Personal Recounts by Matthew Franklin

Success Steps

Year5Strand — 2015-03-15 17:25:02 UTC

Use these to help you write your diary entry

George Barclay 15th September 1940

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Diary entry of a Spitfire pilot

Fuselage

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Luftwaffe

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Messerschmidt

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Soon after

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Scrambled

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Devastated

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Destroyed

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Squadron

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Managed

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Landed

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Least important features

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Most important features

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PAST TENSE

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1st or 3rd PERSON

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CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER

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CLOSING STATEMENT

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TECHNICAL VOCAB

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INTRO

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TIME CONNECTIVES

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FANTASTIC WW2 VOCABULARY

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PAST TENSE VERBS

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TIME CONNECTIVES

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Finally,

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After a while,

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QUESTIONS TO ASK A PILOT'S MOTHER.

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QUESTIONS TO ASK A SPITFIRE PILOT.

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How do you cope knowing that your son is in constant danger

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What is the biggest danger you have faced?

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Are you proud of your son?

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How do you feel when your children are away?

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Would you do anything to get back to your son?

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Are you upset that your son isn't with you?

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Would you rather be a war hero or a normal person?

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Do you miss your family?

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Who has the best equipment, the Allies or the Nazis?

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Are you far away from home?

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WAGOLL

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I am sat here feeling proud of my son for fighting in this glorious war. I cannot help but worry about his safety. Every day I listen to the news to find out more information. I know that yesterday 250 German planes crossed the Channel. Jimmy down the road unfortunately lost his life last week. I live in hope that my son is alive and well.

Verb, subject sentences

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Flying, before I tried it I had always been terrified of it.

Outside (inside) sentences

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I smiled and said I was looking forward to the mission. (It wasn't true, I longed to be somewhere else.)

If, if, if, then sentences

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If the bullets have been replaced, if the plane has been refuelled, if I get some rest, then I will be able to fly again soon.

THESAURUS WORK

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The parson's cat is ........

Frightened

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Intimidated

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Dismayed

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Horrorstruck

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Imperturbable

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Compose

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CALM

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The parson's cat is a calm cat.

Molify

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Quiet

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Stillness

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Terryfied

Smooth

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Motionless

Unruffled

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Placid

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Unhurried

Peaseful

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Screaming I jumped out of my plane horror scruck

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Horrified,the British didn't want to be killed

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Holly

Crashing ,the German messersmidtt fell down on the ground

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Holly

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Terrified, I was scared when I jumped out of the plane

Flaming, the hurricane was going down.

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Herobrine

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Burning, I needed to jump out before I got hurt.

Burning, my plane wing was on fire

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Ryan

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Screaming, trying to get out of the plane whiles the plane was crashing down.

Zara

Burning, I need to jump out before I get burnt badly.

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Lillie

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Fleeing, Germans went fling back home leyton

Screaming, I fell a long way down .

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By Libb.

Worred, i was terrified when I had to go attack the Germans.

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Levi

I smiled and headed to my plane ( my heart was racing scardley)

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I was a big brave man ( but inside I was small and not brave)

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Levi

I was very happy to go from the war (not I want to stay in the war lana

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I said to my boss I will be fine(actually I was terrified of dying

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Ryan

I smiled with glee getting on the Lancaster (but I had no hope of coming back)bradl

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I smiled happily and bravely (but I was terrified of what was to come.joseph

Bravely I carried my best friend back to the airplane ,

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Inside I was so scared of what was happening to him I was desperate to know .

Very brave infront of my colleagues (inside,want to go with my wife and kids)

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By zara

I was happy I was alive ( but I felt worried because I didn't know what was going to happen)

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Ellishia

I was telling my family I wasn't scared of fighting the Germans (but inside)

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Get ready for the mission I said (scared to death I was).

I flew over the German base( calmy,my heart was racing)

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Ryan

I stepped in my spitfire happy( I felt lik e I was going to die

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Ryan

I felt joyfull I was doing it, ( although I was scared about what was going to happen.

