Writing Practice August 14 by trung nguyen

Writing Practice August 14 by trung nguyen https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz Min 70, max 100 words en-us 2021-08-14 12:22:56 UTC 2025-11-06 03:19:22 UTC hello@padlet.com sparkenglishmaterials https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1678984380 Emphasis lead-in for argument:

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We need to acknowledge that (emphasis lead-in) living away from parents while in university can help students become more independent. This is because when they are all alone, students will have to deal with life’s problems all by themselves, and thus gaining more experience in how to lead a life on their own. As a matter of fact, many Vietnamese students studying in the US have to work part time in order to pay for their living expenses, which allows them learn how to manage their own financial situations years before graduating from school.

We need to acknowledge that (emphasis lead-in) living away from parents while in university can help students become more independent. The point I want to emphasize is the fact that when entering college, most students are at the turning point of teenage ad adulthood, therefore being able to live by themselves can later turn them into more productive members of society. If I recall correctly, there has been many researches proving that when students go through colleges by themselves, they end up earning higher salary on average than those who stay with their parents.

]]> 2021-08-14 12:22:56 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1678984380 Duc Minh leducminhpan1k https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1678985083 1. It seems to be clear that literature lessons are boring due to lack of sensationalism and actual value in modern society. The basis of this could be the fact that student books tend to teach old stories instead of updating practical study programms. Passages tend to be irrelavent to contemporary society while subjects like maths or english are certainly crucial to help students with applying in almost occupations. Spending time studying obsoleted lessons can be meaningless to students. For example, many students made up their mind to study in narueal sciences class instead of finishing their academic career in library reading novels.

2. The teaching of literature can be meaningless if their teachers keep blocking students' brainstorming by analyzing the lessons mechanically. Despite the fact that literature can be understood differently to different mindsets,

]]> 2021-08-14 12:25:20 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1678985083 Duc Minh leducminhpan1k https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1678988476 1. Admittedly, it is worth mention that spending time perusing masterpieces can help students to improve their writing and reading skills. The explanation for this could be the fact that novels and poems are artworks from many famous authors such as William Shakespeare and Mark Twain, which can help students to enlarge their vocabulary and have solid understanding of language art. Having good linguistic backgrounds while building a logically mindset, high school students' academic performance can be overwhelmingly boosted by spending time engaging in literature lessons. As a matter of fact, many high schools have soon relized this upside. Take HSGS high school as an example. Having known as a high school which is good at natural sciences, this school has been increasing the quality of literature lessons, aiming to help students with their language skills.]]> 2021-08-14 12:36:02 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1678988476 quang https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1678992876
From my individual views, I definitely agree with the waste of time for learning literature. The reason for this could be the fact that there is no application of poems or novels in contemporary life. We are now living in the digital era that the advance of technology such as computers or mobile phones will help us to connect and communicate. For example, if we want to mystically indicate a message, we only make a code, instead of thinking about hidden words when using poetry

There is no denying that learning literature makes students do not have enough time for other subjects. The point I want to emphasize is that literature is a subject that people need the ability to feel everything around them. People who do not have a good sense can not write good essays or inspirational poems. As a result, they spent their time doing something they never got better at instead of developing a subject that they did well in school, and that's not the goal of all education in the world

]]> 2021-08-14 12:49:11 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1678992876 Duy https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1678994097 We need to admit that it would be a waste of effort for students who spend they time learning unused skills such as how to write poems and novels. The point that I want to emphasized is that only an extremely small number of students actually put these knowledge into good use in the future, and thus not all the students follow the path of a writer. As the matter of fact, time the students used for literature work can be used to improve in many other subjects.

It is worth mentioning that literature is not a thing which can easily be learn by all the students. This is because some students just way more prefer technical subjects suchlike science or mathematic, so learning the way how to write poems or novels is not the best use of their time. For example, it would be a waste for the talent of a math genius if he is force to learn literature.

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In modern life, learning literature plays an extremely important role in developing children. In fact, from the past to now, life experiences which were gained by ancient generations were summed up in poems or novels. Because of the brevity and the clarity in the poetry, students can easily understand, even they will learn it faster than reading the theory. As a result, poetry is one of a best way for student to accumulate the life experiences to develop more comprehensively

We need to admit that literature is a subject that help student a lot in the real life, so we can not think that literature works are wasting time for students, especially high school students. In fact, when we learn poems or novels, we are actually learning how to indicate the information clearly and logically. In the future, when we have to communicate or argue for a contract, we need to convince the partner by presenting the ability in a fluent and clear way, and especially need the connection between the information so that the partner can understand and then agree to sign the contract.

