https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5 Elements? en-us 2017-10-24 11:56:56 UTC 2017-10-26 16:49:23 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086088 2017-10-24 16:39:25 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086088 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086134 Suspense. Im going to have a scene where a stalker is dressed in all white searches for a boy that he has been stalking and eventually finds him ]]> 2017-10-24 16:39:31 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086134 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086605 Suspense- I'm going to put a scene in where my character is walking in a super dark ally way and all of the sudden hears growling from one of the infected.

]]> 2017-10-24 16:40:29 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086605 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086610 suspense: my doors and windows open bring in the chill of the night.
the old house was not vary stable.
then I heard the floor boards creaked.]]> 2017-10-24 16:40:30 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086610 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086613 Characterization - Main character isn't close with family but when someone goes after them she saves them.]]> 2017-10-24 16:40:30 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086613 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086614 Suspense- i am going to have a scene in my story where my character is being followed and something happens...]]> 2017-10-24 16:40:30 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086614 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086617 Suspense- My characters are going to run and once they THINK its safe, they realize that someone is missing.]]> 2017-10-24 16:40:30 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086617 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086627 I could use suspense in my story by making it seems like something is coming out of no were and you don't know when it is.   (just like my mixtape)]]> 2017-10-24 16:40:31 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086627 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086630 Suspense: I'm going to have a scene where my characters he something in the water and then see something with claws and then they see red stuff in the water(Blood). But there is more than one.]]> 2017-10-24 16:40:32 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086630 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086633 Suspense: They don't know whether  they see a dead body or not, if it was even there to begin with and don't want to check in case it is. They run away and the body disappears so they never really know if it was there to begin with.]]> 2017-10-24 16:40:32 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086633 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086649 Suspense ~ I'm going to have my character move into a newly renovated house which is secretly haunted and have her suddenly wake up in the middle of the night to various sounds coming from her floorboards, attic, and walls.
 ]]> 2017-10-24 16:40:34 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086649 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086660 Suspense: I'm going to have a scene where I'm laying in bed home alone and the lights go out except one and then I see a shadow and he gets closer and multiplies ]]> 2017-10-24 16:40:35 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086660 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086698 Suspense - I'm going to have a group of friends walking in the rain and when they are working the see a shadow watching them.]]> 2017-10-24 16:40:40 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086698 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086730 Suspense - I'm going to have a scene where one of my characters starts to walk towards another character and crazy things start happening. ]]> 2017-10-24 16:40:46 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086730 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086825 suspense: one of my scenes will include my character will look through the window finding some guy outside but he cant see him when she looks away]]> 2017-10-24 16:40:55 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086825 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086831 suspense- My character is leaving the school and the door slams and the lights go out

]]> 2017-10-24 16:40:56 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086831 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086871 Suspense- i'm going to have a scene where the main character thinks somebody is watching her ]]> 2017-10-24 16:41:00 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200086871 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200087008
suspence- could have suspence in my story by making a scary scense and build it up

]]> 2017-10-24 16:41:10 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200087008 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200087312 suspense - kill off characters, add dark seen's. maybe kill the protagonist at the end.]]> 2017-10-24 16:41:40 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200087312 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200087532 Suspense - Have men pull in the driveway in a all black car and go to the front door and start banging

Characterization  -Have the boy in the house to lock all the doors and windows]]> 2017-10-24 16:42:04 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200087532 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200087719 Suspense-
I could add suspense by having my characters see a man walking in the distance and then they would look back and he wasn't there .]]> 2017-10-24 16:42:26 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200087719 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200087983 Both by using characterization as my beginning and start to use suspense as a scary scene ]]> 2017-10-24 16:42:58 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200087983 https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200088406 Suspense- the readers don't know if the dogs will die or not. The dogs are near death but something weird is happening. ]]> 2017-10-24 16:43:42 UTC https://padlet.com/rachel_whittemore/brainst_pd5/wish/200088406