https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci Made with swagger en-us 2018-04-25 13:30:46 UTC 2018-05-09 01:39:19 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255241142 By telling the reader whats happening in the story and what has happened and this I would take in as a good powerful sentence.]]> 2018-04-25 14:09:17 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255241142 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255258738 I think it has something to do with the imagery- dull and gray, or bright and powerful? Of course, wording has something to do with it as well- using descriptive sentences full of rich vocabulary.]]> 2018-04-25 14:41:08 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255258738 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255266500 I think that that is a powerful sentence because he is explaining how he learned after her and how he follows in her footsteps. It shows a strong mother-son relationship. ]]> 2018-04-25 14:53:31 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255266500 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255267898 I think that to have a powerful sentence you have to express your feelings and what you see. You want to be able to see it through their eyes and understand it. Feel their emotions and see what they saw. -Ceili]]> 2018-04-25 14:55:53 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255267898 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255278571 I think what makes a powerful sentence is when you go through an actual life event and you can put those events, feelings, actions, into a story and you can make the reader feel what you went through, I think that's what can make a powerful sentence. Also, if you use powerful adjectives to describe the emotion of the event, then that could really get the reader's mentality into the mood of the event/s. It really just depends on the word play that the author uses.]]> 2018-04-25 15:13:14 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255278571 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255305060 I think that in order for a sentence to be powerful there needs to be emotion behind it. The most powerful sentences have emotion and drive in them, and require the reader to dig deeper than the surface to understand them.]]> 2018-04-25 15:58:16 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255305060 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255306763 what makes a powerful sentence to me is if it is very important to me or something i care about]]> 2018-04-25 16:01:12 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255306763 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255382773 I think that a powerful sentence is different for everyone. Just because it is important to you doesn't mean that it is important to someone else. A powerful sentence is a sentence that 'speaks' to your mind. It relates to your actions, feelings, or past experiences. ]]> 2018-04-25 18:20:43 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255382773 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255383226 I believe that to have a powerful sentence, you need to put emotion into the sentence. It also has to be able to make you think about everything leading up to that point. Finally, it has to be able to convey images and make you feel the emotions that the writer feels.]]> 2018-04-25 18:21:39 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255383226 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255385068 Using really powerful words and expressing your thoughts and feelings is what makes a sentence powerful.]]> 2018-04-25 18:25:28 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255385068 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255398850 Well what I think makes a sentence powerful is how you explain it or how it is written. You need to put some good words in your sentence, and use some correct grammar. ]]> 2018-04-25 18:53:01 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255398850 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255426497 _{I think what makes a sentence more powerful is not just powerful words, but how those words are put together. They need to convey the main point while still holding meaning and leaving an impact on the reader. It depends on what kind of message the author wants to send out as well. Once words connect, the reader will
 understand and connect with that as well. A "powerful sentence" has a very vague meaning and could mean anything. I think the tone has a big part to play with it as well.}

]]> 2018-04-25 20:06:15 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255426497 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255454680 What exactly makes a sentence “powerful”? Well, sentences can be powerful by your word choices. You can have big, strong words to make a sentence powerful and you can even use whatever you think would make a sentence powerful also.
-Peyton Routh]]> 2018-04-25 22:29:32 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255454680 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255606592 To me, what makes a sentence powerful is the amount of emotion included. Some sentences are more powerful because the author adds a lot of his own emotions, and sometime a sentence is more powerful because it is straight to the point and little emotion is added. This way, the reader really gets to interpret the sentence in the way they want, and it opens up room for a greater opportunity to understand and make connections about what they are reading. Sentences like this seem to really stick into the reader's brain and it is something that they may think about again.]]> 2018-04-26 12:39:18 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255606592 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255629476 I think that there are many ways to make a sentence powerful, like emotions, imagery and vocabulary. Using certain words in a certain way that has hidden emotions also makes them very powerful, because it may seem just like a simple sentence but it's so much more. Using emotions in a sentence, mixed with descriptive words or metaphors, it can create such a powerful sentence that just makes you feel hit by the emotion itself. Imagery in a sentence makes it seem more alive, and makes you use your mind to just imagine exactly what is being written. It can create so many emotions just by thinking up the image. Vocabulary really adds into making a sentence powerful because you can change a sentence from just a boring statement of your emotions to something that really just sounds so metaphoric or important, and it makes a sentence so powerful.]]> 2018-04-26 13:24:46 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255629476 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255637803 Many things can make a sentence powerful. One thing that can make a sentence powerful is having it be able to relate to someone. Writing something that really happens in real life. Another idea that makes a sentence powerful are your word choices. Really writing how your character feels, not just putting, sadly he asked her to not forget him. Instead put, with tears in his eyes he grabbed her hand and whimpered don't forget him. You want your sentences to mean something and almost tell a story on its own. Showing not just telling, explaining every little detail. A third thing you can do are really powerful quotes. Ones that sand out from the rest of the writing. If the writing means something and makes the reader really think.]]> 2018-04-26 13:39:00 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255637803 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255651151 what makes a sentence powerful is the emotion you use to make it powerful. Using strong words with strong meaning help make it powerful. Or just your own thought can make a powerful sentence ]]> 2018-04-26 14:01:51 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255651151 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255652464 For me, a powerful sentence is a sentence that really uses a lot of emotion from the authors heart. Most of the time a powerful sentence will stand out to a reader, sometimes the sentence will even relate to the reader. To make your sentence more powerful try using more descriptive imagery and better vocabulary. Make your sentence stand out, do not let your sentence just be average and boring. Remember to make a sentence powerful use emotions.]]> 2018-04-26 14:03:54 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255652464 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255779226 What I think makes a sentence powerful is one one that really draws the reader in and makes them look at the world or even the stories world bigger and better and I think that authors can create very emotional stories even through a couple of sentences if they use the right words and really write through what they feel in their own heart because those same feelings can touch someone else either by making them smile,laugh, or even cry just by using very emotional and descriptive detailing and/or words.]]> 2018-04-26 18:14:24 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/255779226 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/256734165 Emotion makes an ordinary sentence powerful. Making the readers feel is what changes things. For example, the sentence below gets a hundred times better with emotion.
She walked along, kicking leaves.
She walked along, angrily kicking at leaves, wondering why all this was happening to her.
The second sentence is better because some readers can empathize. ]]> 2018-05-01 00:42:21 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/256734165 https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/259127044 Emotions play a very large role in making a sentence powerful, and although the author's emotions are significant and contribute greatly to the sentence, it is the readers' comprehension that makes it powerful. If a group of people find that a sentence is powerful, it simply means that that the sentence is relatable to them. However, there could be a group that thinks the same sentence is bland, and is therefore unimportant. A sentence can be powerful to me because of my experiences and beliefs, but it might not be powerful to you. That's why I believe that it depends on the reader to decide if the sentence is powerful, based off of their emotions while reading it.]]> 2018-05-09 01:20:34 UTC https://padlet.com/niki_cooper/d8zvgim16oci/wish/259127044