]]> 2021-08-14 13:07:57 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679001938 Duc Minh leducminhpan1k https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679002035 1. The primary reason of this could be the fact that having children later in their life helps women to have more time flourishing their passions and build their careers. The thing I want to emphasize is that having children later, young women can spend more time devoting themselves for their dreams without being physically effected or having lack of leisure time. Take Alex Morgan, a female football prodigy as an example. She decided to give birth to a child at the age of 31 so that she could focus on her football career and winning World Cup.]]> 2021-08-14 13:08:10 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679002035 quang https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679002662
In contemporary life, there are a lot of benefits of late pregnancy. The point I want to emphasize is that if women pregnants late, they can make the best condition for their future baby with their husbands. For example, Emma McKeon, a swimming competitor in Olympic Tokyo, say that she will choose reward the gold medals then have baby instead of opposite because if she win, she will gain a lot of money to help her nourish the baby

In my views, I strongly think that having a baby late will increase the survival rate of both mother and child. The basis of this could be the fact that, if women prepare psychology before pregnancy, they can decrease their own pressure. As a result, they will have a strong mentality to endure the pain of childbirth and ensure their lives

]]> 2021-08-14 13:09:45 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679002662 Duy https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679003490 It is worth mentioning that learning literature can train the students the way to come out with fast and creative ideas. The explanation for this could be the fact that when come to write poems or novels, students must endlessly brainstorm a lot of things to complete their work on time, and thus gaining more experience in how to fast dealing with tasks. For instance, when practicing literature at school students have to come up with multiple ideas of their own which can really help in any kind of work in the future. ]]> 2021-08-14 13:11:48 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679003490 Duc Minh leducminhpan1k https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679005384 1. Turning to its negative outcomes, having child at the old age might enlarge the generation gap between mom and her child. The explanation for this could be the fact that to understand children, parents should carry empathy and intimacy to them. Being too old makes it harder to communicate with their offspring, which can cause bad conflicts. For instance, old parents can judge their kids by the outfits they wear or music tastes, while adolescents may sometimes find their parents grumpy and stereotype.]]> 2021-08-14 13:17:07 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679005384 quang https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679008787
Admittedly, having a baby late will make parents spend a lot of strength to nourish their child. On the one hand, if women become pregnant late means that their health has declined. On the other hand, a baby is always annoying so taking care of a child is harder for high-age parents. For example, a 25 year old can stay up all night to look after a child but this is too difficult for a 40 year old because without sleep they will get sick

]]> 2021-08-14 13:24:56 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679008787 Duc Anh https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679009622 We need to acknowledge that , analysing literature writing open the door for high school students to sufficiently understand more about life value . The explaination for this could be the fact that literature masterpieces often transfer a meaningful message to people. For instance , when high school students learning about "Toi di hoc" , which is written by Nguyen Ngoc Ky , student will absorb the value of integrity in life .]]> 2021-08-14 13:26:36 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679009622 Duy https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679012301 We need to admit that deciding to have children later in their life can really help women to stable their economy condition. This is because it would be critical problem if she cannot be able to provide her children a proper life, thus giving birth in the later period mean that the women can put more effort into her dream and career without having to career any other addition tasks. For example, a women will be bombard with stress if she has to take care of the child along with trying to promote in her job.
We need to acknowledge that giving birth later in a women life can give more time and experience to prepare themselves for the life with their child. The point that I want to emphasized is that if the women is having good mental health, the child when born can process better health condition alongside with the mother. For example, a women who got pregnant in the young age can easily be in life danger situation when birth because of stress.]]> 2021-08-14 13:31:21 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679012301 Duc Anh https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679015452 It it worth mention that having children later in women life helps them have more time to prepare thoroughly about becoming a mother. The basis of this is the fact that the more people older , the more experienced they will be , so when a old women have listened and learnt about mother's skill , she will upbring the child more effectively . As the matter of fact , ]]> 2021-08-14 13:38:19 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679015452 Bài chữa của Duy leducminhpan1k https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679018591 We need to admit that it would be a waste of effort for students who spend their time learning unvaluable skills such as how to write poems and novels. The point that I want to emphasize is that only an extremely small number of students actually put these knowledge into good usages in the future, and thus not all the students follow the path of a writer. As a matter of fact, the time students used for literature works can be used to improve many other subjects.

It is worth mention that literature is not a thing which can easily be learned to all the students. This is because some students just way more prefer technical subjects such as science or mathematic, so learning how to write poems or novels is not the best use of their time. For example, it would be a waste for the talent of a math genius if he is forced to learn literature.

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1. It seems to be clear that literature lessons are boring due to the lack of sensationalism and actual value in modern society. The basis of this could be the fact that student books tend to teach old stories instead of updating practical study programs. Passages tend to be irrelevant to contemporary society while subjects like maths or english are certainly crucial to help students with applying in almost all occupations. Spending time studying obsolete lessons can be meaningless to students. For example, many students made up their mind to study in natural sciences class instead of finishing their academic career in library reading novels.

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1. It is obvious that literature classes are boring due to the lack of sensationalism and practical value in modern society. The basis for this is probably that literature student books are not contemporary so it is meaningless for students to study obsolete lessons. For example, many students made up their mind to study in natural sciences class instead of finishing their academic career in library reading novels because of the high-quality value for their future careers

]]> 2021-08-14 13:46:15 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679019399 sửa bài đức minh https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679020457 2021-08-14 13:48:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679020457 Duc Minh's re-write of Duc Anh https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679021623 Admittedly, it is worth mentioning that spending time perusing masterpieces can help students to improve their writing and reading skills. The explanation for this could be the fact that novels and poems are artworks from many famous authors such as William Shakespeare and Mark Twain, which can help students to enlarge their vocabulary and have solid understanding of language art. For example , allowing high school students to analyse about " Romeo and Juliet " of William Shakespeare, students will absorb the romantic and attactive writing style of Skakespeare.]]> 2021-08-14 13:51:09 UTC https://padlet.com/sparkenglishmaterials/czo86n3wn59rmvtz/wish/1679021623