Flyer K5-unit 8 by Annie- Van an Igs

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duyendtvnu — 2024-08-11 10:24:11 UTC

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duyendtvnu — 2024-08-12 08:26:32 UTC

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trí

2024-08-13 02:42:15 UTC

the woman comes to her house in the evening when she finishes. The man who's standing in front of the door and waiting for his wife to give him the keys. Then she said: "Oh, my keys?" ,They decide to break the window to enter the ~~woman's~~ house ~~and~~. They found the ~~her~~ keys on the cabinet (cupboard)~~. They~~. so they are very happy ~~because they found the key~~ (dư thừa). Suddenly a policeman ~~come running~~ went past and said: "What are you doing " ? . They explained to the police: "We forgot our keys at home and we broke the door to get into the house."

>> chuyển câu chuyện về quá khứ

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kiên

2024-08-13 11:09:45 UTC

In the afternoon, a woman came to her house and she saw ~~a guy~~ her husband standing there and waiting for her ~~to give her the key~~ (gây rối)>> to get inside the house. When she ~~laid the key~~ opened her bag, she was extremely surprised because it wasn't there ~~inside her.~~ Both of them broke the window and went into the house to look for the key. they were very happy when they saw it. suddenly a policeman passed by and asked: what are you doing? they explained " we forgot the key in the house and broke window to get it"

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2024-08-14 02:59:06 UTC

Nam Phong

2024-08-14 03:08:14 UTC

_{Chuyển về thì quá khứ}

In the afternoon , The girls comes home when she finishes . The girl goes near the door and and she waites his wife .When the girl opened her bag to get the key, it was gone. She shouted: "My key was just here, where is it now?". She immediately searched all her things and her bag. But she couldn't find it. She thought back to what she had done, she remembered that she had put the key somewhere. And there was a policeman who knew where she put it. He went to her and helped her find it. She thanked the policeman very much.

>> yêu cầu tự dịch, không sử dụng google dịch nguyên câu chuyện, chỉ dịch một số từ vựng mình không biết.

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trang

2024-08-14 03:17:33 UTC

in the afternoon , the woman comes to her house when she finishes her works . then her husband is standing in front of the door and waiting for his wife (her) to give him the keys to unclock (unlock) the house . After that, she said:'' Oh, my keys!",(cần làm rõ thêm là bị quên chìa/mất chìa khoá) they decide to smash (=break) the window to get into the house and they found the keys in the cabinet(cupboard) so they are very happy . And there is a policeman comes and said: '' what are you doing'' then they explained to the police man :''we forgot the keys in the house so we had to broken (>> break) the window to get in b~~ecause we didn't had any keys''.~~

trúc

2024-08-14 03:41:40 UTC

one day, a couple was ~~going out~~ going home from work/restaurant when the wife discovered that she had forgotten her key . There was no other way (to get inside the house) because the door was looked . They had to break the window ~~when~~ then they got the key....(thêm 1 chút thông tin nữa) . A policeman appeared and two people were suspected of being thieves >> tự viết đơn giản hơn và hợp với phong cách của mình:

A policeman appeared and thought that they are robbers. But then, they explained that they broke the door because they forgot to bring the keys with them when they went out.

Việt

2024-08-14 06:07:15 UTC

In the evening, the woman came back to her home ~~when~~ after she finished ~~the~~ her work. Then, she saw her husband stood near their home. She went to him and asked: "What happened". The man said:" The door was locked and I didn't ~~had~~ have key". Heard that, the woman put the hand in the bag to ~~got~~ get the key. Suddenly, the wife shouted:'' Oh my key, I forgot the key ~~in the home~~ inside our house'. They thought of a way to got the key. ~~Final~~ finally, they decided to ~~smashed~~ (smash/break) the ~~wall~~ glass to ~~got~~ get the key. When they ~~got a key~~ got insde, the police passed by their house and asked:'' What are you doing?. Are you robbers?''. They ~~shy and said~~: answered/replied'' We ~~are forgetting~~ left the key inside and we ~~are smashing~~ have just smashed the wall to getting the key''.

Toàn

2024-08-14 06:10:09 UTC

One the morning, there are two people who are leaving ~~leave~~ in the house. The girl ~~find~~ finds the key in the hand bag. ~~Later~~ but she did ~~the girl~~ not find the key. the boy panicked. The boy ~~call~~ calls police go to the house ~~and~~ to break the window.Suddenly the girl ~~find~~ finds the key ~~in the drawer~~ on the cupboard. the boy and police are surprised. The two people thank ~~you~~ police and leave in a house.

>> Toàn đang hiểu sai về bức tranh rồi: 2 vợ chồng kia quên chìa khoá ở trong nhà và phá cửa để vào, Sau đó người cảnh sát đến và hiểu nhầm họ là trộm.

việt anh

duyendtvnu — 2024-08-16 10:01:36 UTC

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