Writing a persuasive letter and a review by Minerva Ocolisan https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx Made with a quick smile en-us 2021-01-07 18:34:39 UTC 2024-08-23 15:22:08 UTC hello@padlet.com Minerva mocolisan https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1064605038 Paragraph 1: 
I am writing to respond to the advert published on your website on the 20th December, which offers a seven-day holiday in Barbados. 
Paragraph 2: refer to your hard work throughout the year and the fact that you cannot afford to pay for a holiday because you are on minimum wage; you have a large family etc.
Paragraph 3: promise to write an appreciative review of the company and hotel you will be staying at. 
 Paragraph 4: conclusion 
In view of the reasons given above, I believe I qualify for a free holiday and I am looking forward to your response. ]]> 2021-01-07 18:40:07 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1064605038 Khadeera, research for reviews in Barbados https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1070381974 Review 1:
Carlisle Bay is well worth a visit! The beach is outstanding and you can opt to rent loungers/umbrella depending how long you stay but just up in the car park there an amazing selection of food from lady who provides. Chicken! Fish! rice! Mac cheese! Chips! Birders! Hot dogs and salad!!
It's cheap as chips and tasted delicious 🥰
These lady's are cooking since 3am so you won't get much fresher and it's great quality 🐠🐔🐔🐷🍔🍿🍿 Please support there's local businesses🙏 you won't be disappointed x
Review 2:
Carlisle Bay is very beautiful, from the beach and also when on the water and snorkelling. Do yourself a favour and do not miss this experience!
Review 3:
This is by far the best breakfast we have had so far!! Amazing food - BEST Service - owner Nick is a GEM! Quality was amazing - good portions - super attentive service!! GO THERE or MISS OUT!]]> 2021-01-09 22:29:51 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1070381974 Khadeera, persuasive letter https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1070390301                                33 Kings Heath
                                      High Street
                                     Birmingham
                                           B13 5VT

                                     09/01/2021
Dear Sir or Madame,
I am writing this letter to respond to the advert published on your website on the 15th December, which offered a seven-day holiday in Barbados.

I have been working with your company for many years, .... however I have many kids and I'm also studying as well as doing a part time job, which makes it really hard for me to earn money since I am getting minimum wage and I am not able to afford a holiday. Also this is the first time I have asked for a holiday. It would be very nice and appreciative if you offer me a holiday so I can experience a one in a lifetime opportunity!

In addition, I am willing to write an appreciative review and feedback of the hotel and resort I will be staying at. I will also spread the word to all my family and to all my friends. You should earn an increase in customer. This is a promise I will not break as long as I am offered this opportunity to go on this holiday with my family! Why don't you think about it? I mean, would you like an increase in customers?

In conclusion, I believe I am fully qualified for a free holiday and I am looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours Faithfully,
Khadeera Ghaleb!]]> 2021-01-09 22:40:35 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1070390301 Ettifaq,research for reviews in Barbados https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1080948948 Review 1
Ellie  United Kingdom

“There are no words to describe how incredible all the staff here are! It is magical sitting eating delicious food everyday looking at the picturesque beach. Room extremely comfortable. We will miss it so much! Thank you Sugar Bay!”

Review 2
Mike 

 Ireland

“First stay in Barbados and we had a wonderful time. Sugar Bay was a first class experience. Thank you to all the staff for looking after us.  We will come back. ”
]]> 2021-01-12 22:19:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1080948948 Khadeera, persuasive letter New https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1084129992   33 Kings Heath
                                      High Street
                                     Birmingham
                                           B13 5VT

                                     09/01/2021 Relax Holiday
4 Mills Street
Holloway
London 
N7 7DE

Dear Sir or Madame,

I am writing this letter to respond to the advert published on your website on the 15th December, which offered a seven-day holiday in Barbados.

I have been working with your company for many years, however I have many kids and I'm also studying as well as doing a part time job, which makes it really hard for me to earn money since I am getting minimum wage and I am not able to afford a holiday. Also this is the first time I have asked for a holiday. It would be very nice and appreciative if you offer me a holiday so I can experience a one in a lifetime opportunity!

