What" and "these water loving mammals". These statements show the author doesn't intend for the article to be tough to understand. Along with these cheerful phrases and words the author added plentiful amounts of pictures such as the animals speaking. This shows a baby lion saying "ROAR" in a speech bubble while a porcupine doesn't know what the lion is saying so he says "I don't speak lion". This conveys the understanding of what the article will be about while showing a friendly mood using personification.]]> 2016-11-30 15:41:37 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/140845922 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/140848359 2016-11-30 15:46:32 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/140848359 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141130634 The author of "Say What" did achieve the goal of being light hearted and friendly. In the magazine article Say What it showed that it is light hearted and friendly by stating this " These water loving mammals."  Instead of stating facts, the author contributes to the text by adding in his opinion, and making it immensely friendly. In the article Say What it states " ]]> 2016-12-01 15:14:06 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141130634 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141130810 The author achieved the goal of conveying a friendly tone in the magazine "Say what?". This is shown in the quick but informational paragraphs of the magazine entry by having the author state friendly, encouraging words such,"Water-loving,understanding, and including animal sounds." This shows a peaceful tone because the author could have use words with negative connotations. Some of these words could have been harder to understand for the target demographic of children and also adults in some cases. An example of these convoluted words are water-oriented,  discerning, and creatures reverberation. Another example of a light-hearted tone is shown in the comic next to the title. The comic shows a lion attempting to communicate with a porcupine looking creature. This creates a childish tone that would be made to entertain a child while having a relationship pertaining to the topic of the magazine entry. Another reason why this comic shows a peaceful attitude is that any other author would just include normal captions instead of entertaining pictures.]]> 2016-12-01 15:14:30 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141130810 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141131100 The author achieved the goal of conveying a friendly and light-hearted tone. For example on the top of the page of the article "Say What" there are two animals whom are having a conversation. Normally animals only talk in cartoons. Therefore the author stages a light-hearted and friendly tone for the remaining of the piece. The text also displays]]> 2016-12-01 15:15:09 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141131100 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141131608 The author did achieved the goal to have a friendly and outgoing tone. The article "Say What," it states that dolphins are water- loving mammals. The words water-loving has a light- heated tone in the article because the word loving is a civil adjective. The author uses loving  as a light harded]]> 2016-12-01 15:16:10 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141131608 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141132702 The author did convey a friendly and light hearted tone which was the authors goal. It states in the artical"dolphins have a variety of ways to communicate with each other". This emphasizes that dolphins are light hearted friendly animals. Also in the passage it states that bees have a chimical launguage with at least 36 pheromones. This explains that they are intelligent creatures that have created their own launguage. This article is light hearted because in the passage it has animals talking to each other like they are in a cartoon. Therefor this article is light hearted because it is not serious but facts at the same time it gives superior facts about animals and their facts. In conclusion this article is light hearted and friendly tone. ]]> 2016-12-01 15:18:26 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141132702 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141134196 The author achieved the goal of conveying a friendly, light-hearted tone. In the article the author states a few key words that keep this goal true, such as, "water loving", and "amazing". These words are typically found in articles that have very light-hearted, friendly tones. They are almost never found in a serious tone, which is the complete opposite of the author's goal. Another one of the ways we know the author reached the goal is the way the article is formatted. The author uses bold fonts that are amusing to the reader. The author also made a joke between two animals in an image. A final way the author accomplished the goal was at the start of the article when he stated, "Dogs bark, cows moo, horses neigh." Then after that the author encouraged the reader to find out more. In a serious informal article they would just state the information and be done. With all the evidence provided, the author achieved the goal of conveying a friendly, light-hearted tone.]]