Your approach having a specific theme and comparing this to another global curriculum is strong through this piece of work and the right approach for the masters.

I would like you to consider the following in your next module -

• Using those command verbs in your introduction and focusing on these in your planning and assessment.

• When you are making statements always demonstrate what the research is saying. Moving away from having research that supports what you think, to the research influencing your ideas and thoughts.

• Being consistent in your critical discussion and demonstrating a balance of views.

• Keep any organisations anonymous