In addition, I am willing to write an appreciative review and feedback. I will also spread the word to all my family and to all my friends. You should earn an increase in customer. That is a promise I will not break as long as I am offered this opportunity to go on this holiday with my family! Why don't you think about it? I mean would you like an increase in customers?

In conclusion, I believe I am fully qualified for a free holiday and I am looking forward to hear from your response!
Yours Faithfully,
Khadeera Ghaleb!]]> 2021-01-13 17:37:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1084129992 Ettifaq Abdulraouf https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1085660843 Persuasive letter

83willows Road
Balsall Heath 
Birmingham 
B12 9QF

12/01/2021
Green Street 
Birmingham 
B13 8Ay 

Dear Sir/Madam 

I am writing this letter to respond to the advert published on your website on the 13th October, that offered a seven-day free holiday in Barbados.

Throughout this year, I have worked very hard to provide for my family. I have worked as a part time supervisor and I'm also studying as well.However,I have struggled to provide financially for family on a minimum wage.
I am a single mom looking after four children. No matter how hard I worked, I have been unable to provide consistent meals for my children!
 
My children have been looking forward to a family holiday. However,I can’t afford to play for holiday in Barbados.
If I was able to take my family to the beautiful Barbados I would be so grateful to your company. I would write a fantastic review Of your hotel and encourage all my friends to visit Barbados.
I would really appreciate if you would make my children’s dream come true with a once in life times trip to Barbados.This would make all my hard work worthwhile! It would put huge smile on my family’s face! It make a world of a difference to all of us! I would really appreciate if you would consider offering me a free trip to  the beautiful island.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.  
Yours faithfully,
Ettifaq Abdulraouf 


]]> 2021-01-14 03:19:59 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1085660843 Beenish Khan research reviews of holidays in Barbados https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1087761752 Set on Rockley Beach, Accra Beach Hotel offers an outdoor pool, spa, game room, kids club and gym. The air-conditioned rooms feature free Wi-Fi and a balcony with views of the island, pool or sea.
Each spacious room at the Accra Beach Hotel has a ceiling fan, coffee maker, kettle and cable TV. Bathrooms include a shower.
International cuisine is served at the on-site restaurants, and BBQ facilities are available. The Accra Beach also offers karaoke nights, live evening entertainment and cocktail parties. The property is home to the only Polynesian restaurant on the island, The Wytukai Restaurant.
Hotel Accra Beach is just an 8-minute drive from Bridgetown and a 13-minute drive from Barbados Golf Club. Barbados Grantley Adams Airport is a 20-minute drive away. Free private parking is available at the hotel. 
 Couples particularly like the location — they rated it 8.8 for a two-person trip. 
 We speak your language! 






]]> 2021-01-14 15:53:31 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1087761752 Beenish Khan persuasive letter https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1087834476 41Crompton Road,
Handsworth,
Birmingham,
B20 3QD
14/1/2021.
Relax Holiday 
4 Mills Street 
Holloway
London
N7  7DE.

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to respond to the advert published on your website on the 20th December, which offers a seven days holiday in Barbados.

This a great opportunity in my life to get a chance to go on a free holiday in Barbados.
I have been working for your company since 2008 and I am quite sure that I am eligible for this holiday. I have been on a minimum wage to support my family and I am the only person who is paying for all the expenses. I cannot afford to miss work for even a few hours! I am pretty sure you are aware of my wage and my excellent performance in this field,which I believe recommends me for this free holiday. What's more, I am a single parent of three children who have never been abroad. This would be the holiday of their life! They will remember it for many years to come.

Finally, I promise I will write a appreciative review for the company and all the facilities including hotels, travelling, food and facilities. This  will increase the number of your customers. This will make a significant amount of people want to have a job in the company.

I am looking forward to your kind reply.
Your faithfully,
Beenish khan.