> 2016-12-01 15:21:08 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141134196 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141135416 The author conveys a friendly, lighthearted tone in the beginning of the article, however, towards the middle of the article, it is more of a serious tone. For example, according to the article "Say What?" the author begins by saying, "Dogs bark, cows moo, and horses neigh." Furthermore, the article also states, "These water-loving mammals..." to give a warm feeling towards the dolphins. When people think of dolphins, they most likely think of cute animals that play and splash around in the ocean. The author uses this description of the dolphins to draw the reader in, thus, giving that friendly lighthearted tone. However, towards the middle and end of the article, the author provides more of a scientific, serious tone. When the author states, "They also use a series of whistles and clicks to exchange information. These sounds are called phonations." and "Some animals even make chemicals called pheromones to talk with smells." it conveys more of that serious tone.]]> 2016-12-01 15:23:26 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141135416 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141141259   The author conveyed a friendly and light-hearted tone. According to the article," Say What?," states, "Koko, in particular, has made amazing progress." This evidence displays how the author is showing his positive opinions towards the gorilla, Koko. Furthermore, the author shows a friendly tone towards the article.]]> 2016-12-01 15:36:06 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141141259 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141381146 The author of "Say What" did achieve the goal of being light hearted and friendly. In the magazine article Say What it showed that it is light hearted and friendly by stating this " These water loving mammals."  Instead of stating facts, the author contributes to the text by adding in his opinion, and making it immensely friendly. In the article the author also uses words that anyone would recognize. In scientific writing you have to write using scientific words, and a serious tone. This means he is trying to attract readers, because they will understand the article more. If the author had not done that than less people would read the article.]]> 2016-12-02 14:16:16 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141381146 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141383934 The author did achieved the goal to have a friendly and outgoing tone. The article "Say What," it states that dolphins are water- loving mammals. The words water-loving has a light- heated tone in the article because the word loving is a civil adjective. Instead of the words such as cherish, or enchanted the author used loving so a younger audience can understand,. and its not so serious. As noticed in the pictures in the article "Say What " a lion and porcupine are talking. This personification is a way of the writer to bring an understanding of the passage while also being non heavy. While the picture is light hearted ,there is a serious meaning and tone to the picture that must take a deep train of thought. The passage Dolphins uses the word phonations and in Bees it uses pheromones. These two words are differing a light hearted tone. The author did achieve a light hearted tone but he had segments of seriousness throughout the passages so it wasn't an uninformative article. In addition the writer has parts of light-hearted magazine article but while also having a serious tone.]]> 2016-12-02 14:23:30 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141383934 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141401900 The author of "Say what" did achieve their goal of making a light-hearted topic in many ways. According to the article the author uses the words "water-loving." This creates a good mood because it uses the word love which puts good images in the readers mind of kind animals. The word love can also put some good memories in the reader mind making the author and the article seem less serious. In addition, the article shows an image of a lion and a porcupine communicating with each other. This is commonly used in kid story's and not in articles. This makes the article less serious as it is not formal. However, the article uses words like "phonations" which has a serious tone because it is not common in a friendly novel . This evidence explains that the article has a serious tone and light-hearted tone. All in all, the article does a good job in making a light-hearted tone with a hint of serious nouns.     ]]> 2016-12-02 15:09:23 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141401900 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141402074 The author conveyed a friendly and light-hearted tone. According to the article," Say What?," states, "Koko, in particular, has made amazing progress." This evidence displays how the author is showing his positive opinions towards the gorilla, Koko. Furthermore, the author shows a friendly tone towards the article. Also from the article it illustrates a lion saying "Roar" and a porkipine responding with "Sorry. I don't speak lion." This means that the author intended to provide a According to the article, the author uses words such as," These water loving mammals," to set a light-hearted tone. This shows how the author sets the tone in the article.Therefore, this evidence proves how the author provides a light-hearted tone. ]]> 2016-12-02 15:09:54 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141402074 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141402313 The author achieved the goal of conveying a friendly and light-hearted