Traits of Fiction Writing by Laura Heinke

Those Shoes

lauraheinke — 2020-09-08 15:41:02 UTC

-dialogue
-a lot of feelings/emotions
-font change
-beginning of the story matched the title
-happy ending
-emotions changed through the story
-learned a lesson

Harry the dirty dog/Kristine

2020-09-08 15:44:57 UTC

That in the being he did something and at the end it was useful

Emotional when they found the dog back

Good detail on what he did

What the dog don’t like and do like

Kayson/the dot

2020-09-08 15:46:11 UTC

-emotions
-FONT CHANGE
-She gets different ideas on making dots like BIG DOTS little dots colorful dots and dark dots

Bad case of stripes Logan

2020-09-08 15:47:49 UTC

1.Diolog
2.happy ending.

dot

2020-09-08 15:47:57 UTC

makes you want to do something fun

the dot

2020-09-08 15:48:11 UTC

-emotions

-diolog

by channing :D

Gianna.c/the dot

2020-09-08 15:49:44 UTC

A girl named Vashti has lots of fellings She is mad/angry surprise and happy.

and copys What the teacher says at the beginning of the story

the dot holden

2020-09-08 15:50:50 UTC

they made so at the end another person would do something like the main character. and that there were pictures so you under standed what was happening.

Goldy luck and the three pandas

2020-09-08 15:52:39 UTC

^emotions^
^happy ending^
^diolog^
^_mia_^
>^<

Goldy luck and the 3 pand

2020-09-08 15:52:56 UTC

Goldy luck and the 3 pand

2020-09-08 15:54:40 UTC

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2020-09-08 15:55:41 UTC

Godly luck and the 3 pandas

2020-09-08 15:56:01 UTC

Good spelling
emotions
happy ending
slimier to Godly lox and the 3 bears
Amara :3 :)

Piper

2020-09-08 15:56:19 UTC

Harry the dirty dog
(Emotions)
(Diolog)
(Happy ending)

Goldy luck and the three pandas, Lilly

2020-09-08 15:56:36 UTC

. The mom thought goldy had good luck but she didn’t
. She went to Mr and Mrs Chan’s house but they weren’t home
.She ate little Chan’s congee
.She sat in little Chan’s rocking chair
.Goldy slept in little Chan’s bed
. She got scared when they noticed and ran away
.Then she felt bad and helped them cook

2020-09-08 15:59:56 UTC

Piper Harry the dirty dog (Emotions) (Diolog) (Happy ending)

likes to put new emoitons

2020-09-08 16:01:20 UTC

they make it interesting they make it exciting

2020-09-08 16:02:04 UTC

2020-09-08 16:09:56 UTC

end it was useful Emotional when they found the dog back