Jakob miller Narrative Writing Project: My Unjust Society by Jakob Miller https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC 2024-05-21 05:10:26 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Diskette.png What are Human Rights? 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925761 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925761 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925762 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925762 30 Basic Human Rights 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925763 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925763 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925764 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925764 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925765 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925765 Rough Draft 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925766 It was a Thursday and mom and i were eating dinner while father was using the restroom , on the fifth floor , his favorite because it has his watch magazines in it]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925766 Final Draft 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925767 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925767 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925768 The story is third person and the narrarator is the main character.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925768 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925770 It takes place in all times and is placed in north korea]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925770 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925771 His name is Choi and he is 9 years old. He lives in a mansion , where he is living in the high class group of people and has straight a's. His father is north Korean politician in the government. His mother is a well known and very renowned doctor in their country.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925771 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925772 His parents are taken away by the secret police. They tell them that they were ratted out by their neighbors for selling information to the Americans about the nuclear strike plans and where they are going to hit.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925772 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925773 He convinces the police to let him say good by to the his parents where he hands them a taser that he grabbed out of the cops holster where they taser the cop and escape.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925773 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925774 He has to learn to escape the secret police hunting him.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925774 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925775 It is when they have to parachute into kim jong uns mansion. After that they have to hide in the mansion where it is a game of cat and mouse And they are the mouse.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925775 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925776 The theme is that don't take the blame for someone else. Also don't tell lies to the police about someone .]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925776 Due Dates 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925777 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925777 Prompt 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925778 What do you have to do for this assignment?  we have finish this padlets questions]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925778 Theo's Song 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925779 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925779 Rubric 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925780 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925780 Point of View 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925781 The pov is third person.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925781 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925782 well it is unjust because it does have freedom and independence the people have to have their jobs that they hate the most]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925782 Characters 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925783 The characters are The decider, Neema, and Theo.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925783 Conflict 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925785 the decider assigned theo to be a Blacksmith when all his life he wanted to be a singer. ]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925785 Plot: Sequential 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925786 Event #1: Theo gets his job as a blacksmith
Event #2: Theo meets a new friend named Neema
Event #3: Theo starts thinking about rebelling.
Event #:4 theo starts singing during work where he is laughed at.
Event #5 (Climax):theo  gets punished by the authoritites for singing. where he cannot talk or sing for a  month.
Event #:6 Neema is outraged at his punishmentand gets all the smiths to sing and and rebbeliate.
Event #:7 Neema and all of them get punished , but song keeps braking out .
Event #8(Resolution): The decider gives everyone the job they want and the rebellion stopped.
]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925786 Theme 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925788 The theme is don't let people pick your dreams for you , and never give up. i know this because thee is rebelling because he wants to be a singer.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925788 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925789 What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write. It is hard to live in an unjust society because you might not be able to have any freedom or you might get bullied but it is still unjust.You also never know what is going to happen in an unjust society like one day you might be living happily ever after the next day your being threaten with nukes by another country.]]> 2017-12-13 18:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/215925789 Plot Diagram Example 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/217038473 Use my plot diagram as an example of what I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 17:43:40 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/217038473 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 200901541 https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/217038574 Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 17:44:02 UTC https://padlet.com/200901541/d9v9zgy7mgqj/wish/217038574