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Ellishia

Bombing the

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I was very happy(but I cryed when I there was no one only me)

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By zara

Germans attacked us

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I carried a nazi because he was dead(inside I didn't want to because there trying to kill us holly poole

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I was frightened ,(but I felt brave in the inside). By jasmine

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I felt proud of myself ( but I thought I was going to die).

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Ellishia

I shot up in my spitfire and I knew I could be brave and I knew not to leave i persavired megan

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I was so glad I was al

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Inside I was horror struck of how many of my

I felt happy to be alive(however I knew I would die in this horr

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I love the army (I lie so badly).

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Leyton:)

I don't miss my family because I am brave (inside I did because the will miss me so much if I doe holly poole

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If work hard if I help if I stay alive then I might get a promotion. Leyton

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If the plane is fixed, if we're ready ,if we are full off amazing equipment,Then we can win

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If nazis shoot at me,if my plane falls,if I crash then I might die holly poole

If the Germans get lazy ,if the planes are week, if lose then my first day will be great. Leyton

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If the plane works, if the plane has fuel, if the plane is fixed then I will be able to fly it.

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Ellishia

If I have a rest,if I get my clothes on, if I am carefull,then I will win the battle of britain.

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If a nazi shoots at me,if I dodge,if I'm careful then I'll stay alive holly poole

If I get my breakfast, if, I make it to the plane, if my plane is refilled, the I could bomb the german.

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Ryan the lion

If the war is short, if Germans fail, if we can defend then my boy might live! Leyton

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If I shoot right,if I miss,if I sob then Germans will shoot back holly Poole

If I can live for ever and not get killed from the Germans,if I can talk to my family,if I got listen to,then I will do ok agen.

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Levi

If I escape the nazi, if, I travel by foot,if I make it home, then I can put my feet up.

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Ryan

If I concentrate were I am going,if I doge the German bullets,if I hit my target then this will be a succesful misson

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If I eat my soop fast ,if I had a drink ,if I worked out then I cood of saved him (Bradley)

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If the bomb drop,if I won the battle of Britain,if I was brave, then I would be proud of myself.

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Megan

If I get a break , if mother is ok , if my house is still there, life will get better. Leyton

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If I'm not scared, if I am brave, if I work hard, then I will fly in the air .

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Ellishia

If I can go home ,if I can see my family,if I can not cray at night,then I will be cheerful all the time.

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Levi

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If we win,if we will kill the Germans ,if the engine works we can do are best to win ,then I can go home relaxed. N.

If I survive, if I get food, if I make it to my camp, then I will be safe.

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Ryan

If I'm alive, if I don't break a bone, if I don't get shot then my luck has changed. Leyton

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If I set my alarm, If I go to bed early, If I wake up early, Then I will be early before the euro planes take off, Then I will win the Battle of Britain.

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If I shoot the nazis ,if I manage to shoot them if I celebrate and don't look then they'll shoot at me!holly poole

If my hand Isent bleeding, if I don't get shot, if my jacket doesn't catch fire then i will b able to shoot

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Ryan the lion

If I get sad,if I give up,if I loose faith, then I woudnt try my best holly poole

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If the engine dose not brake, if I don't sender I will not be a fool, if I have enough bombs then I will make my family happy

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By Zara

ZARA - maybe : Screaming, I tried to get out of the plane...... would be better.

Year5Strand — 2015-03-25 09:38:28 UTC

Remember to use past tense.

RYAN - remember to use FS

Year5Strand — 2015-03-25 09:39:52 UTC

ZARA - read this again. Edit it to make more sense.

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This doesn't quite make sense.

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LEVI - remember FS

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HOLLY - remember to punctuate at the end of sentences

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RYAN - read this to check if it makes sense

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LEVI - some of these are super. make sure you are careful with your spellings though.

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HOLLY - remember to use a comma before the word THEN.

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Lancaster

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Tall Boy bomb

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RYAN-remember to close the brackets.

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BUT INSIDE...WHAT?

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HOLLY- read this again. Can you spot your mistakes?