tone. For example on the top of the page of the article "Say What" there are two animals whom are having a conversation in where the lion had said "roar" and the porcupine replied with "sorry I don't speak lion". Normally animals only talk in cartoons which are usually not serious, but light-hearted and humorous. Therefore the author stages a light-hearted and friendly tone for the remaining of the piece. The text uses phrases such as " water-loving" instead of the alternative which would be "Marine mammals" which does not have as much of a positive feeling on the reader. In the top introduction paragraph the author uses second person saying "You can hear the languages these animals speak", although in more formal serious tones an author will most likely use third person. All in all the author achieved the goal of imparting a friendly and light-hearted tone.]]> 2016-12-02 15:10:30 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141402313 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141402363 The author of "Say What" did achieve the goal of being light hearted and friendly. In the magazine article Say What it showed that it is light hearted and friendly by stating this " These water loving mammals."  Instead of stating facts, the author contributes to the text by adding in his opinion, and making it immensely friendly. In the article the author also uses words that anyone would recognize. In scientific writing you have to write using scientific words, and a serious tone. This means he is trying to attract readers, because they will understand the article more. If the author had not done that than less people would read the article. The author also used pictures in the article. Since they used pictures they are hoping that by having flashy colors, and pictures it would attract readers. ]]> 2016-12-02 15:10:40 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141402363 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141402638 The author did achieve his goal by making the article have a friendly and light-hearted tone. For example, in the article it states "These water-loving mammals use a variety of ways to talk to each other." This evidence proves that the author intended to convey a light-hearted and friendly tone by using the phrase "water-loving mammals." This text evidence shows that the author wanted the animals to appear sweet and kind. Furthermore the author uses an illustration of two baby mammals talking. The reason for the picture of the baby mammal was to make them look cute. Another way the author reveals a friendly tone for the article is what the animals are saying. First the baby lion says "Roar!" and the baby badger replies with "sorry. I don't speak lion." This piece of evidence shows that the author intended for the article to be light-hearted and friendly because it appears funny to the reader. Overall the author achieves his goal of making the article friendly and light-hearted and effectively displays examples throughout the whole article.]]> 2016-12-02 15:11:17 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141402638 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141403265 The author achieved the goal of conveying a friendly tone in the magazine "Say what?". This is shown in the quick but informational paragraphs of the magazine entry by having the author state friendly, encouraging words such,"Water-loving,understanding, and including animal sounds." This shows a peaceful tone because the author could have use words with negative connotations. Some of these words could have been harder to understand for the target demographic of children and also adults in some cases. Some examples of these convoluted words are water-oriented,  discerning, and creatures reverberation. Another example of a light hearted tone is shown in the comic next to the title. The comic shows a lion attempting to communicate with a porcupine looking creature. This creates a childish tone that would be made to entertain a child while having a relationship pertaining to the topic of the magazine entry. Another reason why this comic shows a peaceful attitude is that any other writer would just include normal captions instead of entertaining and humorous pictures. Therefore , the author strived to show a friendly, peaceful tone and succeeded in this writing . with this evidence it is clear how easy it is to have a light-hearted tone and reap the benefits of it.]]> 2016-12-02 15:12:52 UTC https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141403265 https://padlet.com/monica_maragh/dah14d8xrfcu/wish/141403317 The author achieved the goal of a friendly and light-hearted tone in the article "Say What." In the  series of whistles and clicks to explain. To explain, These sounds ararticle "Say What" the author writes "dolphins communicate by slapping their flukes, or tail fins, on the water." For example, They also use ae called Phonations, which scientist believe that dolphins use different sounds in different situations. Also, in the passage "Say What." in states, " animals that talk to each other is one thing, but how about aonvnimals that can talk to humans." To explain, two gorilla  named Koko and Micheal can understand, talk to humans. This evidence proves the light-hearted and friendly tone because it is talking about two gorillas who learned how to use sign language and speak to there human trainers. Lastly cited from the "Say What" passage it shows " a baby lion and porcupine are having a conversation."

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