https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro I think that homework is an unnecessary part of the learning process. Homework causes stress for many students. Studies have shown that most homework is not helpful. en-us 2018-02-05 14:20:36 UTC 2026-02-25 02:59:53 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Beartoy.png https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228122846 It needs a hook and that there's too many period breaks, and not enough commas.]]> 2018-02-05 14:31:13 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228122846 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228124576 You need to reorganize the paragraph.]]> 2018-02-05 14:34:00 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228124576 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228124694 the introduction can't say "I think". it needs a hook, and less periods.]]> 2018-02-05 14:34:14 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228124694 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228125333 The introduction needs a quote, interesting fact or something else, that hooks he reader.]]> 2018-02-05 14:35:19 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228125333 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228126571 the introduction needs a hook and less periods.]]> 2018-02-05 14:37:17 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228126571 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228126959 Needs a hook, they should use commas instead of some of those periods.

]]> 2018-02-05 14:37:47 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228126959 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228128089 there are to many periods. they need commas and conjunctions

]]> 2018-02-05 14:39:24 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228128089 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228218947 Give a hook and background information]]> 2018-02-05 16:54:21 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228218947 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228220572 Needs a hook and a comma.]]> 2018-02-05 16:56:42 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228220572 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228221507 It needs a hook ]]> 2018-02-05 16:58:07 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228221507 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228221846 By hayden]]> 2018-02-05 16:58:37 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228221846 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228222559 Needs hook and background information ]]> 2018-02-05 16:59:35 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228222559 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228222572 Hayden]]> 2018-02-05 16:59:36 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228222572 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228288990 Give it a hook, some background information, and add some commas.]]> 2018-02-05 18:46:43 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228288990 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228289682 it doesn’t have background knowledge.]]> 2018-02-05 18:47:57 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228289682 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228290627 It needs a better hook and more information.

]]> 2018-02-05 18:49:37 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228290627 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228290797 They could add a hook.]]> 2018-02-05 18:49:57 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228290797 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228291091 -who studied homework
-it needs a hook
-claim needs to be the last (first change it to the last)]]> 2018-02-05 18:50:21 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228291091 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228291118 It needs a hook to make the reader want to keep on reading.]]> 2018-02-05 18:50:24 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228291118 https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228291487 Add different types of sentences]]> 2018-02-05 18:51:00 UTC https://padlet.com/christen_leifel/intro/wish/228291487