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THIS SENTENCE ISN'T FINISHED PROPERLY.

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THIS IS A LITTLE BIT LIKE SOMETHING YODA WOULD SAY!

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ZARA-This has the makings of a great sentence. Just be careful to re-read it to check for mistakes.

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ELLISHIA-I like how there is a contrast in these clauses.

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JASMINE - Good. Nice and simple.

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BRADLEY - I like this. Make sure you use FS.

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I needed....

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wuzzat

2015-03-26 09:34:16 UTC

If I don't wake up crying in the morning,if I don't have a dream of the little kid I had killed, if I can get him off my maned,then I will no wake up and no cryin the morning'

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..levi

Alex I need a better word for terafing

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Lama I need a better word than fear

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Do yout

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Dose anyone think this sounds alright to start with,

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I had a ressless night

Bradley I need a better word than frightened from jasmine

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Does anybody think that distance is a good word to use if your a fighter picket in the sky fighting?hollypoole

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Flavia i need a better word for crawling

I need a better word for meeting Alex

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Does this inside outside sentence sound good.

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Thank you for that alarm(actulaey I was mad).

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Lana horror struck

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Lana use petrified

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I now I better word then fear for lana the word is shocked

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Lana woonded

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From Alex your pall

Alex try horrified

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Frightened

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I really found this interesting and it looked good and sounded rout

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To Alex another word for greeting could be bteithing

Brei

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From Libby

Sky- can anybody help me with a better word then fast please

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Alex ogonisation

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Leyton

Jasmine you can useterified

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Flavia try sly reeping

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Lan this is from scared

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Scurid

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Qwick

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Libby

Ok

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Frightening

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Yes how ever it's inside outside

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Is this a good if,if if sentins

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If I go to Germany ,if I come back alive ,if Germany sender we will win the battle

Alex love

How could I write that I had breakfast looking for good sentences.

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From libby

How do you spell rode of

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From ruan

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To leyton what is another word for crashing? From holly poole

Does later that war sound good to use

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From ryan

Does sound good. I wonder if shes okay in heava

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when I was bombing, some enemies shot my plane.

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Herobrine

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To mr Franklin does

Alex's work

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To Alex I abseleoutly love this10out of10 from me holly poole

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I like the way you describe what food you eat. Love sky

Love your work alex

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Ryan

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That's good Alex it's got amazing description flavia

good Alex. Megan

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It's a lovely good story a 100 out of a 100

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To Alex from Levi

Yes it is

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Has anyone got any good sentences that I could magpie

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Toli

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To Libby does this sound okay these people are very Young I didn't want to kill them (inside

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Ellishia's work

Year5Strand — 2015-03-26 10:52:34 UTC

Yes it's good

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That's good Ellishia10out of 10 from flavia

Nice leyton

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A lovely pese and good pese of woke I will Gith you out of 100 no a fens Ellishir it's 99

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To Ellishia from levi

Sort of hol you didn't put the outside of it though 6'/ 1

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Amazing up to now

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Grate work

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From your pall Alex

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I'm gonna cry. Now😂

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Fantastic Ellishia maybe you could add more information about your mission

Soz

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I'm joking

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Ok xx

Thankyou

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Keep on writhing elishia you could get yours sent to digby

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From Ryan the kungfu lion

How do you think I cou write about the bre

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No afence ellishia but I give you 0 out of 100 not really I give you 100 out of 100

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Lovely peice of work alex

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Ellishia

It is a good start from lillie

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Tom lillie

U cud put the cffee wiz smooth no the toast woz

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Alex no afence but make sure you get your spellings right from

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G

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Well done li

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Libwter

Good from megatron

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This is the best work ever to Alex from zara

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Has anyone have a better word for sol

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A

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To lien it's good but you could put more description in it I give u

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U can put

Discussion Alex from sk

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U can pt th cffee woz smooth and the tost is gret

I told my friends that I am brave(but I was terrified)

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I'm so sorry

No girl not

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What does that mean?

Nice Alex

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Lana