https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7 Choose the ending to the fable with the best use of temporal words and strong verbs. Tell why you selected that ending. en-us 2017-01-19 19:57:46 UTC 2025-09-26 04:19:43 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Rocket.png jamie39 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148222272 While the storm was raging, the dog was trembling in fear unable to sleep, while the sheep were calmly sound asleep dreaming. ]]> 2017-01-19 19:59:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148222272 jamie39 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148222494 After the long day, they went inside the barn. Then, while the dog was sleeping, it woke up with terror because of the lightning storm. Next, the sheep woke up and saw that the dog was frightened, so they comforted it. ]]> 2017-01-19 20:00:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148222494 jamie39 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148222720 Finally, night was upon them as they rushed to their cribs and fell asleep. But suddenly, the dog had awoken from his rest. He was petrified of the terrible sound he had heard. All of the roaring had upset the dog and the sheep still stirred. But, before the thunder could strike again, the dog fell asleep laying his head on the sheep. ]]> 2017-01-19 20:01:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148222720 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148451020 i selcted choice 3 because it used strong verbs like petrafied.  it has more strong verbs. I agree Bailey, that is definitely a great verb.  Do you think that choice one has stronger verbs than choice 3?  Why or why not? ]]> 2017-01-20 18:47:13 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148451020 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148451062 i pick choice 3 because it has the most strong verbs and the best ending.]]> 2017-01-20 18:47:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148451062 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148451648 i think choice 1: had the best ending the reason why is it adds a ton of strong verbs. i don't think that the others do any ways

]]> 2017-01-20 18:49:34 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148451648 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148451701 I think choice 3 is the  best because it tells what was happening in the pictures plus it use's the right context of words and it involvse the two out of three characters and the main character is awake unlike the sheep.]]> 2017-01-20 18:49:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148451701 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148451822 i pick choice 3 because it is long and has a lot of strong verbs. Does it being long make it better you think? Or, is there something about the strong verbs that makes this writing stronger?]]> 2017-01-20 18:49:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148451822 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148451888 I choose choice 3 because it had really strong verbs and the ending was wrote what the picture looks like and it uses temporal words and they used strong verbs instead f weak verbs in there ending.]]> 2017-01-20 18:50:10 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148451888 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148451927 I think choice 3 had the best ending because it had strong verbs it descrises the ending well.   I agree Nara!  Is there anything from the choice that really stands out to you?  ]]> 2017-01-20 18:50:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148451927 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148452079 I selected choice three because the choice uses temporal words or great discriptive words in the last sentence.     ]]> 2017-01-20 18:50:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148452079 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148452286 I pick choice 2 because it h is long and and has lots of verbs like after a long day, then, terror and frightened. ]]> 2017-01-20 18:51:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148452286 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148452318 i think choice 3 is the best
because it had more detaill. And it had strong verbs.]]> 2017-01-20 18:51:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148452318 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148452510 I think that choice 3 is the best because it uses a lot of strong verbs and temporal words. I agree Brianna! I love the verb choice in #3 as well. I think it helps the reader really visualize being there. ]]> 2017-01-20 18:51:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148452510 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148452548 I think choice 3 has the best ending because  it has lots of strong verbs. I agree Tizhay. I think that the verbs in this choice really help our reader to see why the dog was so stressed out. ]]> 2017-01-20 18:52:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148452548 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148452823 I think choice 2. But i think they should change the it to the dog, so the readers know what your talking about. i do like that they had alot of strong verbs and 2 sequence words and it really deccribes the ending well]]> 2017-01-20 18:52:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148452823 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148452882 I think choice three because it has alot of sequence words and alot of strong verbs]]> 2017-01-20 18:52:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148452882 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148452917 I think number 3 because it has so many strong words]]> 2017-01-20 18:53:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148452917 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148453268 Choice three because it has a bunch of strong verbs and. This also why "as the sheep were soundly asleep the dog was shivering with fear". Brennen-Please go back and read the question at the top of the page.  Which is the choice you would pick for the best ending?]]> 2017-01-20 18:54:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148453268 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148453308
I selected choice 1 because it had really strong verbs and the ending was wrote what the picture looks like.]]> 2017-01-20 18:54:23 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148453308 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148453811 I agree Alyssa. I love the verb choice in choice 3. By:Alyssa]]> 2017-01-20 18:55:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148453811 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148454177 Ithink three because strong verbs had sequence words  like finally, first, and next.]]> 2017-01-20 18:57:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148454177 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148454345 I think choice 3 is the best choice because it grabs people's attenttion.]]> 2017-01-20 18:58:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148454345 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148454693 I chose choice 2 because it had really strong verbs instead of weak verbs.  Why would you choose 2 over 3?  What is your reasoning?  I like where you are going, but add some more detail to your response. I like choice 2 because it had at least 2 temporal words.]]> 2017-01-20 18:59:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148454693 https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148454728 i like choice 3 because it represents the picture really well and also has strong verbs]]> 2017-01-20 18:59:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jamie39/cz2cfwmsiap7/wish/148454728