https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs As you listen to a section of the chapter, type in examples of each appeal. Briefly explain how/why it works. en-us 2021-05-04 17:23:30 UTC 2021-05-04 18:41:05 UTC hello@padlet.com delaneyperez2125 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1490980682 Speaking about how people would act towards people with only violence and how it affected Pete. He was conflicted with how people were able to live like this in fear that they might be next. Which I can see why because no one should be living in constant fear ]]> 2021-05-04 17:55:10 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1490980682 30087902 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1490981274 I feel bad for Pete that after his shift of seeing all the horrible crime scenes he goes to get drunk to forget it all.

]]> 2021-05-04 17:55:18 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1490981274 30087902 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1490993473 I can tell that the sources are trustworthy because he goes into detail about the scenes and also gives dates and times.]]> 2021-05-04 17:57:39 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1490993473 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1490993645 I feel like this is mentally and emotionally exhausting as he tweets this. He is telling other peoples stories about their deaths, in a gruesome way. I feel bad for pete. ]]> 2021-05-04 17:57:41 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1490993645 30087902 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1490997914 Giving examples of how the crime scenes are mostly due to people getting shot, which is quite tragic.

]]> 2021-05-04 17:58:31 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1490997914 delaneyperez2125 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1490998281 Coming back to how people would always get shot daily it shows you the statistics of how common these tragic situations really were]]> 2021-05-04 17:58:35 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1490998281 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1490999969 Arriving to the crime scene after the medical help, he wants to save himself the mental trauma and he wants to show the fact that he is not more important/his story telling is not more important than the victim getting real help]]> 2021-05-04 17:58:53 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1490999969 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491000648 When describing the sounds that the man makes while choking out, it appeals to our empathy for whoever this man may have been]]> 2021-05-04 17:59:01 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491000648 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491001125 he shows tweets that are hard to read and sad. "At least 9 people shot since friday afternoon." the tweets show great tragedy.]]> 2021-05-04 17:59:06 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491001125 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491001207 I can trust him and his tweets because he loves to talk about also making sure he's second on the scene. Because of this his in person and there when the crime is being inspected.]]> 2021-05-04 17:59:07 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491001207 30091601 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491001796 When he is talking about getting there before the ambulances and the man is choking on his own blood unable to even say help me. From the start of what we read things like that keep him up at night]]> 2021-05-04 17:59:14 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491001796 30076741 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491003314 As a reader, it is usually hard to understand what people are feeling. Especially when it comes to non-fiction books, and a series of death occurs. I can only imagine what Pete felt when he couldn't help the man laying right in front of him. The detail used in this chapter gives me a chance to imagine myself on these crime scenes, feeling what these people are feeling. ]]> 2021-05-04 17:59:33 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491003314 delaneyperez2125 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491003628 Since Pete is a reporter all of his information is valid because he has hard evidence with videos and recordings. You're able to trust his word because of this and mostly everyone who lives in Chicago can say the same as him, which gives you more reason to rely on the info ]]> 2021-05-04 17:59:35 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491003628 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491005449 He uses specific details about this shooting with evidence of the shooting "5500 W. Quincy. 2 people shot #chicago [ accompanied by a short video of a man who can't get to his home because of the police tape]" This makes me trust his report of the shooting better dur to how much evidence he uses]]> 2021-05-04 17:59:56 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491005449 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491006264 When he mentions to the reader how, " He loves the city but it can be tiring," this helps the reader imagine the type of pressure he puts on himself to always make sure that the people are aware of the events occurring around them. ]]> 2021-05-04 18:00:07 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491006264 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491007292 Reading the human side of him in saying that he likes to respect the people he sees around him and also that he is hurt by things he sees makes you trust him more.]]> 2021-05-04 18:00:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491007292 30071542 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491011200 I can feel a sense of security that what Pete is saying is nothing but the truth "sometimes adds a short video, six seconds in length". There's a lot of things that can just be tweeted about with no evidence but being able to tweet as your job and do it in a just manner is something that he does well, even if he finds it mentally draining to do his job. ]]> 2021-05-04 18:01:04 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491011200 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491012716 He uses graphic and descriptive language to make the author feel bad for Pete and put us in his shoes "He doesn't know what to do. He feels useless. And he can't get the sound out of his head, the desperation, the inability yo make the simplest of request" The use of describing exactly how it felt makes us understand the pain pete was in]]> 2021-05-04 18:01:23 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491012716 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491013195 Through out the book you can feel that he is genuine. I feel like i can trust him but I don't totally trust him yet. But their is evidence and details in the work he is doing. ]]> 2021-05-04 18:01:28 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491013195 30091601 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491014218 he was there before anyone else was and he watched the man die]]> 2021-05-04 18:01:40 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491014218 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491015238 By using very specific details with all the information he knows and by just being transparent truly helps the reader get a sense of how the environment is doing. ]]> 2021-05-04 18:01:52 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491015238 30091601 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491017645 he is very detailed with his reports he adds the time the place and a ok description of what happened.]]> 2021-05-04 18:02:22 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491017645 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491027226 I can empathize with Pete because he has to see these terrible crimes every single day and thinks about how people are able to  live like this it has to take a huge toll on his mental health]]> 2021-05-04 18:04:08 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491027226 30076741 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491046087 Pete isn't just someone who looked out their window and watched everything, he is second on the scene. He is there, documenting, and doing his job. ]]> 2021-05-04 18:07:45 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491046087 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491087769 he talks about not only is he deeply affected after some time but the police are too, he understands their tempers and their reactions because they see a lot more than he does and he struggles a lot.]]> 2021-05-04 18:15:54 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491087769 30087902 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491087977 He started to get the side of the victim's family not only based off what he saw.]]> 2021-05-04 18:15:57 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491087977 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491088560 He also shows the comments from the posts and says that there is a video. "Why is that guy yelling? Cop shot his brother. Ahh makes sense. Thanks for al you do, love the info." The comments make it more realistic.]]> 2021-05-04 18:16:04 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491088560 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491088672 In his tweets he his being very specific and giving details about what had happened. He shows you through his tweets his every day way of life and what is happening in his life. ]]> 2021-05-04 18:16:05 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491088672 30076741 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491090441 The specific details really give us proof that these are really Pete's tweets, and this isn't just something that's been copied and pasted. Through the tweets, we see what Chicago's citizens see, and go through everyday. I love the detail. ]]> 2021-05-04 18:16:26 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491090441 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491091016 The reporter looking at his photographer and saying "We need to get the f*** out of here." helped to share the sense of panic and fear with us, the reader.]]> 2021-05-04 18:16:33 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491091016 30091601 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491091066 even police tell him they like his work and how detailed it is, it makes them feel like they are there.]]> 2021-05-04 18:16:34 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491091066 30071531 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491092082 the way how the details are given in each tweet with time, area, victim count  shows no emotion and only
 appeal to your logic
 ]]> 2021-05-04 18:16:44 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491092082 30071542 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491092145 I can really appreciate that the reporter wanted to do something a bit different with uploading videos of cats in a way to ease any pain or suffering caused by the things he posts, but he quickly realized how it can be used to completely take meaning away from his posts, his posts aren't about the cats lingering around the crime scenes, it's about the violence that is happening that needs to be seen "He thought it was different that it felt whimsical, but he eventually stopped because it felt like it diminished what was going on"]]> 2021-05-04 18:16:44 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491092145 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491093302 At one point he stops just taking pictures and Tweeting and goes deeper by getting information from cops and from people in the area, he talks to bystanders and family members to understand what really happens so that his work is authentic. ]]> 2021-05-04 18:16:57 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491093302 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491095541 He after taking the step to ensure his safety in wearing a vest, decides then to reassure the community by contacting people at scenes, it humanizes him which makes up for the best wearing I think in some way]]> 2021-05-04 18:17:20 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491095541 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491098285 He makes sure the tweets are detailed to make sure you can understand his thoughts about his life]]> 2021-05-04 18:17:50 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491098285 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491100422 he uses a very large amount of tweets to show how much this is going on in chicago.]]> 2021-05-04 18:18:15 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491100422 30071531 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491103696 how Pete memories haunt him and the need for sleep meds and drinks   to get on with life filled with gruesome crime and death 

