EAP_AE2L by https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr A place to share assessment materials, course information and ask questions :) en-us 2017-09-15 06:27:53 UTC 2026-01-18 20:35:03 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Apple.png Assessment jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187827919 Semester 1:
Reading and writing folio A (week 10)
Vocabulary test (week 10)

Semester 2:
Group report (week 18)
Oral presentation (week 19)

Semester 3:
Integrated reading and writing test (week 24)
Vocabulary test (week 24)
Reading and writing folio B (week 25)


]]> 2017-09-15 06:29:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187827919 Modules jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187828079 All learning modules can be accessed here: https://padlet.com/edwardrush2013/fn2vmu77jj2f

Module 1: 
Family, weeks 3–5 
Module 2: 
Learning to learn, weeks 6–10
Module 3: 
Immigration, weeks 11–13
Module 4: 
Music, weeks 14–16
Module 5:
Food and diet, weeks 17–19
Module 6: 
Social media, weeks 20–22]]> 2017-09-15 06:30:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187828079 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187828651 Argumentative paragraph on smaller families.]]> 2017-09-15 06:34:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187828651 Google drive jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187828673 Upload all of the writing you do in class and at home to your personal folder on Google Drive. All important documents will be uploaded here.

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B8MjGguYJ-iHdE5wbDFhb0Y0dEU

]]> 2017-09-15 06:34:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187828673 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187829375 Reading folio review – 'Tiger mothers'.

Comparative paragraph on nuclear and extended family structures.

Grammar progress test on TCOLE.

Vocabulary progress test: https://tcole.trinity.edu.au/mod/quiz/view.php?id=82932]]> 2017-09-15 06:38:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187829375 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187829546 Descriptive paragraph on family roles.

Comparative paragraph on families in the past and present.

Argumentative paragraph on alloparenting.

Reading folio review – 'Alloparenting'


]]> 2017-09-15 06:39:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187829546 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187830041 Reflective journal entry (150–200 words)

Argumentative paragraph with paraphrase or direct quote.

Read Alice Munro short story.

Reading folio review – Improvisation.

Vocabulary progress test: https://tcole.trinity.edu.au/mod/quiz/view.php?id=87746


]]> 2017-09-15 06:42:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187830041 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187830302 Reflective journal entry.

Extended writing – restaurant review (for writing folio).

Read Alice Munro short story in spare time and make notes/flag any difficult vocab to cover in class.

Keep working on improving and editing your reading and writing folios.]]> 2017-09-15 06:44:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187830302 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187830662 Clean up Google Drive folder.

Review paragraphs and choose best three for writing folio.

Extended writing – reflective journal.

Extended writing – short story.

Read novel of choice and complete reading folio template.

Vocabulary progress test (practise for actual vocab test – not the real test): https://tcole.trinity.edu.au/mod/quiz/view.php?id=87746]]> 2017-09-15 06:46:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187830662 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187833029 Clean up reading and writing folio (3 paragraphs, 3 article reviews and 2 book reports - due Friday). 

Review Alice Munro short stories from week 6 and complete book report.

Reflective journal entry.

Vocab test prep (scheduled for Friday).]]> 2017-09-15 06:57:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187833029 Reading and writing folio A jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187833820 Article review (family): Tiger mothers
Article review (family): Alloparenting
Article review (learning to learn): Improvisation
Short story book report (family): Alice Munro
Novel book report (learning to learn): Novel of your choice ]]> 2017-09-15 07:00:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187833820 Reading and writing folio B jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187834225 Article review (music):
Article review (music):
Article review (music)
Article review (food):
Article review (food):
Short story report (food):
Novel report (food):
Article review (social media):
Article review (social media):
Article review (social media):]]> 2017-09-15 07:02:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187834225 Wednesday jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187841412
Review vocabulary from 'alloparenting' article.
  • Dual-earning
  • Lean in/opt out
  • God-parenting
  • Alloparent/alloparenting
  • Dysfunction
  • Adulterous
  • Erratic
  • Monopoly of care
  • Childrearing

Peer review 'alloparenting' argumentative paragraphs.

Reading folio - reflective journal writing (weeks 3-5).
  • What are your first impressions of ACE?
  • What have you learnt so far?
  • What kind of family do you have? What issues affect your family? (relate this back to the activities we have done in class, such as the readings and the video).
  • What is a book you have recently read and why did you enjoy it?

