https://padlet.com/jgard12/cvnvqjdeta7502j3 Feedback, response, and springboarding en-us 2022-02-03 17:24:19 UTC 2022-02-10 20:59:58 UTC hello@padlet.com chick_panther https://padlet.com/jgard12/cvnvqjdeta7502j3/wish/2028388675 2022-02-03 21:00:36 UTC https://padlet.com/jgard12/cvnvqjdeta7502j3/wish/2028388675 avoss91 https://padlet.com/jgard12/cvnvqjdeta7502j3/wish/2028413014 I really loved the first piece because I can connect with it (the family aspect of things), also because of the Frankenstien reference as well! I liked how you took that narrative and made it your own. I really liked the line "She lives!" despite all the rotten bits of life. The format also added emphasis to the poem which worked really well. ]]> 2022-02-03 21:21:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jgard12/cvnvqjdeta7502j3/wish/2028413014 chick_panther https://padlet.com/jgard12/cvnvqjdeta7502j3/wish/2028414432 I feel like I should write something here too. It’s weird sitting and saying nothing. I really had fun with this piece. The shortened lines were actually quite challenging because I’m generally a wordy person so I had to be really selective to get each line below 3-5 words (as is her style). ]]> 2022-02-03 21:22:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jgard12/cvnvqjdeta7502j3/wish/2028414432 avoss91 https://padlet.com/jgard12/cvnvqjdeta7502j3/wish/2028414584 Stitched back together at once.
Let me be,
This is not my wish.
I am a monster with rocks behind my back
Searching for my lover
My purpose
But I am empty handed.
-Take me back to the way I was]]> 2022-02-03 21:22:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jgard12/cvnvqjdeta7502j3/wish/2028414584 mbearden2 https://padlet.com/jgard12/cvnvqjdeta7502j3/wish/2028415322 I really like the structer of this. It's purposeful and feels natural. The Frankenstein reference is also artfully done. It would have been easy to use a hammer and beat this out, but it's done with delicasy restraint while still being a strong presense on the page. The only thing I suggest is adding the shape of lightening somewhere in the structiure. It's so present in the story, andi I think it needs to be on the page.]]> 2022-02-03 21:23:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jgard12/cvnvqjdeta7502j3/wish/2028415322 stephanieapaine https://padlet.com/jgard12/cvnvqjdeta7502j3/wish/2028416094 I really liked how you interpreted this story and implemented a different style in this poem. I especially liked the detail and personal aspects that you added to a well-known story. The formatting also added a lot of emphasis to this poem

]]> 2022-02-03 21:24:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jgard12/cvnvqjdeta7502j3/wish/2028416094 stephanieapaine https://padlet.com/jgard12/cvnvqjdeta7502j3/wish/2028418286 Reflecting on a life of trauma and finally taking a step back to realize that it was never your fault]]> 2022-02-03 21:26:07 UTC https://padlet.com/jgard12/cvnvqjdeta7502j3/wish/2028418286 mbearden2 https://padlet.com/jgard12/cvnvqjdeta7502j3/wish/2041180229 a collection
of rotten
bits.
Composting
death into fertility
How many more 
Will be born to feed death?]]> 2022-02-10 20:59:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jgard12/cvnvqjdeta7502j3/wish/2041180229