]]> 2021-05-04 18:18:54 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491103696 30071542 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491106179 it appeals to my sense of logic because his job is to report on the violence that goes on in Chicago, his entire existence is to bring awareness and share data and statistics to everyone that lives in the area]]> 2021-05-04 18:19:23 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491106179 30076741 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491127276 I feel like Pete is gains people's trust because he shows how much he cares. Like when he stopped recording the cats because it takes away from the matter at hand. The fact that he even realized that shows he isn't just in this for a check. ]]> 2021-05-04 18:23:25 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491127276 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491155198 In chapter 1, we see Marcelos story in such great detail. Not only what he did, but who he was as a person which let us see in depth into the whole situation. Rather, if we just saw this from Peters Twitter, it might just be written as "Teens arrested for robbings and assault". Pete and Marcelo were also very persistent. Marcelo wanted to change and put effort into that. Pete also put in great effort into his job and staying consistent with posting. They both have great motivation for what thet aspire to do, and while it would be very easy to give up due to the immense stress, the all keep pushing towards it for their own personal goals.]]> 2021-05-04 18:29:09 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491155198 30076741 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491155851 The emotional pain the Pete feels is the same as what Jimmy Lee and Napoleon. Being there and not being to do much is like being a bystander. The stress and PTSD that they feel are the same. Pete being on the scenes and writing about it, and Nap causing that pain, they both take a toll. ]]> 2021-05-04 18:29:18 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491155851 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491160052 Lisa relates to Peter in a way because they both have unique ways of dealing with their grief, they both went outside of the norms of grief especially the kind that we look at in this book. they have both been hurt by the crimes that have happened in Chicago and know that it wont stop. They both wish they had the answers they were looking for but also are realistic in the sense that they know they wont get the answers because that is just how life, especially in Chicago, works. They know that there is so much violence and that people are dying for no reason. They also know that anyone could be the next person to go and they can try to stop it but that doesn't mean they will.]]> 2021-05-04 18:30:07 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491160052 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491193222 2021-05-04 18:37:07 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491193222 30091601 https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491201978 we made a connection to Jimmys chapter in jimmys case he was shot at night and that is when peter reports also what happened to them or what they saw affeted them in almost the same way they couldnt sleep at night because of the trauma.]]> 2021-05-04 18:38:58 UTC https://padlet.com/dianamartinezrasekh/d98176af0tyacwgs/wish/1491201978