Ava Google Sites Peer Feedback 2019 - 2020 by Ava Scott https://padlet.com/26ascott1/cux9h6865g9l Here, you can give me specific and valuable feedback on all of my writing pieces throughout the year! As you comment, please remember to be kind with your words. However, as you offer "Two Stars and a Wish," constructive criticism is certainly welcome! en-us 2019-12-05 15:13:04 UTC 2025-12-23 08:12:33 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f42f.png Ava S. 26yklieger https://padlet.com/26ascott1/cux9h6865g9l/wish/422187041
I like how in your story there was realistic dialogue and that needs to be in a story so good job. I also liked the cheetah metaphor, it was a very good one. for my wish is that you could do a spell check for the words because a few are not spelled correctly.]]> 2019-12-10 14:54:48 UTC https://padlet.com/26ascott1/cux9h6865g9l/wish/422187041 Story feedback 26kparchman https://padlet.com/26ascott1/cux9h6865g9l/wish/422260262 Ava I loved your story you had some great metaphors and it reminded me of my story. Another thing I really liked was how you really showed how cocky Emmie is it was really a great story. One thing I think you could improve on is your ending because it just says then I ran out to them. 

- Kaylee
]]> 2019-12-10 16:33:01 UTC https://padlet.com/26ascott1/cux9h6865g9l/wish/422260262 Story feedback - My Narrative Strong Theme 26mlatham https://padlet.com/26ascott1/cux9h6865g9l/wish/422262088 I really like the change in your character. From realizing it’s not about winning, but having fun. I really enjoyed the two antagonist. Aiden and Alexa. They really put the pressure on the basketball team. One thing I wish you answered was how does Emmie have the right to kick and add people off the team? If that question was answered it would have been a very good story,



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