]]> 2021-01-14 16:07:21 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1087834476 Halima. Research for review in Barbados halimaakhtar2 https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1088378843 Wonderful stay
Fantastic 3 weeks at Radisson. Best location on island, perfect beach, next to Cuz for best fish cutters. Staff are good, Shane the beach guy is outstanding and goes above and beyond to make sure you are sorted on the beach.
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The hotel was wonderful, with a lovely sandy beach and the race horses swim at dawn, which is incredible to watch. We didn’t eat in the restaurant as we had exhausted the menu with repeated room service, so went out for meals. The pool is TINY and feels a little pointless, but with the beach right there who cares? One last surprise came when checking out as tax was added after, which added 20% to the cost of the room, so worth being aware of!]]> 2021-01-14 17:44:46 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1088378843 Halima halimaakhtar2 https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1088663066 Persuasive letter
104 Villa Street
Birmingham 
B19 1PZ 
13th January 2021
Relax Holidays 
4 Mill Street 
Holloway, London 
N77DE 
Dear Sir/Madam, 
I am waiting to respond to the advert published on your website on the 20th December 2020, which offers a seven day holiday in Barbados. 
I am a minimum wage worker. I am the only person who earns money in my family of five members. Throughout this year I have worked very hard to provide for my family. After all of this, I can not afford to pay for a holiday. It would be very nice if you offer me a holiday that I can enjoy with my family. 
In addition, if you give me a chance to enjoy the lovely holiday, I promise that I will write an appreciative review and feedback about your company and hotel I will staying at. 
In conclusion, I believe I am fully qualified for a free holiday and I am looking forward to hearing from you. 
Yours faithful, 
Halima Chowdhury]]> 2021-01-14 18:37:09 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1088663066 Etifaq mocolisan https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1111257430 Write a persuasive review about your holiday in Barbados. Use Beenish's review and the first one you found as an inspiration. 
Write about the hotel, the staff, the facilities and food. Recommend the hotel to others. ]]> 2021-01-21 17:58:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1111257430 hnanalmajeedi https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1111370962 2021-01-21 18:19:49 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1111370962 Beenish khan https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1114877265 United kingdom
Accra beach hotel
Great review, great holiday

Last  summer I stayed at the Accra beach hotel and been wanting to write a review ever since. This was a really memorable experience for me, and I will tell you why. They had great staff, a large ,lovely pool. They offer great economy. Also they offer a free kids club and gym. A spa, game room and they also provide air conditioned room with free WIFI. In the Accra beach hotel has a ceiling fan which will keep you cool. A coffee  machine  which is lovely to use whilst watching your favourite shows and movies. The bathroom which includes a shower, a bath which you can lay in and relax. International cuisine is served at the on site restaurant. Moreover BBQ facilities are available free of charge. The Accra Beach hotel also offers karaoke nights, Live evening entertainment and cocktail parties. The property is home to the Polynesian restaurant on the island. The Wytukai restaurant. Also the Accra beach hotel is just 8 minutes away from the Bridgetown and 13 minutes drive from the Barbados golf club. Also Barbados is a twenty minute drive from drive to the Adams airport. You will not spend more time on traveling expenses. Instead you can accommodate yourself more. Moreover there is free parking. This hotel is quite famous for the rating of 8.8 from couples, two person trips. Also have a translator to speak your specific language!
Therefore I would recommend this to anyone who is going past Barbados. Don't miss out on the Accra Beach hotel. I would give this hotel a 5 ***** .]]> 2021-01-22 16:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1114877265 Ettifaq Abdulraouf https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1129406704 research reviews of holidays in Barbados


Last  summer I spend my lovely holidays in Barbados, which was an amazing holiday ever. I stayed at 
Sugar Bay Hotel in Barbados  There are no words to describe how incredible all the staff here are! It is magical sitting eating delicious food everyday looking at the picturesque beach.Room extremely comfortable.Sugar Bay!”.Also has a year-round outdoor pool and spa centre, and guests can enjoy a meal at the restaurant . There is a Washington Museum is 10 minutes’ walk away from Sugar Bay Hotel.In addition
each room comes with a TV and elegant décor. All rooms are fitted with a private bathroom equipped with a bath or shower and WIFI free in the Sugar Bay Hotel. Will definitely I recommend and come back. ”]]> 2021-01-26 23:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1129406704 Khadeera Ghaleb https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1133620351 Barbados Holiday Review

Last month, I visited a Barbados as a holiday/vacation with my family. I stayed there for two weeks because it was recommended by a friend. She said, "It was the best location you could ever stay at". 

