https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn please share your feedback with the group en-us 2020-07-06 10:57:21 UTC 2020-07-06 19:03:18 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn/wish/648265651 Use less words in the slides. Regarding voice: obviously being English native language is not a problem for you but perhaps slowing a bit words pace can make your speache more understandable to all.]]> 2020-07-06 12:40:10 UTC https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn/wish/648265651 https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn/wish/648269424 I have appreciated a lot Hans pitch. I have only the following reamarks:
1) Are you sure that black bacground is beneficial?
2) Presenting the team and some background may be benificial]]> 2020-07-06 12:46:38 UTC https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn/wish/648269424 https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn/wish/648292673 Obviously technology is fundamental but it cannot be your unique selling point, especially dealing with EdTech (not pure AI or computer vision competition). More info regarding who (kindergardens) and why (more security for families, ..) is buying your solution might be helpful. A last note regarding privacy. Probably you mentioned before, sth like "GDPR compliant" or similar may be helpful.]]> 2020-07-06 13:18:57 UTC https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn/wish/648292673 https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn/wish/648299570 As Inbar has highlighted it is not clear what your product is. You have to show it. Moreover some background about you and the team might be helpful.]]> 2020-07-06 13:27:32 UTC https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn/wish/648299570 https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn/wish/648318682 Improve the graphic of "Problem" chart, add some background on you and your team.]]> 2020-07-06 13:51:07 UTC https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn/wish/648318682 https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn/wish/648319676 But the product is ArtCentrica, from Centrica (http://www.centrica.it), the main company.]]> 2020-07-06 13:52:01 UTC https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn/wish/648319676 https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn/wish/648320607 In the middle of the pitch there are too many and too small slides, cut some of that info so that you can have time for success stories and team.]]> 2020-07-06 13:53:01 UTC https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn/wish/648320607 https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn/wish/648326019 Sorry but I heard you very bad :(.]]> 2020-07-06 13:58:50 UTC https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn/wish/648326019 yehoshzl https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn/wish/648568026 Thought it was great, relevant and made me listen to the entire pitch]]> 2020-07-06 19:00:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mindcetyr/d4j6kul7mbhm34pn/wish/648568026