https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol Post the grades you think Rory, Jane, Alice & Hannah should get for the essays. en-us 2020-09-16 11:30:11 UTC 2020-09-16 13:44:23 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751390277 C+]]> 2020-09-16 13:11:42 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751390277 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751393707 D

]]> 2020-09-16 13:12:29 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751393707 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751396707 Thesis/Argument/Reasoning: B+
Evidence/Quotation/Support: C
Organization: A
Audience: A-
Grammar/Language/Formatting: C]]> 2020-09-16 13:13:12 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751396707 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751400484 I would give Rory a B- or a C+. MLA format is not correct with heading and pages numbers, as well as thesis did not give a strong argument and It was sort of hard to follow. ]]> 2020-09-16 13:14:06 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751400484 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751400583 B]]> 2020-09-16 13:14:07 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751400583 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751401570 B]]> 2020-09-16 13:14:21 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751401570 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751406791 A but the citation is wrong ]]> 2020-09-16 13:15:31 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751406791 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751406807 Thesis/Argument/Reasoning: A-
Evidence/Quotation/Support: A-
Organization: A-
Audience: B+
Grammar/Language/Formatting: Unacceptable]]> 2020-09-16 13:15:32 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751406807 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751411174 C]]> 2020-09-16 13:16:33 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751411174 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751415884 A]]> 2020-09-16 13:17:37 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751415884 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751418608 Thesis/Argument/Reasoning: B
Evidence/Quotation/Support: A
Organization: A
Audience: A
Grammar/Language/Formatting: C]]> 2020-09-16 13:18:13 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751418608 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751419183 A]]> 2020-09-16 13:18:21 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751419183 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751420270 B-]]> 2020-09-16 13:18:37 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751420270 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751422046 Thesis/Argument/Reasoning: B-
Evidence/Quotation/Support: B+
Organization: A-
Audience: A
Grammar/Language/Formatting:  B-]]> 2020-09-16 13:19:03 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751422046 emorell99 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751424329 C+ His thesis did not tie in with his topic sentences for his body paragraphs. ]]> 2020-09-16 13:19:36 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751424329 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751427409 C]]> 2020-09-16 13:20:18 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751427409 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751428184 I would give Jane a D or F. While the essay itself was great, there was no works cited which is basically plagiarism. MLA format is wrong as well. ]]> 2020-09-16 13:20:29 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751428184 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751429084 B-]]> 2020-09-16 13:20:41 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751429084 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751429507 C+ ]]> 2020-09-16 13:20:47 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751429507 emorell99 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751433078 B. Her body paragraphs followed her argument. She used proper citation.]]> 2020-09-16 13:21:36 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751433078 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751438569 B- because he had an interesting essay just that his argument was unclear.]]> 2020-09-16 13:22:48 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751438569 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751439923
Thesis- A
Evidence- B-
Organization- A-
Audience- B-
Grammer- C]]> 2020-09-16 13:23:07 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751439923 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751442605 B]]> 2020-09-16 13:23:43 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751442605 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751448709 Thesis- A
Evidence- A
Organzation- B+
Audience- B-
Grammer- C-]]> 2020-09-16 13:25:08 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751448709 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751451865 I would give Alice a B+, her essay and argument is strong. She went in depth but her MLA format was wrong as well]]> 2020-09-16 13:25:51 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751451865 emorell99 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751452389 B-]]> 2020-09-16 13:25:58 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751452389 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751453661 A]]> 2020-09-16 13:26:17 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751453661 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751454672 B-]]> 2020-09-16 13:26:30 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751454672 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751455545 Probably a B range]]> 2020-09-16 13:26:42 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751455545 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751455893 Thesis- C
Evidence- A-
Orginaztion- B+
Audience- A
Grammer- C]]> 2020-09-16 13:26:47 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751455893 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751459616 Jane- D-
Alice-  C+
]]> 2020-09-16 13:27:39 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751459616 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751459837 C at best]]> 2020-09-16 13:27:42 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751459837 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751464873 Thesis- B
Evidence- A
Orgiantion- B-
Audience- C-
Grammer- A]]> 2020-09-16 13:28:46 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751464873 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751464967 B or A]]> 2020-09-16 13:28:47 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751464967 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751472687 Rory:
Thesis:b/evidence:c/organization:a/grammar:a

Jane:
thesis:c/evidence:b/organization:c/grammar:B

Hannah:
thesis:c/evidence:d/organization:b/grammar:d

Alice:
thesis:b/evidence:a/organization:a/grammar:b]]> 2020-09-16 13:30:27 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751472687 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751477307 Somewhere along the B range]]> 2020-09-16 13:31:30 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751477307 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751481119 A]]> 2020-09-16 13:32:22 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751481119 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751483110 A range]]> 2020-09-16 13:32:48 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751483110 https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751484122 A range]]> 2020-09-16 13:32:58 UTC https://padlet.com/aprawl2014/cwi36uj3ozg4izol/wish/751484122