Read your Alice Munro short story.
Consider...
Who are the main characters? What is their relationships to each other?
What happens in the story? (map out a basic plot structure)

Underline/circle
Character names
Recurring motifs/images/symbols
Metaphors/analogies
Intertextual references
Any unusual/unknown vocal

Silence - Hulk, Zoe, Michael, Sunny, Louise, Josh, Thea, Jenny
https://www.newyorker.com/magazine/2004/06/14/silence-4

Soon – Yue, Cloud, Allan, Louise, Yeeree , Rebecca
https://www.newyorker.com/magazine/2004/06/14/soon-2

]]> 2017-09-15 07:36:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187841412 Tiger mothers jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187843269 2017-09-15 07:45:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187843269 Compare and contrast language jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187843447 2017-09-15 07:46:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187843447 Conjunctions jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187843552 2017-09-15 07:47:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187843552 Alloparenting jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187843660 2017-09-15 07:48:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187843660 Reading folio example jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187843884 2017-09-15 07:49:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187843884 Reading and writing folio overview jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187844153 2017-09-15 07:50:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187844153 Alice Munro reading questions jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187844566
Silence – comprehension questions

What is Juliet and Penelope's relationship to each other? Describe it in one sentence.
What is Juliet's job?
Where is Penelope when the story begins?
Why does the author use italics?
What does the birthday card indicate?
Who is Eric?
What were Eric and Juliet fighting over?
What happened to Eric?
Who is Heather?
Hold old were Penelope and Heather when Eric died?
What is the significance of the middle section in the story that reflects on Eric's death? How does this illuminate Penelope's motives and character?
When Juliet says she told Penelope 'everything' what does she mean?
What is the significance of the story about the queen of Ethiopia?
Do you think Penelope and Juliet should have reconciled at the end?

Soon – comprehension questions

What do you think Juliet's parents are like based on the prints she buys them st the beginning of the story?
Who is Sam and Sara? Describe their relationship to Juliet. Who is Sara? What is her job?
What is wrong with Sara? Why does she need 'help'?
What kind of 'Dad' do you think Sam is/was?
What is the significance of Juliet's dream?
Who is Don? 
Why does Juliet 'turn away' from Sara at the end? How would you describe the state of their relationship by the end of the story?


]]> 2017-09-15 07:52:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187844566 Beyond the Nuclear family jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187845811 2017-09-15 08:00:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187845811 Thursday jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187846373
Learning to learn – Listening
  • Discuss: Hw do you like to learn?
  • Watch video and take Cornell style notes
  • Complete reading comprehension questions
  • Write as summary of the video and add new words to your vocab lists.

Jigsaw reading – Improvisation
  • Work in groups on one part of the reading
  • Underline/circle any new vocab and add to vocab lists
  • Discuss the main idea for your section
  • Discuss the sub-ideas for each paragraph
  • Discuss the method used by the author to develop their main points




]]> 2017-09-15 08:04:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187846373 Wednesday jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187847651 2017-09-15 08:11:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187847651 Thursday jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187847864 2017-09-15 08:12:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187847864 Friday jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187848032 2017-09-15 08:13:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187848032 Sentence structure jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187851486 2017-09-15 08:30:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/187851486 Wednesday jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/188814326 2017-09-19 10:27:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/188814326 Reading folio article template jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189128608 2017-09-19 23:59:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189128608 Reading folio template – novel jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189129037 2017-09-20 00:02:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189129037 Reflective journal - extended writing jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189148662 2017-09-20 02:11:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189148662 Writing folio jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189148982 2017-09-20 02:13:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189148982 Reading folio jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189149067 2017-09-20 02:13:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189149067 Reading folio - example jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189187010 2017-09-20 06:41:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189187010 Reflective journal writing jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189554116 2017-09-20 21:53:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189554116 Reflective writing sample jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189554215 2017-09-20 21:54:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189554215 Learning how to improvise – reading folio jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189584990 2017-09-21 02:02:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189584990 Thursday jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189585609 Analysing story: Alice Munro & short story writing]]> 2017-09-21 02:08:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189585609 Paraphrasing, quoting and referencing jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189996076 2017-09-22 05:00:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189996076 Summary writing jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189996188 2017-09-22 05:01:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/189996188 Friday jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/190492316 Jigsaw reading – improvisation - review
  • Work with another group who completed a different part of the reading and explain the main points covered in your group's section

Introduction to paraphrasing, quoting and reference
  • Read the two paragraphs from the improvisation reading – how are they different?
  • Add a direct quote or paraphrase to your argumentative paragraph on alloparenting

