Narración colaborativa by Joseline Lopez Ortiz

1185061_1 — 2024-10-31 15:49:28 UTC

In a small town outside of the big cities, there was man; a handsome, tall, strong a very intelligent man, the kind of men that every single woman would be crazy to found. He was an enigmatic and workaholic person, who only dream about reach a succesfull life in the profesional space rather than in ther filds of their life.

This man with only one vision was named Fausto Alejandro Agraseña, the only child of a farmer's family dedicated to the cattle raising. When Fausto was a little boy he grow up in a family circle with a lot of deficiencies in all the aspects, so since that age he promised himsef to never go back into that stage of his life, poverty, no matter what he need it to to he would always put her future first not matter if that would lead him to spend the rest of his life alone.

haniadarielalopezlimon89 — 2024-11-02 01:09:12 UTC

It´s a good story. I like how the character was developing the main point of the story.

1185068_1 — 2024-11-02 17:53:48 UTC

In his adulthood, he decided to live in a big city, nights were always noise and lighting. He was happy living his life full of riches, always getting out to parties and buying the most expensive things. His mood starts changing, he become ambitious and haughty. He even stopped visiting his parents and going to his old home. One day he went out to a party and the waitress spilled some champagne on his shirt, he was furious and asked for the young woman to be fired, when suddenly...

1185062_1 — 2024-11-03 00:56:52 UTC

...a gentle voice interrupted his outburst. "Fausto, that's enough." He turned to see a stunning woman, her piercing green eyes sparkling with disapproval. "You're being unreasonable." Fausto's anger faltered, replaced by curiosity. Who was this woman, daring to confront him? She introduced herself as Sophia, the restaurant owner's daughter. As they locked eyes, Fausto felt an unexpected jolt. For the first time, his priorities wavered.

Sophia's words cut deep: "Wealth and status aren't everything, Fausto. You're losing yourself in your ambition." Her words echoed his parents' wisdom, long forgotten in his pursuit of success. Fausto's facade began to crumble.

As Sophia helped the shaken waitress, Fausto noticed the stark contrast between his lavish lifestyle and the genuine kindness surrounding him. He began to question his choices.

"May I have the pleasure of knowing you better, Sophia?" Fausto asked, his voice softer.

Sophia smiled, "Only if you're willing to rediscover the man you once were.