Writing Practice Test 1 by Gus Musewe

Mingyang Fan

2022-07-11 02:29:10 UTC

LILIBU

2022-07-11 02:29:33 UTC

AiHong Bai(Yolanda)

2022-07-11 02:30:11 UTC

With the development of The Times, people's definition of beauty is constantly developing and changing. In the last 20 years, the global fashion industry is extremely hot and countless people are keen on wearing more fashionable clothes. Therefore, faced with this situation, some people have doubts about it: is it good or bad that people are keen on following the fashion? I think it has a bad effect on our life.
First of all, we should consider why it is so. I think there are two reasons。
Firstly，With the development of the Internet, there are more and more ways for people to obtain knowledge that was difficult to know before. For example, through instagram, Twitter and other social media, we can see the social accounts of many celebrities and Internet celebrities. People can also see many videos of fashion ICONS. This allows a person to quickly learn to mimic what they think is fashionable.

Second, to own request is too high. In recent 20 years, the proportion of women work far more than 50 years ago women found work has received the higher education made it financially independent. And the love of beauty is a human nature So these women are also very keen to store or through online shopping to buy new clothes for himself Make themselves look more beautiful ...

But In my opinion，Nothing can develop more than one "degree". Beyond that, everything goes bad. The emergence of the Internet has promoted the development of social media, providing ordinary people with a more convenient opportunity to see the world. In the beginning, people can learn more knowledge through these social media. But later, many blogs started receiving ads. At this time, the dress is no longer pure. For example: In China, there is a very famous Internet celebrity named Doudeer. She has gained 10 million followers through her makeupd and clothes videos. She was soon bombarded with requests for ads because of her huge following, but was reluctant to admit that her video contained ads. But she spend more time praising the clothes in their matching videos, tricking fans into buying lower-quality, higher-priced clothes. What is more frightening is that in social media, more and more bloggers cheat consumers through such "hidden ads", which will have an impact on individuals' economy and trust

At the beginning, people bought new clothes to make themselves look more beautiful, but as time went by, their demands on themselves became excessive. For example, in China in the last five years, male aesthetics and clothing merchants made women's beauty become a template A beautiful woman needs to weigh no more than 50kg, look pale and youthful (preferably as pure as a child), and muscular girls are generally deemed too masculine on social media. Faced with such chronic mental pollution, many women suffer from anxiety over their appearance and body shape In addition, some clothing vendors (such as BM) only make small sizes of clothes, which makes women conform to the standard beauty by skipping dinner, treating beauty and liposuction and other extreme ways, which will only damage one's health.

Overall,I think whether a person wears fashionable clothes is her own choice, which can make her comfortable and happy. In today's society, many small-size brands excessively promote body anxiety in order to sell more of their clothes, which is very harmful to health.

JiangHan

JiangHan — 2022-07-11 02:31:38 UTC

JiangHan

JiangHan — 2022-07-11 02:32:46 UTC

Xiao ZiXuan

2022-07-11 02:33:10 UTC

imbalances.

So I think it's understandable to wear fashionable clothes, but if you pursue fashion too much, it will have a great impact on your later life, which is not good.

Jane

yanisajane — 2022-07-11 02:33:12 UTC

2022-07-11 02:33:56 UTC

wangQian

YIJUN LIU1

2022-07-11 02:35:31 UTC

Fern

2022-07-11 02:37:03 UTC

lu shangqun

2022-07-11 02:39:01 UTC

Ing

2022-07-11 02:40:49 UTC

kanon

2022-07-11 02:41:20 UTC

Beam

2022-07-11 02:42:10 UTC

Ing2

2022-07-11 02:42:28 UTC

Dream

Walaiii — 2022-07-11 02:43:16 UTC

baihanwang

2022-07-11 02:57:03 UTC

The reason why many people like to wear fashionable clothes may be that these people have great curiosity, dare to take risks, pursue being different, etc. First of all, they pursue fashion and can meet the need to blow the ball for new things. Human beings instinctively have the psychological tendency to desire new things, like new things and dislike old things. The pursuit of new food and curiosity is the instinctive demand of human beings, and the novelty of fashion and fashion itself can meet this demand.

Whether the clothes are good or bad depends on the specific situation. If the fashion behavior within the bottom line of our acceptable moral sentiment maintains positive social value, this kind of fashion is good. After all, the world needs some color. Such fashion can make our world more wonderful and our life more abundant. This is also innovation and personality, as long as it is positive energy. For example, people like to wear clothes with words on their clothes when they have time, but these clothes all have words that make people progressive, which can carry forward the positive energy around us

But if the so-called dress has no moral bottom line, this kind of fashion behavior is not worth advocating. Because such behavior will have a bad impact on people's ideas, or distort people's values, taking ugliness as beauty. Such a fashion has a negative effect on the whole society, or families and individuals, and is a kind of social pathology. For example, people wear too much exposure, which is bad behavior

So I think people should appropriately pursue fashion, wear normally, and promote the positive energy of the society

YIJUN LIU2

2022-07-11 03:05:30 UTC

Dream

2022-07-11 04:19:29 UTC

Ann-Writing(1)

Sutthida_Ann — 2022-07-11 04:20:55 UTC

Ann-Writing(2)

Sutthida_Ann — 2022-07-11 04:21:35 UTC

JingJing Xue (Anna)

2022-07-11 06:32:16 UTC

Writing
Nowadays there are more and more people who like to wear fashionable clothes, and I think this is a good thing. The diversity of clothing styles proves the progress of the times, the development of human civilization, and the improvement of people's aesthetics. More importantly, I think this is also a manifestation of loving oneself.

First of all, some people think that this is not a good thing will have the following reasons. First, some people think that wearing fashionable clothes and dressing themselves is just to attract other people's attention and gain eyeballs. Secondly, they think that fashion is not a necessity in our daily life and there is no need to care whether they are fashionable or not. And there will be some people who think that fashion will cost a lot of money, which is very wasteful. The third point is that many people also think that fashion is just to satisfy personal vanity and have a great prejudice against the so-called 'fashion'.

However, in reality this is not the case. I believe that fashion can give us confidence and stylish dressing can indeed make us stand out in the crowd and also give us a strong aura that will make us less nervous in some occasions. Secondly, I think fashionable dress is a good reflection of a country's social development and national culture. Only when the country is peaceful, the society is progressing and the economy is developing, people will have the energy to dress themselves and wear clothes that show the national culture. Not only that, I think wearing fashionable clothes can also drive the national economy, and people's spending in the clothing industry can provide employment opportunities for more people who love design, so that their works can also become a trend, instead of just pursuing big brands and luxury goods.

Finally, I think it is a very good thing to pursue fashion and wear fashionable clothes, which not only shows the improvement of people's living standard and the development of the national economy now, but also brings more designers conditions so that their works can have a chance to be recognized and promoted.

FengKai Zhang---Writing

2022-07-12 08:48:08 UTC

gus163539 — 2022-07-15 08:04:26 UTC