Reflective writing
Write a reflective journal entry about your learning experiences.
  • Consider…
  • A new learning technique you tried since starting ACE (I.E Pomodoro technique)
  • What learning style you prefer (auditory/visual/kinaesthetic) and how you have used this in ACE
  • Difficulties you’ve had with learning/studying (procrastination)
]]> 2017-09-24 01:04:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/190492316 Wednesday jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196983173 Reflective journal writing overview]]> 2017-10-13 22:44:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196983173 Wednesday jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196985130 Reflective journal questions]]> 2017-10-13 23:28:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196985130 Speaking & Listening Test Introduction jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196985694 Learn about the Integrated Speaking and Listening Test]]> 2017-10-13 23:41:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196985694 Wednesday jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196986013 Reading and writing folio debrief and feedback

Writing folio:
- One compare/contrast paragraph
- One argumentative paragraph
- One descriptive paragraph
- One extended piece (500 words)

Reading folio:
- One article review - Tiger Mothers
- One article review - Beyond the Nuclear Family
- One article review - Improvisation
- One short story review - Alice Munro
- One book report - Novel of your choice]]> 2017-10-13 23:46:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196986013 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196986509 Reflective journal entry (Study techniques for listening and speaking test/challenges and expectations).

Listening and speaking test preparation.]]> 2017-10-13 23:55:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196986509 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196986530 Reflective journal entry (test prep).

Integrated listening and speaking test.

Reading folio part B article review and group presentation.

Edit academic paragraph on 'shaming'.]]> 2017-10-13 23:56:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196986530 Example listening and speaking test jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196987552 2017-10-14 00:23:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196987552 Cornell notes jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196987605 2017-10-14 00:25:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196987605 Speaking and listening example test sheet jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196987621 2017-10-14 00:26:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196987621 Speaking test guide jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196987668 2017-10-14 00:27:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196987668 Speaking example jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196987706 2017-10-14 00:28:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196987706 Speaking marking guide jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196987739 2017-10-14 00:29:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196987739 Writing and reading exam marking guide jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196987835 2017-10-14 00:31:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196987835 Writing and reading exam practise jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196987880 2017-10-14 00:32:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196987880 Semester 1 exams – overview jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196988100 2017-10-14 00:36:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196988100 Friday jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196988300 Vocabuary test]]> 2017-10-14 00:42:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/196988300 Analysing story worksheet jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/198517966 2017-10-19 03:23:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/198517966 Discourse markers jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/198519908 2017-10-19 03:42:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/198519908 Lecture structure jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/198520884 2017-10-19 03:50:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/198520884 Task: Written summary & argumentative paragraph jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/198524660 Write a summary of the lecture we listened to this week in your own words, then write an argumentative paragraph:

Do you agree or disagree?

Use a quote/paraphrase from the transcript in you paragraph.]]> 2017-10-19 04:25:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/198524660 Alloparenting jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/198533340 2017-10-19 05:51:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/198533340 Speaking test pairs jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200243200 Yue & Rebecca
Allan & Louise
Jenny & Ludex 
Yeree & Cloud
Sunny & Josh 
Michael & Zoe
Thea & Hulk]]> 2017-10-25 01:06:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200243200 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200245960 Edit argumentative paragraph on 'shaming'.

Submit article review on music, arts or culture to Google Drive.

Reflective journal entry (how did you go on the listening and speaking test? What areas do you need to work on in the future?).]]> 2017-10-25 01:25:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200245960 Wednesday: Test prep jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200246140 Speaking practise in pairs using the 'Boost' example.]]> 2017-10-25 01:26:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200246140 Thursday: Reading & writing folio B jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200246199 In groups of two/three, find an article for your R&W folio on music, art or culture.

While the other students are doing their speaking exams, complete your article review in your groups and prepare a short presentation for the class. Everybody in your group must speak.]]> 2017-10-25 01:26:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200246199 Thursday: Integrated testing jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200246252 Morning: Listening test