There are many likes of staying at Accra Beach Hotel, (a hotel in Barbados). The hotel offers an experience I will never forget! Firstly, the the hotel was very well maintained, clean and spacious, beds are very comfortable, and the staff are very hard working and are looking for visitors satisfactions, I must mention how organized and responsible the management team is. They also respond very quickly, which is very important towards customers as some are patient but some aren't! Secondly, the restaurants offer a variety and a range of different foods, which also contain vegan and vegetarian foods. For example, International cuisines are served at the on-site restaurants, and the BBQ facilities are available at anytime. The Accra Beach also offers karaoke nights, live evening entertainment and cocktail parties. The property is a home to only one Polynesian restaurants on the island, The Wytukai Restaurant. Last but not least, the hotel rooms provides a lovely range of décor, its very elegant; therefore, its very well presented and reaches a wide satisfaction. The hotel proposes free cancellation, free WIFI and free public parking. This creates brilliant effects in all customers. Furthermore, it has an outdoor pool which allows up to 45 people at once as well as a spa, games rooms, kids club and a gym to workout in! It has been rated an 8.8 from personal experiences.

Overall, I would recommend this anyone who is visiting Barbados. Why don't you give this a try? From my experience its a rating of 9.3 as its amazing and its a memorable experience I will never forget. I would definitely visit this again some time!


]]> 2021-01-27 20:03:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1133620351 Hanan hnanalmajeedi https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1137153452 A review about Sandals Royal Barbados. 
Last year, I spent my wonderful  vacation in Barbados with my lovely family. We stayed at Sandals Royal Barbods, which was the best hotel I have ever been in my life.i have have had great memories in Barbados. Would like to tell you my experience there.
First, the Service was excellen  and extremely friendly, as well as there was airport shuttle. Also, there were many different types of activities, such as  bowling alley,craft beer bar,rooftop pool complete with restaurant and bar ,spa,sport centre and entertainment day and night. 
Second, it is a great place for the kids. There were play grande, club,games, tinnes,football and small swimming pool for children also there are to many securities around the place which made the children in safe place ,and they have fun in the same time.
Moreover, the rooms are spacious, has air conditioning which make the room cool. Also, there is a comfortable king size bed, free WIFI,a coffee machine to have your warm coffee at any time you want,a big smart TV ,playstation for kids.In addition, there is a big bathroom including  a shower, a big mirror and a bath, as well as the room decorated as a modern style. 
Third, BBQ is available from 6am to 8pm. Restaurant is open 24 hour and they have different types of food also, for vegetarians. Furthermore, you  can order your food to your room which make don't feel hungry at all. 
Plus,the parking is very big and free. The airport is 8 minutes drive from the hotel. 
Finally, I  highly recommend this hotel to anyone who wants to go to Barbados. It doesn't cost much money aslo, there is always discounts and the price includes  all entertainment and restaurants! 
I would like to give this hotel 5*****


]]> 2021-01-28 16:17:12 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1137153452 Halima halimaakhtar2 https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1137270890 Barbados Holiday
Review 
My last holiday was in Barbados with my family. We stayed there for two weeks. We stayed in a hotel call Yellow Bird Hotel. It was near by the beach. 
The hotel was wonderful with a lovely sandy beach, best location in island. Staff was very good and friendly. Hotel was great made effort with kids for santander visit, bouncy castle and treasure hunt etc. 
The pool was tiny and fells little pointless but with the beach right there who cares? The beach was very nice to lay on and not crowded but if you are going to snorkel which we did, be prepared to bounced by the waves. It was a lovely feeling I must say. 
I will definitely recommend this who wants to visit Barbados? Me and my family will never forget about this trip. I would definitely visit again. 
*****]]> 2021-01-28 16:36:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mocolisan/d9r6vs26lhsq5slx/wish/1137270890