This shall be your first lesson at identifying errors in writing. 

Please type the sentence you wrote for each content point in the Diagnostic Test paper attempted earlier. You shall work in pairs and edit each others' work. 

We shall start with :

CP1- select classroom committe

CP2- draw up classroon rules

CP3- plan duty roster

CP4- carry out duties

CP5- plan seating arrangement

CP6- update bulletin board

CP7- decorate classroom

CP8- put up motivational phrases

CP9- ensure cleanliness

CP10- sufficient tables and chairs

CP11- lights and fans functioning

CP12- reading corner

-teacher should block the web that student use regularly like twitter,facebook and instagram.

-Focus on why it's important

Haziq CP CP 1 : Firstly, select class committee such as class monitor, bureu of cleanliness, and bureu of happiness.

Spelling mistake : Bureau.

government should provide more netbook and let them excess to the internet

 Focus on learning,

Make sure you and your students know the reason for every learning experience. Don’t give ‘busy work’. Avoid worksheets where possible. Don’t start by planning activities, start with the ‘why‘ and then develop learning experiences which will support independent learning.  Include appropriate tech tools to support the learning.

cp1:Student must select class committee.By doing this the organisation in the class will be easier.

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correction: The important thing the students must do first is a select class committee.

farzana-Students should select class comittee so they can divide their job equally.(no error)

'afiah- student must select class comittee to lead all the class activities and for make the class activities more easy when there have a leader lead on it.

correction-Students must select class committee to lead all the class activities and for making the class activities more easy when there has a leader lead on it

farhana/cp2: Then,you must dram up classroom

cp1- Firstly , you must select class comitee . - no error

Syahmi- FIrst, we have to select our class committee to easily arrange our work in the classroom.

amirahCP1 : we must select class committee to lead all friends and make sure they give their superb commitment on everything

The first important thing is choosing class comittee especially the class monitor

first of all,you must select the class committee.The class monitor plays the main role because the class monitor will see the teachers frequently in order to receive any information from the teachers.

#danial sidek

farahnad CP1=first of all,we must select class committee.Students should cooperate with each other and be responsible to choose the best class monitor.

CP 1 : Firstly,select the class comittee to make sure your class is in a care.

syamim Cp1: Firstly, you can select class comitte.This will make student more comitte on their class duty

Aina cp1: First of all, select class committe especially a leader of the class. The leader is very important to make sure that conditionin the class is in good condition always.

CP 2: Next,you may draw up the rules of the classroom to make sure the classroom will become more condusive.

Correction : When you already selected your class committee.........

haziq : Then, draw up classroom rules for students such as "Do not throw rubbish on the floor" and "Do not make noises in the classroom".

syamim cp2: Next, you can draw up classroom rule. Then your classrom will be more systematic and organise

CP2:Sudent should draw up classroom rules so that they will never doing silly mistakes.POSTED BY IZZUDIN

correction: -Then,the classroom rules must be drawn up to make sure the students don't do any harm or non-suitable activities in class.

CP2 : Next, to make a condusive classroom , you must draw up a classroom rules .-no error

Danial-Next, you must draw up classroom rules. It is impotant to make sure that the students in that classroom will obey the rules.

AINa cp2: Secondly, draw up classroom rules. When there is classroom rules, students will follow the following rules.

amirahCP2 : secondly , class organization must draw up classroom rules . Rules will make all activities go smoothly and encourage students to practise a good manner .

farhana/cp2:then,you must draw up classroom rules.

farzana-The class committee should also draw up classroom rules that are approved by all of the classmates.

correction-The class committee should also draw up classroom rules that are approved by all of the classmates

'afiah-we should draw up classroom rules to make sure all the students being more disciplined(no error)

farahnad CP2=next,students have to discuss to draw up the classroom .For an examples is students cannot bring food to the class to stay clean.

CP3: then, the monitor must plan up the duty roster.

in addition , we must draw up class rules in order to avoid disciplinary problem

farhana/cp3:plan cuty roster for your class.

AINA cp3: Then, plan a duty roster and paste it on the class board. When students follow the duty roster, our classroom will be in good condition and clean. :)

we can plan a duty roster in the classroom

the selected class committee has to plan duty roster in order to have a clean and neat classroom

CP4 (original): ......

CP4 (amended): ..... / no errors

CP12 (original): ......

CP12 (amended): ..... / no errors

Cp6(Original) : You should also update your bulletin board (Error Free) CP7(Original): You also can decorate your class by the way you like it.

CP7(Amended): You also can decorate your class the way you like it Cp8(Original) : You can also decorate it by hang motivational phrases on the wall. CP8(Amended) You can also decorate your class by hanging motivational phrases on the wall. CP9(Original): Cleanliness is some part of iman. Make sure to maintain your class cleanliness. Cp9(Amended): Make sure to maintain your class cleanliness. CP10(Original): Arrange the chair and table in sufficient amount so that everybody will have place to sit (Error Free) CP11(Original) Make sure all the light and fan are functioning well. CP11(amended) : Make sure all the lamps and fans are functioning well. Cp12(Original): Last but not least, create a reading corner. (error Free)

Done :D

CP4 (original) : Your friends must carry out their own duties to ensure the cleanliness of your class.

CP4 (amended) : Make sure all your friends carry out their duties to ensure the cleanliness of your class.

CP5 (original) : Next, you should plan your seating arrangement as comfortable as you can (error free)

CP6 (original) : You must update your bulletin board with the latest news

CP6 (amended) : You must updated your class bulletin board with the latest news. (error free)

CP7 (original) : You can also discuss with your classmates on how to decorate your class.

CP7 (amended) : By using your creativity, you can decorate your class hanging the curtains or wallpapers. ( error free)

CP8 (original) : Make sure your class cleanliness (error free)

CP9 (original) : Make your class arrangement with sufficient number of chairs and tables

CP9 (amended) : Then, make your class arrangment with a sufficient number of chairs and tables. (error free)

CP10 (original) : To get a bonus mark, build a reading corner at the backside of your class.

CP10 (amended) : To get a bonus mark, make a reading corner at the backside of your class. (error free)

CP11 (original) : Put up the motivational phrases on your class board (error free)

CP12 (original) : Lastly, make sure that all the lights and fans are functioning well

CP12 (amended) : Lastly, make sure that all lights and fans in your classroom are functioning well.

DONE :D