Afternoon: Speaking tests begin]]> 2017-10-25 01:27:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200246252 Useful language jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200265158 2017-10-25 03:48:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200265158 Speaking part 1 jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200265349 2017-10-25 03:49:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200265349 Speaking part 1 jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200265578 2017-10-25 03:51:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200265578 Speaking part 2 jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200265720 2017-10-25 03:52:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200265720 Speaking part 2 jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200265817 2017-10-25 03:53:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200265817 Speaking part 3 jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200265918 2017-10-25 03:54:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200265918 Speaking part 4 jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200266234 2017-10-25 03:57:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200266234 Practise exam jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200640216 2017-10-25 23:17:47 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200640216 Lecture structure jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200641532 Orientation
Topic introduction
Context
Focus & personalisation
Lecture plan
Thesis
Evidence
Analysis
Theory
Rebuttal
Evaluation
Conclusion]]> 2017-10-25 23:28:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200641532 Discourse markers jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200682553 2017-10-26 05:09:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/200682553 Creative Darwinism jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/201063375 2017-10-27 01:13:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/201063375 How to make a music scene jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/201063892 2017-10-27 01:17:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/201063892 Album review: Lou Reed on Yeezus jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/201069125 2017-10-27 01:55:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/201069125 Live review: Joy Division jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/201069225 2017-10-27 01:55:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/201069225 Friday: Integrated testing jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/201971195 Continue to work on your article review and group presentations.]]> 2017-10-31 00:30:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/201971195 Wednesday: Punctuating quotes jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/201971352 2017-10-31 00:31:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/201971352 Thursday: Vocabulary resist jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/202339751 12:30 – Evan Burge Room 4 (for any students who couldn't do the test or had major issues with the WiFi).]]> 2017-10-31 22:11:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/202339751 Wednesday: Presentations jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/202352962 Yue & Rebecca
Allan & Louise
Jenny & Ludex 
 Yeree & Cloud
 Sunny & Josh 
 Michael & Zoe
 Thea & Hulk
]]> 2017-11-01 00:31:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/202352962 Wednesday: David Bowie listening jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203216899 2017-11-03 10:11:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203216899 Thursday: Artist profiles jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203233449 Do some research on your favourite band or musician and write three descriptive paragraphs about them for your writing folios. Begin with a bio, a paragraph about why they are important to you and then a paragraph about your favourite song (this can be submitted for your extended piece).

You will also do a short presentation on your favourite artist on Friday. Either create a Padlet or PPT presentation to go along with it, including pictures and videos, and an example of your favourite song.]]> 2017-11-03 11:35:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203233449 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203234946 Article review – David Bowie (upload to Google drive)

Reflective journal entry (your perspective on music personas).]]> 2017-11-03 11:42:05 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203234946 Wednesday: Reading and writing folio feedback jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203596406 2017-11-05 07:37:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203596406 Friday: Artist presentations jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203596553
Introduction
Tell the audience who you will be talking about. Outline the overall structure of your presentation

Body
1. the artist: who they are, and what's special about them
2. the song: what it is about, and why you chose it. Does it resonate personally with you in some way or remind you of a particular person or time in your life? Or perhaps you just like the way the music makes you feel?
3. the effect of the song: how it made you feel, and how it is different/similar to other music you like
4. recommendation: who would like this song, and why.

Conclusion
A final statement about the song and the artist. Has the song changed the way you think about music?]]> 2017-11-05 07:39:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203596553 Friday: Descriptive language - Adjective (Relative) Clauses jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203597658 The grammar focus in the unit is the use of appositives and adjective (relative) clauses. These are great tools which allow you to give more information and be more descriptive.

First, the video below refreshes our knowledge of relative pronouns eg. who, whom, that, which. Then, it looks at using these pronouns as part of relative clauses which make your sentences more descriptive.



]]> 2017-11-05 07:59:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203597658 Friday: Appositives jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203597767 Appositives are another nice way to add information and description.
Let's have a look at them]]> 2017-11-05 08:01:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203597767 Friday: Album reviews jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203602048


]]> 2017-11-05 09:20:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203602048 Wednesday: Music scenes jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203602143 2017-11-05 09:21:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203602143 Thursday: Memoir and reflective writing jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203602153 2017-11-05 09:21:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/203602153 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/205121266 Artist profile (500 words)

Album review (500 words)

Summary – factors that create music scenes (200–250 words)

Reflective journal (your perspective on music scenes)]]> 2017-11-09 03:07:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/205121266 Friday: Hedging and structuring an evaluative response jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/205122328 2017-11-09 03:15:57 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/205122328 Thursday: Bowie answers jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/207476352 2017-11-15 23:36:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/207476352 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/207950292 Reading/writing folio:
Article review – Creative Darwinism
Revised summary of 'How to make a music scene'
Evaluative paragraph on Nick Allbrook's theory of 'Creative Darwinism' (250–300 words)

Report:
Choose topic for research report
Do survey for research report
Introduction of research report and two references]]> 2017-11-17 00:58:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/207950292 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/207950376 Report:
Method, results and discussion of report]]> 2017-11-17 00:59:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/207950376 How to make a music scene summary writing jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209566600
Structure:
TS: Main idea – Byrne's overall pespective on how builds a music scene
SSs: Explain each factor in your own words and summarise the CBGB example used by Byrne. Do not go into specific details.
CS: Summarise main idea and how it was demonstrated through the example of CBGB.

