https://padlet.com/27arebuth/d3hb88gfyopr7jrg Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2021-01-05 19:06:07 UTC 2026-03-17 09:22:46 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f423.png https://padlet.com/27arebuth/d3hb88gfyopr7jrg/wish/1067760718 Your piece is amazing! I absolutely love all of your inner thoughts, and descriptive words! Your inner thoughts are such a great way to get your point across and all of your descriptive words are a great element to your story! However, I would personally change the wording for one of your smilies “ I looked down to see  my shaking  legs  that are branches on a tree on a windy day.” I would personally word that as “I looked down to see my legs shaking like weak tree branches on a very windy day” hope this helps! Awesome job!]]> 2021-01-08 16:43:34 UTC https://padlet.com/27arebuth/d3hb88gfyopr7jrg/wish/1067760718 27jrebuth https://padlet.com/27arebuth/d3hb88gfyopr7jrg/wish/1080401029 A star that i have for you is i like all you inner thoughts. 
Another star that i have is i like that you talked about that you smelled  the cinnamon coming from the churros,and the hot cheese coming from the cheese fries. A wish that i have for you is I wish that you had a little more detail for the pool.

]]> 2021-01-12 19:41:07 UTC https://padlet.com/27arebuth/d3hb88gfyopr7jrg/wish/1080401029 27callen1 https://padlet.com/27arebuth/d3hb88gfyopr7jrg/wish/1513068573 I like how you did 3 paragraphs to show to the reader how schools should have uniforms, I am actually against this topic but after reading yours I might change my mind. In your warrants you explained to me in great detail how an why we should wear uniforms and you explained it to me really well. I don't really have a wish to give you.]]> 2021-05-11 12:46:27 UTC https://padlet.com/27arebuth/d3hb88gfyopr7jrg/wish/1513068573 27bcolon1 https://padlet.com/27arebuth/d3hb88gfyopr7jrg/wish/1514031612 Hi, Angie i thought your essay was wonderful. A strength of your essay was when you were talking about the distraction . And I agree cloths that people wear can definitely cause a distraction and it might cause others to lose focus and I agree with that strongly. Another star is how you said”lesions  violence “. And that is true it can cause violence and no one wants that so I agree strongly again. A wish that I have for you is if you kept going about how the uniforms changes things and how it can be a better environment but besides that i thought you did a wonderful job- your friend Brielle Colon And in my opinion ( it might be easier to chose an outfit). 

]]> 2021-05-11 16:01:09 UTC https://padlet.com/27arebuth/d3hb88gfyopr7jrg/wish/1514031612 27mcoppockhuegel https://padlet.com/27arebuth/d3hb88gfyopr7jrg/wish/1517925876 Hi Angie! I really enjoyed reading your essay. It made many good points. The warrants were descriptive and the questions gave me things to think about. I think you did amazing! I have no wish for you!]]> 2021-05-12 15:26:50 UTC https://padlet.com/27arebuth/d3hb88gfyopr7jrg/wish/1517925876 https://padlet.com/27arebuth/d3hb88gfyopr7jrg/wish/1517959057 Hey Angie! I really loved reading your essay, you are an amazing writer! I loved the perspectives you wrote, they really showed emotion on the topic. I found your warrants were very unique, and cleaver!! Amazing work, I have no wishes for you! -Mily]]> 2021-05-12 15:33:55 UTC https://padlet.com/27arebuth/d3hb88gfyopr7jrg/wish/1517959057