Referencing info: David Byrne, 2012, How to make a music scene (book chapter title)

Editing checklist:
Ideas/content – main idea (thesis statement), 8 factors, a CBGBs example for each factor, referencing info
Structure – TS, SSs (body) & CS Paraphrasing skills – is it too similar? does it retain the original meaning? have enough paraphrasing techniques being used
Mechanics - grammar, spelling, vocab, punctuation, sentence structure, reporting verbs, linkers
Don't forget – KILL YOUR DARLINGS!

Example SS:
Byrne maintains that the layout and positioning of a venue is integral to the success of a music scene. He uses the example of CBGB’s intimate spacing to demonstrate how this factor influenced the development of the punk scene by diminishing boundaries between audiences and musicians, and creating more of a community vibe.  Similarly, Byrne also discusses social transparency as an important factor in consolidating a music scene. He uses the example of...

]]> 2017-11-22 22:45:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209566600 Friday: Expressing an opinion jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209582254 2017-11-23 01:42:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209582254 Wednesday: Editing your album review jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209988935 2017-11-24 23:17:28 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209988935 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209996573 Clean up reading and writing folio B

Read short story and take notes for folio.

Find one academic article on social media and complete review for folio.

Write a restaurant review over break (500 words).

Argumentative paragraph for/against veganism/vegetarianism.

Vocabulary practise.]]> 2017-11-25 02:50:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209996573 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209996575 Presentation prep]]> 2017-11-25 02:50:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209996575 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209996578 Upload final draft of report to TCOLE
Presentation prep]]> 2017-11-25 02:50:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209996578 Wednesday: Analysing story jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209996585
Bring your short story and notes to class.

Describe the plot, setting and characters with a partner who read a different story.]]> 2017-11-25 02:50:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209996585 Wednesday: Research reports jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209996728 2017-11-25 02:54:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209996728 Wednesday: Editing evaluative writing jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209997089 2017-11-25 03:04:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209997089 Thursday: Starting your reports jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209997729 2017-11-25 03:23:46 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209997729 Thursday & Friday: Introductions jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209997803 2017-11-25 03:26:04 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/209997803 Wednesday: integrated reading and writing jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/210075711 2017-11-25 21:08:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/210075711 Thursday: Methodology jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/211245057 2017-11-29 03:49:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/211245057 Thursday: Results and discussion exercises jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/211246253 2017-11-29 03:58:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/211246253 Friday: Results and discussion workshopping jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/211246306 2017-11-29 03:59:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/211246306 Wednesday: Creating charts jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/211250000 2017-11-29 04:30:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/211250000 Thursday: Passive voice jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/211250444 2017-11-29 04:35:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/211250444 Wednesday: Formal & informal language review jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/211250585 2017-11-29 04:37:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/211250585 Research questions jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/212113339 2017-11-30 23:47:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/212113339 Wednesday: Conclusions jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/213568265 2017-12-06 03:30:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/213568265 Thursday: Formatting your report jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/213568483 2017-12-06 03:32:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/213568483 Thursday: Effective presentations jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/213568544 2017-12-06 03:33:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/213568544 Wednesday: Presentations jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/213568830 Each pair will have 10 minutes to speak (5 minutes/person).

You will have an extra 10 minutes to set up while I take notes on your presentation.

So we will have approximately 3–4 presentations per class.]]> 2017-12-06 03:36:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/213568830 Thursday: Presentations jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/213568893 Each pair will have 10 minutes to speak (5 minutes/person).

You will have an extra 10 minutes to set up while I take notes on your presentation.

So we will have approximately 3–4 presentations per class.]]> 2017-12-06 03:36:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/213568893 Friday: Presentations jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/213568928 2017-12-06 03:37:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/213568928 Friday: Presentation practise jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/213569091 Work independently in pairs on your presentations.

Make sure you have practised multiple times and had your slides proofread.

Work with another pair and check each other's presentations for:
- Structure
- Content
- Clarity
- Mechanics (proofread slides)]]> 2017-12-06 03:38:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/213569091 Wednesday: Referencing jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/215652409 2017-12-13 01:02:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/215652409 Report checklist jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/216012091 2017-12-13 23:32:32 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/216012091 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217403912 Presentation – social media article
Article reviews x 2 – social media article & edible stories review
Restaurant review
Argumentative paragraph on veganism/vegetarianism

]]> 2017-12-20 02:05:39 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217403912 Reading and writing folio B jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217451332 Extended pieces x 2 (500 words each)
- Artist profile
- Album review
- Restaurant review

Paragraphs x 3 (200–250 words)
- Argumentative paragraph on shaming
- Evaluative paragraph on 'Creative Darwinism'
- ?

Article reviews x 10
- Bowie profile
- How Music Works 
- Creative Darwinism
- Article of your choice on culture 
- Short story – Edible Stories
- Flexible vegetarinism
- Article of your choice on social media
- ?
- ?
- ?


]]> 2017-12-20 10:26:19 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217451332 Thursday: Vegetarianism reading jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217455926

Skim read:
Is the author for/against vegetarianism?

Scan read:
What is the term coined by philosopher Jeff McMahan?

What other reasons, apart from animal suffering, does the author give in support of vegetarianism?

Who is the philosopher that the author supplies for the counterargument?

What is the word used to describe meat-eaters?

Read for comprehension:

What is the argument in favour of strict vegetarianism? Paraphrase the counterargument in your own words.

What is the argument in favour of flexible vegetarianism? Paraphrase the counterargument in your own words.



]]> 2017-12-20 10:53:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217455926 Edible stories jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217459802 Creme Brûlée:
Rebecca
Yeree
Michael
Allan
Jenny
Cloud

Bean Curd:
Sunny
Josh 
Thea
Zoe
Yue
Hulk
Louise]]> 2017-12-20 11:18:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217459802 Wednesday jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217617797
Social media mini presentations

1 minute/person: Show the class your article on airplay and discuss the main ideas.

Introduction to integrated reading/writing test

You will read two articles on a topic that express contrasting views. You then need to write a 300 word paragraph that incorporates both ideas.

Compare/contrast paragraph on flexible/strict vegetarianism – workshopping

Swap paragraphs w/partner on Google Drive and edit for:
Content
Structure
Mechanics/language]]> 2017-12-21 00:17:17 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217617797 Editing jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217617979 2017-12-21 00:22:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217617979 Thursday: Introduction to social media jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217618138 2017-12-21 00:26:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217618138 Friday: Summarising jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217618152 2017-12-21 00:26:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217618152 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217618197
Compare/contrast paragraph – Vegetarianism (W folio)

Short story review – Edible Stories (R folio)

Guardian article on social media – summary and review (R folio) 

Read novel (R folio)

Group presentation – mental health issue caused by social media

Vocabulary test prep]]> 2017-12-21 00:27:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217618197 Wednesday: Argumentation jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217618227 2017-12-21 00:28:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217618227 Thursday: Synthesis jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217618253 2017-12-21 00:28:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217618253 Friday jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217618261 2017-12-21 00:29:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217618261 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217618319
Prepare for integrated reading/writing test

Prepare for vocabulary test]]> 2017-12-21 00:29:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/217618319 Wednesday (morning) jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/220431865 Peer review evaluative paragraph on shaming.]]> 2018-01-11 01:21:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/220431865 Wednesday (afternoon) jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/220432439 Review reading and writing practise test.


]]> 2018-01-11 01:26:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/220432439 Thursday (morning) jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/220432467 Review practise test
Vocab test]]> 2018-01-11 01:26:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/220432467 Homework jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/220432537 Reading and writing folio B.]]> 2018-01-11 01:27:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/220432537 Wednesday jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/220432575 Diagnostic test (morning)
Grammar test (afternoon)]]> 2018-01-11 01:27:31 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/220432575 Thursday jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/220432622 Reading and writing folio consultations.]]> 2018-01-11 01:27:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/220432622 Friday (last day of class!) jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/220432631 2018-01-11 01:27:53 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/220432631 Friday jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/220449520 Remake this Padlet to plan your response]]> 2018-01-11 04:16:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/220449520 Friday: Reading practise jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/222285605 2018-01-18 02:36:26 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/222285605 Thursday (afternoon) jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/222285725 Reading and writing test from 4:05pm—5:45pm. (100 minutes – make sure you can stay back for 15 minutes at the end to complete the test).]]> 2018-01-18 02:37:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/222285725 Reading & Writing B jessdarn https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/224053988 2018-01-24 00:30:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jessdarn/d75c0tc2cdrr/wish/224053988